Undertales of Friendship

by ngrey651


The Determined Apple

Undertales of Friendship:
The Determined Apple


Despite how creepy he looked, Endogeny, one of the Amalgamates, was sure a lot of fun to be around. The combination of several dog monsters into one when a determination experiment went wrong, he was that much more weird but that much more soft and that much more cuddly. Apple Bloom giggled as the being sucked on her head a little, its equivalent of a face lick.

"Hey, that tickles!" She giggled Applejack nearby, smiling. Her own little pooch barked happily at a new playmate, and nearby Alphys only smiled. The Amalgamates were usually in a section of Ponyville Castle that was all their own, but they loved to visit other places. At first it was a bit of a hard time getting them to fit in, but thanks to efforts by Frisk, Starlight, Chrysalis, and even Chara and Asriel, they were big hits, especially with some of the little foals who loved how cool they looked. (Especially Nightmare Moon's number one fan, Littlepip). Today they had come to Sweet Apple Acres. Applebuck season was just around the corner and one of them, Death Bird, had suggested with her writing that maybe they could help. After seeing how the Cutie Mark Crusaders took to them, it was no trouble convincing Applejack.

"So, this Amalga-whatawhosit was made when monsters got too much o the determination?" Applejack asked, serving the dino-like scientist another piece of pie.

"Yeah... it was my attempt to break the barrier without having to take human souls... but it failed. Despite it all however, thanks to Frisk they are all happy. Yeah they may be different looking, but still are all friendly." She smiled as Endogeny yawned, a sweet smelling happiness froth coming from its orifice, laying down on some straw, Applejack’s pup laying down beside it happily, Apple Bloom stroking its belly.

"Well I reckon it is defiantly friendly. Look a likin to my pup almost immediately, and she is a good judge o character." AJ looked outside at another of the visiting Amalgamtes, a scary looking one called Lemon Bread, who had a huge, hungry mouth. But the CMC still were playing with it, letting the other two members try and toss apples in its mouth, Big Mac bucking a couple in.

Thisisfunthisisfunthisisfunthisisfun!" The mishmash of creatures said, laughing as if it was a whole audience onto itself. Alphys could only smile with pride as she saw it.

"You sure taught those three well." Alphys said, tearing up just a little.

"Eh, more like they taught me, buckaroo." AJ said, putting  ahoof over Alphys. "They taught me that y’all cannot judge cept what's inside." She placed a hoof on Aplhys' heart. Just then, Alphys cell rang.

"h-h-h-ello?" She said. But the voice she heard was that of the most freaky of the Amalgamates, Memoryhead, who had to use the phone to speak.

"SOMEONE IS COMING. THEY LOOK BAD."

"Where are you?" Alphys asked, finally spotting the floating ghostlike figures, the shape of them resembling skulls mixed with Gaster's old face. There was three of them, and they were floating about the window that looked out at the orchard. Applejack looked out, and what she saw made her fume.

"Oh no... not them again." She snorted. Alphys was confused.

"A-a-a-Applejack?" Alphys said.

"Remember what I said bout judging a book by the cover?" AJ replied, pointing out the window. Outside in a steam powered vehicle was a pair of handsome looking stallions with whicker hats and candy striped shirts, making them look like members to a barber shop quartet. In truth it was Flam and Flam, brothers who were a pair of fast talking and fast scheming salesponies.

"There is an example of a bad apple in the barrel hidden behind a good appearance." Aj trotted out angrily, watching as Flim and Flam stopped in front of her home. "What in tarnation are you two carpetbaggers doin here?!"

"Easy easy eeeeeasy, Miss Applesnack!" Said the driver, a rather dapper looking cream colored pony.

"APPLEJACK!"

"Whatever.... point is, we got us a little something that will knock your hat off! Oh brother Flim?" Said the other brother, who looked like the first but also had a stylized mustache, making him look a little bit of a mix of dapper and sinister.

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"And I don't have a thing against mustaches!" Edward said, breaking the forth wall again. Better let Saiyan Brony know.

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"RRRRRRRRRRRRight you are, Brother Flam!" The first said, leaping out of his seat and landing square on his hooves after a triple somersault. From his hat he then produced a single jar, filled with apple seeds.

"What in tarnation...seeds?" Applejack said with a raised eyebrow.

