Name: Garnot
Title: Perihelion
Genre Tags: Slice of Life, Random

Reviewer: MidnightRambler
Status: Complete

Name: Pearple Prose
Title: Dystopian Circus
Genre Tags: Tragedy, Dark
Other Information You Wish To Share: Keep in mind that this story has humans in it, but there's no human tag for a reason. They're ultimately a small part of it.

Reviewer: Golden Vision
Status: Complete

Name: Stanku
Title: A Device for Divine
Tags: Adventure, Dark, Gore (a bit)
Special stuff I'd like the reviewer to focus on: I'm trying to get this one published in EqD, so I need all the help I can get. Comma missuse, prepositions, purple prose, spacing.

Reviewer: Golden Vision
Status: PM'd to author

Title: Our Dream Connection's
Name: Carter410
Tags: Romance, comedy, random, AU and human

Reviewer: cheesesauce
Status: Complete

Name: Leonidas701
Title: The Stallion in the Library
Genre Tags: Comedy. Slice Of Life. Alternate Universe
Other information you wish to share: Main character seems like a Mary Sue, but it is intentional for this far into the story

Reviewer: alexmagnet
Status: Complete

Name: theunderwolf
Title: With the white berets
Genre Tags: Adventure, Alternate universe, Comedy
Other information you wish to share: Story that i've been working on for a while and would appreciate some feedback and advice on. anything would help, thanks in advance!

Reviewer: Miss Dark Angel
Status: Complete

Name: KaliberxTavi
Title: If You Insist
Genre Tags: Comedy-Adventure-Human
Other information you wish to share: I have never written a story before and am looking for a second opinion to whether or not I should keep writing, or give up until I learn more about being a writer.

Reviewer: cheezesauce
Status: Complete

Name: Neko
Title: Pony of Interest: Names and Numbers
Genre Tags: Dark, Crossover, Adventure, Alternate Universe
Specific Request: La Barata
Other information you wish to share: Crossover with the TV series "Person of Interest." I am actually looking for negative feedback, so I know how to change and become better.

Reviewer: La Barata
Status: Story is unpublished, so link is unavailable. Presumed to be complete.

Name: Fenrisianbrony
Title: Swooping Pegasus
Genre Tags: Dark. Crossover. Adventure
Other information you wish to share: Last few chapters may be going through a rewrite.

Reviewer: ambion
Status: Complete

Name: PegasusMesa
Title: Fulfilling
Genre Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Romance
Other information you wish to share: I feel like I've got a handle on the technical issues, like grammar and spelling. The issue is that I'm not certain about the content itself. Thank you for the review!
By the way, don't pay attention to what Celestia writes in the foreword. She has no idea what she's talking about.

Reviewer: Scribblestick
Status: Complete

Name: Frission
Title: Adjacency
Genre Tags: Adventure
Other Information: Rated Teen for potential conflicts later in the story, but otherwise is staying close to Everyone. I may downgrade this tag if I end up not making use of it, but I felt it was better to err on the side of caution.

Reviewer: MidnightRambler
Status: Complete

Name: AwkwardTaco
Title: Idle Curiosity
Genre Tags: Human, Adventure, Dark, [(Unofficial Tag on Site) Science Fiction]
Other information you wish to share: Original universe story for the Humans. I have been told on occasion that my references to other Science Fiction works make it confusing.

Reviewer: kalash93
Status: Complete

Name: Avatar of Madness
Title: Lee the Legend Crashes into Equestria
Genre Tags: Dark, Comedy, Random, Adventure, Human
Other information you wish to share: just know that, despite the character of the human, this is not a trollfic. You'll be able to tell, though.

