I am a mentor/crtic. I can help you with your stories as I have experience in many genres. Do not hesitate to contact me asking to review stories. Here is some info that is important for you to know:

Number one: My schedule varies every day so don't be upset if I'm not on consistently

Number two: My timezone is Eastern or EST

Number three: I am comfortable with all genres and types. If it is anything specific then tell me what the story is about or what the show/book/movie is

Number four: I don't take rants or stories taht are poorly written and looks like there was no effort done on it. I am here to help you. Not help you write the entire story. The story must be at least one chapter long.

Note: I didn't write any stories on here yet

If you want to review a nearly complete work, I have a long Changeling story set in early Equestria, titled Age of Hunting. I'm on the last few chapters, and though I've had a lot of positive responses, I want a more critical eye to help me perfect what is about to come.

If you want something complete, Fighting to the Top is the first in a Sunset Shimmer short story series that I'm working on at the moment as well. I'd like more in depth criticism of it as I work on the third short story.

i have my stupid here look at crap i even wrote , no one gives a shit about my first story anyway . also dont juge me .link https://www.fimfiction.net/stories?content_rating=1 i dont care anymore about it what a pice of junk. even if i have delexia symdrom also dont correct me . also i know youll correct me anyway like im nonething . also this story took two days re-editing twice in one sitting im not re-editing it agian .
also i think i already wasted everyone time.