"Wrong!" Flim said. "The most spectacular seeds you ever did seed! One of these is guaranteed to plant a tree that will produce apples, not in months, not in weeks, not even in days... but in seconds!"

"Yer full of cow chips if y’all think I believe that story." Applejack said. But the two brothers gave an evil grin.

"Oh let us demonstrate." The two brothers planted one of the seeds right in front of Applejack, and added some water. And then.... up from the ground sprouted a massive tree, with over three dozen of the biggest, ripest, juices apples Applejack had ever seen on it! Her hat fell off as she looked up at it, in utter shock.

"Well I'll be a sock eyed mule!.... no offense."

"None taken." Random mule said off to her side.

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"I promise my only reference to my abandoned MLP series! I swear! Besides everyone likes random mule right? RIGHT?"

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Flim and Flam smiled, plucking one. "Try a bite for yourself little lady!" Flim said. Applejack took it, and took a bite. She moaned at how crisp it was, and how juicy.  It was... it was....

IT WAS DELICIOUS!

"Well I'll be.... I never thought Ah would see the day!" She stared at the apple tree. "But still... How'd y’all do it?"

"Ohhhh, bit of magic that we found. Will revolutionize the apple industry! And we are willing to share the profits on one condition." Flam said, stroking his mustache. Applejack raised an eyebrow.

"And what's that?" She finally said, everyone else gathering around her, even the Amalgamates.

"Simple. WE give 50% of the profit... but YOU give 50% of the farm to us!"

Everyone gasped. After a moment of silence, Big Macintosh spoke up, glaring and speaking even lower than usual.

"NOPE."

The two brothers shrugged. "Your funeral. We already know you depend on the sales this week to keep the farm running... but if someone beets you to market and makes FULL QUOTA?"

Flim smiled as Flam spoke, holding up the rest of the seeds. Everyone knew what they were going to do as they boarded their vehicle.

"Oh, and by the way, since you won't let us use your land for this, we will use some of the unowned land for it. Farewell Applesnack, and enjoy your final days on the farm before we BUY it!" The two brothers laughed as they drove off. Applejack staring in a mix of fury and shock. She knew the apples she had needed to sell to maintain the ownership of the farm. If someone else beat them to it, they could lose it by Ponyville law. But she also knew, sadly, they could pull it off. Those trees grew instantly, plus they had those fancy mechanical doohickeys to help them. That meant...

"youwontloseyouwontloseyouwontloseyouwontloseyouwontlose" Lemon Bread said, slinking up and placing a single beefy hoof on her, offering comfort.

"Thanks, but how can I..."

"Relax!" Apple Bloom said, standing on the back of Endogeny. "We can round up some friends from town, and together we can have this orchard picked in no time!"

"wdsfwgbsvyuwvsbiuefhwe." Reaper Bird said, nodding in agreement. Aphys cell rang, and when answered came that evil sounding voice again, the three heads floating about.

"COUNT ON US TOO. WE WILL JOIN YOUR PARTY. CALL FOR HELP.... AND EVERYONE CAME!"

Applejack got what the creatures meant. She smiled atr her friends and family, then stood firm.

"Let's get to it then! Alphys, you study this dang gum tree and see how they can do what they did. Apple Bloom, you take Doggy here and head into town, round up our friends! I'll take the rest here and get started. We got a HUGE crop this year, and if we wanna make quota the first day we gotta pick them all before sun up!"

Everyone cheered, Endogeny letting out a howl that mixed with the sound of a half dozen others all in one being. They were in it together!

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That night, Applejack led the effort to pick every last apple before sun up. She smiled as she bucked each tree alongside her brother, letting the Crusaders gather them. In another section, Frisk, Chara, and Sans formed another team, Sans using his levitation to shoot Chara at the apples, the expert knife wielder using his skills to expertly cut each apple free, Frisk using his acrobatic skills to catch each one, and once the baskets were full, Asriel used his Death God mode and sent them onto another cart.. The Amalgamates also chipped in, Endogeny carrying the apples by the barrel to gathering stations where they could be taken to market when it opened, while Reaper Bird and Lemon Bread used their powers to free the apples, Lemon Bread blasting them with eye beams while Reaper Bird had the butterfly like bullets he shot pull each apple off, with them landing expertly in big barrels maintained by the memory heads and their downright freaky powers.