Reviewer: Golden Vision
Status: Complete

Name: Lumadous
Title: Stories of the Fairy Pony
Genre Tags: Comedy, Slice of Life, Adventure
Other information you wish to share: Story is supposed to be light hearted, small amounts of Twilight being a mad scientist, as in she'll want to study the fairies as if they weren't ponies(does not last long)
Story has not been added to the sight yet, I want to get a few chapters done before submitting them so they will all be on Google docs

Reviewer: Simon_oSullivan
Status: Complete (GDoc comments)

Name: Dog Days of Hunter
Title: Blackbird
Genre Tags: Romance, Dark, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Human, Anthro
Other: I should also mention that this is the second book in a soon-to-be-completed trilogy.

Reviewer: ChromeMyriad
Status: Complete

Name: CHeighlund
Title: Broken Hearted
Genre Tags: Dark
Other information you wish to share: I am considering trying to post this to EqD; I would appreciate some assistance in polishing it up prior to that so as to maximize my chances of acceptance. In my eyes that means mostly grammatical issues, but I recognize that this may be because most of those rejections I personally know of (I have not submitted to them before) were for grammatical problems. Any other issues which may show are things I probably need to know about, but simply do not yet recognize the need for; as such, I would request that those be brought to light as well.

Reviewer: Pascoite
Status: Complete

Name: A sentient hat
Title: Charon
Tags: Dark, Sad, Human

Reviewer: cheezesauce
Status: Complete

Name: Random Gamer
Title: Living Flame
Genre: Dark
Other: Twilight finds an old spellbook and unleashes evil upon Equestria. I have no special requests.

Reviewer: Corejo
Status: Complete

Name: Cpl_Chaos
Title: Legionnaire
Genre Tags: Human, AU, Adventure, Mature, Romance, Gore
Other information you wish to share: Hope you enjoy, and if you don't, please let me know so that I can improve it.

Reviewer: kalash93
Status: Complete

Name: Plebeian
Title: Wayfarer
Genre Tags: Romance, Adventure, Sad
Other: Your assistance is appreciated!

Reviewer: ChromeMyriad
Status: Complete

Name: ApocalypseTankPony-Vera
Title: Drop.
Genre Tags: Sad, Tragedy, Dark.
Other information you wish to share: If whomever writes out my review feels free to include a note on anything, I would hope that it would be something of substance.

Reviewer: Burraku_Pansa
Status: Complete

Name: RazgrizS57
Title: The Only One In Color
Genre Tags: Sad
Other information you wish to share: This story took too long to write, spanning the course of more months than I care to admit. As such, the writing style used may have evolved over the course of the story in a way that was not intended. I consciously tried to compensate in an effort to make it have the appearance of being written within, say, a single month—in order to make the writing style appear consistent. While not to necessarily impose this on the reviewer, as I imagine looking at the technical aspects of a story could potentially detract from the story itself, I would appreciate an indication of some sort as to how consistent the writing style was. However, the reviewer should not feel obligated to do so. Consider it a side mission, one that's completely optional, where you might get a nifty little trophy for doing so. Like a metaphysical point that has no actual meaning. Or a pony.

Reviewer: ambion
Status: Complete

Name: RazgrizS57
Title: The Fallacy Of Epiphany
Genre Tags: Slice of Life
Specific Request (if any): None, but this might appeal the most to a reviewer who really likes dissecting a story for its themes, metaphors, and symbols.
Other information you wish to share: I'm pretty sure this story has more layered metaphors and symbols than even I intended. Bonus points to the reviewer for counting all that they can.

Reviewer: Pascoite
Status: Complete

Name: A sentient hat
Title: Of Ice and Empires
Tags: Dark, Adventure, Romance, Alt Universe
Specific requests: La Barata

Reviewer: La Barata
Status: Accepted but not yet complete.

Name: Insula Sol
Title: There is Racquetball in Heaven!
Genre Tags: Crossover, Slice of Life, Random, Human
Other information you wish to share: The TV this story is crossover with is "Psych", by means of the character Mary Lightly who appeared in three episodes of "Psych". I believe that no prior knowledge of Psych is needed to read and understand this story. It is also my first slice of life story.

Reviewer: MidnightRambler
Status: Complete

Author: Afalstein
Title: Caramel's Day
Genre Tags: Slice of Life, Mystery
Other information/Synopsis: Caramel. The most forgetful and forgetable pony, a harmless ladies man who always seems to be in the background. But as the day wears on, the question speedily becomes: Who exactly is Caramel, and why does he have so many lookalikes?

I want to know if the fic keeps your interest or if it gets too repetitive and predictable.

I submitted this story to Umbra also, but I'd like your input, if you're still giving it. (I earlier tried to submit it to someone who wasn't giving out reviews anymore).

Reviewer: Corejo
Status: Complete (review in the form of GDocs comments)

Name: ChromeMyriad
Title: Lunar Gravity
Genre Tags: Romance, Comedy
Other information you wish to share: This submission is a story that I've had reviewed rather extensively by others, but they have found few errors. I am sending it to you in the hopes that you can point out where my writing needs to go next to improve.

Reviewer: Golden Vision
Status: Complete

Name: waterpear
Title: Pinkie Pie Throws an Alicorn Party
Genre Tags: Comedy

Reviewer: Simon_oSullivan
Status: Complete

Name: Twinkleshine
Title: La Mer
Genre Tags: Adventure
Other Information: This is my first time writing creatively, so feel free to tear it apart. Also, would you mind sending it to me in PM form? It's a lot easier to share it with my pre-readers that way.

Reviewer: Golven Vision
Status: Complete (PM'd to author)

Name: SpitFlame
Title: Elements of Honor
Genre Tags: Tragedy, Comedy, Crossover, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Human
Other Information: In the review, please provide a list with pros and cons if possible. Just good luck with the review.

Reviewer: Lord Sunder
Status: Complete (On-story comment was deleted by author)

Name: AbbaieTwinkle
Title: Twilight's Sparkle
Genre Tags: Romance, Adventure
Other Information: Please read the chapters and tell me if I should fix anything. Chapter 2 is not a complete finish, but I would like you to read over it so I can fix any mistakes. Thanks alot!

Reviewer: Winter Storm
Status: Complete

Name: JumpingShinyFrogs
Title: Sometimes We Do Wrong to Do Right
Genre Tags: Adventure, Alternate Universe
Other Information: N/A

Reviewer: Professor Plum
Status: Complete

Name: SecretPerson
Title: Captured by a Lonely Dragon
Genre Tags: Slice of Life
Other Information: I can take more harsher criticisms, so don;t be afraid to throw a more straight forward or somewhat harsh critic at me.

Reviewer: Pascoite
Status: Complete

Name: GraceFu
Title: Twilight Sparkle Finds a Magic Pickle
Genre Tags: Comedy, Slice of Life
Other Information: N/A

Reviewer: FloydienSlip
Status: Complete

Author: Scarheart76
Title: My Little Chryssie
Genre Tags: Sad, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Human
Other Information: As is, the story is currently unedited save by what efforts the author has done. There has been an editor asked to go over the story but no pre-reading was done to spot any inconsistencies with the story itself. As of yet, there has been no editing to this point beyond what has been stated. I don't mind criticism, I even welcome it. I'm looking to learn from my mistakes from this review and apply what I learn to future stories to be written or currently underway. I have other stories I would like reviewed (I feel they need some heavy pre-reading and possibly a re-write, but I digress), but I want this particular story done as I enjoyed writing it immensely. The story is along the same lines as My Little Dashie and I've already gotten quite a few positive comments, but there's always, always room for improvement.

Thank you for reading this and your consideration.

~Scarheart76

Reviewer: Starman Ghost
Status: Complete

Author: ZaleAcon
Title: An Epic for Gilgamesh
Genre Tags: Dark, Comedy, Crossover, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Human
Other Information: This story is a crossover with Final Fantasy V, but I'm attempting to appeal to people who have not played it before, too. That being said, however, any problems or complaints that you have would be fantastic. And please do not hold back on the criticism, either, because I want your complete opinion on how I can improve this story as a whole.