All the while, Alphys and Twilight were studying the tree and its special apples while Flutterhsy and Rarity brought everyone refreshments to help keep them full of energy, refreshments made by Toriel, Muffet, and Granny Smith. Finally, Papyrus and Rainbow Dash moved from location to location, helping where was needed. Despite being a lot of hard work, Applejack smiled with pride as all her friends and family, old and new, worked as one to get the job done.

Apple Bloom held a bucket up with Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, smiling happily as the apples fell into the waiting bucket, turning to grin at her friends. “This’ll be a cinch!” She remarked, her brother walking away from the tree he’d bucked…not noticing the tree was beginning to crack. And crack…

A moment later it flopped down, the tree limbs BARELY missing the Crusaders as they gaped, dropping the bucket squarely on the ground as they looked down at the tree, Big Mac racing over. “Y’all alright?” he asked, eyes wide with shock.

“…y-yep.” Apple Bloom said, wiping her brow. “PHEW. That was real close! Dunno how it missed…”

"How y’all doin!?" She then heard her sister call to each section.

"Almost done here!" Chara called. "just four tree left in this section!"

"THE AMALGAMATES ARE ALL DONE! JUST HAULING THE REST NOW, NYEH HEH HEH!!!" Papyrus called out, he and Rainbow Dash bringing the last buckets with the help of the freakish but wonderful monsters.

"I got a few left here, but we can take a quick break for some fresh pie." She smiled as her friends came over, tearing up inside. "Ah cannot thank y’all enuff for this."

"heh, no biggie." Sans said, petting the cowpony. "an apple a day keeps the con men away, right?"

"YEAH, ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY ARE PICKED BY THE GREAT PAPYRUS!" The skeleton royal guard said proudly.

"I agree." Toriel said, she and Fluttershy and Rarity bringing out several large trays of food, Muffet and Granny Smith behind. "You have all done very well, and deserve a hearty reward."

The group smiled, sat at a massive table, and dug in together as friends and family. Even the Amalgamtes, who some might think horrifying, were welcome with open hooves and arms, enjoying a job well done.

That was why what happened the next day was such a terrible blow.

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In good spirits and with a song in her heart, Applejack led the cart train that carried the massive apple delivery to market. But as they got there, they were met with a terrible sight.

Flim and Flam were there already, with a delivery of apples that matched hers apple for apple. The buyer for the market, who also was heading up the first ever apple celebration, was delighted with such a big order.

"Well you two," She heard the buyer say, "With this your full quota is met! We will get these apples put out and made into treats right away, and you should have your bits this afternoon. I guess you were right to say that you were going to replace Sweet Apple Acres."

Applejack was wide eyed and heartbroken on hearing that. She and her friends and family worked so hard...

For nothing.

Her head sunk and she began to sob. Big Mac came over to her, letting her cry, holding her sister. "It isn't fair!" She finally said. "Those two use dishonest methods to get a crop while we worked all night... and... .and... and they BEAT us!"

"Eeeyup." Big Mac agreed softly, trying to hide his broken heart as well. Behind them sat Apple Bloom in one of the cartas, as well as the many who helped work on getting those apples. It felt worthless now, like everything had been for nothing.

"Well! Nice to see you all on this fine morning!" Flim said, walking over and seeing the crop. "But it looks like the best man won Applejack. And you know what that means!"

Applejack nodded. "Yeah, Ah know." She said. "You won." She grumbled.

"Eh, don't be too hard on yourself, you gave it the old college try." Flam said, walking over. "And if it is any consolation, You sure got a HUGE crop with your friends." He smiled deviously at his brother. "ALMOST as much as what we brothers did with our machine last night." Laughing, they left, Applejack finally throwing the hat from her head and about to stomp it... when....

"APPLEJACK!!!! APPLEJACK! COME QUICK!" Twilight called. Applejack looked to the others.

"Stay with the apples." She told them all, however a curious Frisk and Chara tagged along, wanting to help. And as they reached the apple farm, they saw a truly frightening sight.

There, where the tree had grown yesterday were Alphys and Twilight, and they were pointing out that the tree...WAS MELTING.

"What in tarnation?!" Applejack said. "Isn't that..."

"Yes." Alphys said, tapping his claws together. "This tree was made solely by magic... or so I thought. It was given a little... boost to make sure it grew fast and grew well."

Twilight nodded. He led Applejack to a microscope, under which was a piece of one of the FlimFlam apples. as Applejack looked, she saw the cells breaking apart, torn from the inside by another force, then combining in new, creepy ways.

"What in.... what was that?!"

Alphys sighed. "Determination." He looked to the tree, ow almost a puddle. "This tree was made completely by magic, and injected with determination... determination someone may have stolen from my lab."

Chara spoke up. "Determination?! Like.... like what was used to..."

Alphys nodded, but Twilight was confused. "How did they have raw determination?"

Alphys gulped. This would be another dark thing to explain. "Well....you see, When the six kids were being killed, and their souls taken all those years ago, I had the idea that their raw determination could be used to keep monster souls intact. It would allow those who had 'fallen down' to have a maintained soul, allowing them to be harvested and their souls used to set us free. They agreed of their own free will to the experiment.

"But... something went wrong. Instead of making the souls stronger it resurrected the monsters. Or so we thought."

Applejack, who knew the rest from yesterday, spoke up. "The Amalgamates!"

"Right." Alphys continued. "It took several combined monster souls to be able to contain all that determination, resulting in them. But... there is another issue." Alphys looked at Frisk and Chara. "And you both know what I mean."

Frisk nodded. "Flowey... your first experiment."

Twilight was wide eyed. "That was how Asriel was able to stay as Flowey?! Alive and without a soul?!"

Alphys nodded. "The hope was to make a vessel that could hold souls and go through he barrier. But instead it harnessed Asriel's remnants."

Chara nodded. "And since he had absorbed my soul prior.... it allowed a portion of his memories to exist."

Alphys nodded. "Right again. A small portion true, which is why you are able to be alive now. But enough to keep the memories and..."

"WAIT A SEC!" Applejack interjected. "What about if there was no former SOUL.... the apples... what will they do?!"

The group soon got its answer as they looked back to the tree. In its place now stood several small red apple creatures with stems for legs and arms, and two freakish eyes, s well as a maw that opened to the core, dripping juice. They smiled with mischief at the group.

"Uh oh...."

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Back at the buyer, No one had noticed that the apples were melting together, the buyer calculating the total amount he would pay them later. "I do believe this much is almost enough, if not more than enough, to buy out Sweet Apple Acres!"

The two brothers gave each other a hoofbump. "Well done brother mine! Soon the acres will be all ours, and with our new apples, we will be richer than the Princesses!"

Flam nodded to Flim. "Right you are! Soon everyone in Equestria and beyond will be lining up for our FlimFlam apples!" The brothers laughed, already talking bout how they would remodel Sweet Apple Acres, both unaware of the form rising behind them.

"Well, that should..... oh..... my...." The owner said, as he turned and saw the shadowy form. The brothers were confused, even as they saw the owner back away slowly... then run out the door, screeching in pure terror. Curious, the two brothers turned around.

There behind them was a massive red apple, with big red eyes and a enormous mouth like a scary pumpkin, with massive tree limbs extending from it ending in hands and hooves. The giant Applegamate roared, the two brothers backing away.

"Uhhhhh... Flim... those vials you took from the lab.. how much did you soak into those seeds we stole from Sweet Apple Acres?" Flam said, shaking.

"Ummmm.... all six vials." Flim replied. "I think I overdid it Flam, and this makes it a good time to beat a retreat!"

"Right you are Flim! Grab the contract of sale and let's gooooooooooaaaaahhhhhhhhhHHHHHH!!!!!" The two eeped as they were lifted into he air by the being, the form giving a deep, evil laugh, glaring with a spike mouthed grin and two red apple eyes.

"I... don't like the way he is looking at us Flim!"

"I don't like the way he is SMILING at us Flam!" The two looked at one another, and spoke out in a clam, reasonable matter for the situation.

"SOMEONE HEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!"

The Applegamate laughed as it lifted the two up, but turned as the main door to the delivery center was bucked open. There was Applejack, alongside her friends, the Mane six.

"Hey ya overgrown apple pie! Put those two down."

The apple blinked, looked at the two, then back at Applejack.

"I said DOWN!" She repeated, the Applegamate wide eyed. It shrugged and set the two one of the now mostly empty baskets, only sticky residue inside.