Note that the rating is for a moderate amount of implied gore, but nothing explicit is shown as of yet.

Reviewer: Lord Sunder
Status: Complete

Author: King of Thieves
Title: Fallout: Equestria - Chronicles of Seaddle
Genre Tags: Dark, Crossover, Adventure
Other Information: N/A

Reviewer: IncoherentOrange
Status: Complete

Author: rcmgamer218
Title: My Little Pony: The Redemption of the Dragon Empire
Genre Tags: Romance, Sad, Dark, Adventure
Other Information: I want someone who's willing to help me work with me to help my plot, to avoid making Mary Sues/Gary Stu's, and keep plot holes to a minimum, and basically a general consensus if my story is worth reading.

Reviewer: FoughtDragon01
Status: Complete

Author: The King of Hearts
Title: P.O.N.Y.: Police Operative and Nonpareil Youths
Genre Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Human
Other Information: N/A

Reviewer: IncoherentOrange
Status: Complete

Author: theboyconnor
Title: My Little Porno: Fluffing is Magic
Genre Tags: Sad, Slice of Life
Other Information: N/A

Reviewer: Plebeian
Status: Complete

Author: SilentHuntsman
Title: Apocalyptic Beauty
Genre Tags: Adventure
Other Information: I'd prefer if it were focused more on the characters and overall plot than anything else, but feel free to rant about my awful delivery of the story too.

Reviewer: Kierkegaard.
Status: Story was removed after the review was posted, presumably to follow the review's advice and rewrite

Author: ChromeMyriad
Title: Remedial Lessons
Genre Tags: Random, Slice of Life
Other Information: I've edited this pretty heavily, but I want to know if anything feels strange or areas where I need improvement.

Reviewer: Golden Vision
Status: Complete (Given via PM)

Author: Cerurlean Voice
Title: Keeper of the Crystal Heart
Genre Tags: Adventure, Alternate Universe
Other Information: This is a sequel to my story These Flowers Never Bloom. As it is set in the same universe, Keeper has a beginning that requires one to have some isolated, specific knowledge of certain events in Flowers. For this reason, I have supplied a brief appendix in the story description detailing all important past events information (attached to the end of Flowers, easily referable). I am aware that this may take some time, so I'll be patient.

Reviewer: Tired Old Man
Status: Complete

Author: Bad_Seed_72
Title: Anxiety
Genre Tags: Sad, Dark, Slice of Life
Other Information: Please pull no punches. I am looking for as much constructive feedback on my stories as I can get. Thank you!!

Reviewer: ChromeMyriad
Status: Complete

Name: AdamThePony
Title: Hand in Hoof
Genre Tags: Dark, Comedy, Adventure, Human
Other information you wish to share/specific needs: Structural and pacing advice, potential side plots.

Reviewer: IncoherentOrange
Status: Complete

Name: Bad_Seed_72
Title: Big Horseshoes
Genre Tags: Slice Of Life
Other Info: Please pull no punches. I am looking for as much constructive feedback on my stories as I can get. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Pascoite
Status: Complete

Name: Bad_Seed_72
Title: A Night On Deck
Genre Tags: Slice Of Life
Other Info: Please pull no punches. I am looking for as much constructive feedback on my stories as I can get. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Plebeian
Status: Complete

Name: Syeekoh
Title: Pony Drug Party
Genre Tags: Slice Of Life, Comedy

Reviewer: alexmagnet
Status: Complete

Name: Comet Burst
Title: A Narrow Scope
Genre Tags: Random, Slice of Life
Specific Reviewer Request (if any): Golden Vision
Other information you wish to share/specific needs: Just want a good, trustworthy review. Thank you for considering this.

Reviewer: Golden Vision
Status: Complete

Name: Twilight Mercer
Title: Rise of the Symbiotes
Genre Tags: Dark, Crossover, Alternate Universe
Specific Reviewer Request (if any): Lord Sunder

Reviewer: Lord Sunder
Status: Complete (The rewrite of the story wiped the old comments, including the review)