"Thats b-"

WHAM! The apple smacked Applejack away with incredible force, sending her flying through the air. For a moment it looked like she was going to land hard on the ground before, almost as if SHOVED, one of the wading pools slid over across the ground, and she plopped right inside, with a loud SPA-LOOOSH. She got up, coughing, giving a sigh.

"Oh now ya did it." She said. The Applegamate walked out, looking about. After a moment it lifted his hands and fired several apples from the ends of them. But as they hit the ground, they form more like the tiny versions of the Applegamate, similar to what Applejack and her friends had squashed before.

"Oh come on, they can do that?!" Applejack said. She watched as Fluttershy approached one....

And hugged it?

"Uhhh...Fluttershy?"

The others giggled and cheered, Applejack now totally confused. But a cry from Frisk got her attention.

"It's heading for Sugarcube Corner!!!!" He called. Applejack was wide eyed. If that thing saw the apple pies inside, it would tear the place apart...and everything inside with it!"

"Chara, Asriel, Rainbow Dash, let's go!" Applejack said, letting the others take care of keeping everyone safe. The four of them were the fastest, and most capable fighters.

They had to stop the Applegamate!

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As the being closed in on the bakery, the Cakes watched with fear…all but the babies, who cheered and giggled.

"Oh no, this is retribution for all those apple pies we baked!" Mr. Cake said.

"I swear, I'll never eat another apple as long as I LIVE!" Mrs. Cake shouted. Oddly, when the creature heard that...it seemed to get madder, fuming visibly.

"Hold it right there!"

The creature turned, seeing Chara, his True Knife in hand. "I don't wanna use this, but if you take one more step closer I will!"

Frisk stood by Chara, also ready to fight if need be, both beside their pony friends. The apple turned to face them, roared, and charged.

"Watch it!' Applejack called, the four splitting up to dodge. Rainbow Dash tried to slam into it from the air, but was pelted with a maniacal apple, landing with a crash, the apple still in her mouth, making her look slightly like a piggy.

Muffet popped her head from out of her diner, eyes wide. “Something wonderful is happening!” She proclaimed before seeing the immense apple, cringing. “…EEP.” She gasped out, quickly diving back inside and pulling out a metal colander, putting it on her head as she turned to her fellow spiders. “I always knew this day would come! OUR FOOD IS FIGHTING BACK. We’ve got Nightmare Scenario, fellow spiders!”

“Batten down the hatches!” The spiders all cried out, immediately racing to barricade the doors.

"Oh NOW you did it!" Chara said, charging and ready to swing the blade. He had to be careful not to kill the being, so he aimed for an arm. His aim was true, as it came off with considerable ease.

"Yeee hah! Nice one Chara!" Applejack called, Chara landing and beaming with pride. But as he turned, he saw the old arm melt away... and a new one grow out in its place.

"Of course it can do that." Chara groaned. Applejack sighed.

"We will have to restrain it somehow before it tears apart the town!" She looked about for anything that might hold the giant apple. She suddenly smiled, seeing the large tank of water set up for bobbing for apples.

"I got it! Frisk, you distract it, Rainbow, you and I got to buck that thing into the water tank!"

Rainbow, still dizzy, finally nodded as Frisk maneuvered around the Applegamate. It tried to grab Frisk a few times, even tried to blast it with one of its apples, but Chara arrived just in time to cut it in two. Working together the two lured the apple into perfect bucking position.

"Alright Rainbow, give it all you got!"

The two mares snuck up behind the apple and with all their strength bucked him into the air. The being screamed as it flew up slightly, landing perfectly in the water tank. Since it could float, it was unable to move about with any effort. The town cheered as the apple was restrained. Applejack smiled as she approached.

"Alright you, now you can't tear down Sugarcube Corner."

The apple blinked and spoke with a definitive Pinkie Pie voice, making everyone snicker as it.. .she?....spoke.

"Tear it down? Silly Willy, I was trying to make a pie!"

Everyone laughed as it spoke, Applejack raising an eyebrow. "Whaaaa? But...."

"You tasted one of my apples, and you loved it! Plus you took care of that orchard sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo well, I just wanted to do something to thank you!"

"What in tarna.... Wait a moment... those seeds…where did they come from?" Applejack inquired.

"From your storeroom silly willy?"

Applejack went wide eyed, suddenly spotting a tiphoofing pair of crooks, FLim and Flam. But they didn't get far as Sans levitated them up.

"oh you two are done... horsing around."

Flim and Flam gulped. "Oh brother... I think we are in for a bad time."

"I think your right..."

Sans looked over at Applejack and the smiling Applegamate. "shall I send these two flying CON-AIR, AJ?"

Applehjack hmmed. "No.... I think I have a better idea." She turned to the Applegamate. "Now I know why Fluttershy was hugging those smaller versions of you... you don't wanna hurt us at all do you?"

The applegamate smiled. "Why? You make so many of us! I wish we could give more than just a few apples every crop as thanks for caring for our orchard!"

Muffet popped her head out of the window of her diner, eyes widening. “…something wonderful is happening again!” She realized.

Applejack smiled. "I think I get it.. .you weren't gonna destroy the bakery.. .you were gonna be a part of a pie!"

Chara bleched. "Uh, look, I know I’ve got a dark sense of humor…but I don't think I could eat a talking FRUIT."

“Speak for yourself.” Muffet giggled before an apple soared through the air, whacking her on the head and plopping her onto the floor of her diner. “OW!

Frisked hmmed. "Yeah I kinda agree with Chara...but there must be something we can... hey! I got an idea!" Everyone turned to Frisk as he spoke. “Okay, here’s what we’ll do…”

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That afternoon, as the Apple festival began, Applejack got the payment for her massive crop, and everyone set to making the best apple dishes ever! Applejack smiled as the rides and games were in full swing... including a new one run by Sans.

"try your luck?" He asked, the two brothers sitting on benches behind him suspended above a big tub of applesauce. Applejack grinned menacingly at them.

"Now now... Applesnack, we are only buisnessmen!" Flim said. "And we are reasonable... we can make a deal!"

Applejack smiled, as Sans set up a ball, Applejack turning around. "I got jus one thing ta say ta you two."

The two brothers eeped as she bucked the ball right into the target, the duo falling into the applesauce with a massive splash.

"GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET DUNKED ON!"        

Sans gave a thumbs up, winking. "classic."

Nearby, Toriel smiled as she and Granny Smith served some fresh pies, the new apple festival mascot nearby using his ability to make little apple buddies to make a little hunt and catch game for the foals.

"I do believe the Applegamate is going to be a very happy monster." Toriel said happily. "It would be a shame to remove his determination."

Nearby, Alphys, who was eating a caramel apple, nodded. "I agree Your m... I mean Toriel. Besides, the Applegamate now is the perfect guardian for the raw determination. Thanks to those two thieves every last drop of it was used to make that thing. As for a soul...."

Grany Smith interrupted. "Silly, it already got one!"

Toriel and Alphys turned. "Wha?! But how?"

Granny Smith giggled. "Dearie, you know the phrase farmers have,. putting your heart and soul into your work? What do we do at Sweet Apple Acres? I would not be surprised if a bit of us rubbed off on those apples over the years!"

Alphys was wide eyed. "Your right! Those seeds, they were stolen from your barn... and if what you say is true..." The scientist began to laugh. "By George... THAT was what I was missing! That was why the Amalgamates can exist! They had enough combined SOUL! And if those apples really took a bit of your sweat as you worked... EUREKA!!!!!"

Applejack, walking past and smiling, had to admit things turned out pretty well. And she had a lesson definitively conformed. Not just that you can always count on your friends, but that the true nature of a friend can be found within. And she had a feeling, based on how the Applegamate was with the citizens of Ponyville, that it would have a lot of friends soon.

AJ included.

THE END








































Breaking the fourth wall again, Asriel smiled.

"Hi everyone! Hoped you are liking the series so far, I know I am... oh, and Saiyan Brony... I promise I will fix the wall before I go."

He pointed to some supplies.

"Anyway... thanks for over 100 likes and for all the comments! For all of us in Equestria, we really do thank you, and hear every word. I left some space below in case the authors also had something to say.

Misterebony: I'll go first..... Ummm.. thanks for reading and for the ideas. But thank you especially to NGrey651 for making this possible.

Ngrey651: It’s my absolute pleasure. I couldn’t be loving writing this series more. But I’m loving how many people are LOVING this even more than that. Till next time!