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// The Visit 
// Story: Trixie's Revenge 
// by nerdyGAMERgrl 
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-Trixie's P.O.V-

I trotted down to Twilight's castle quickly, I knew that she would be surprised to see me.  After all, I am The Great and Powerful Trixie, the one who tried to pretty much rule Ponyville. I knocked on the door to hear hoofsteps stepping closer to the door, the door opened and I saw Twilight's face.

"Trixie?" Twilight said, confused. "Why are you here?"

"I just wanted to practice my new magic abilities." I said, smiling.

"Let me guess, you want another magic duel like last time?" Twilight said, chuckling a little.

"No, I've learned my mistake from that..."

"Then what?"

"Well, it's called hypnotism."

"Hypnotism? That is just in old Pony Tales!"

"Please Twilight? I really want to make it up to you!" I said, looking sincere.

"Well, alright. But make it quick, I have a spell book from the Princesses i'm going to read." She said, levitating a old purple book with her magic.

She led me inside and into her room, where Spike was sleeping peacefully. Twilight sat down and looked at me, "Okay, I'm ready Trixie!" Twilight said, smiling. I focused on my magic, a pink glow began to appear and Twilight stared into it. What she didn't know was that hypnotism wasn't an old pony tale, her eyes began to turn pink as she stared.

"T-T-Trixie... something's h-happening..." Twilight said, her eyes halfway shut. 

"Relax Twilight, fall deeper into my trance. It's okay..." I intoned.

Twilight smiled and said, "O-Okay..." Her eyes glowing pink almost completely.

"Don't resist, it's much more pleasant to let yourself go..."

"It is pleasant..." Twilight said, smiling.

"You feel very relaxed, your eyes are starting to close.. just let them shut. You must sleep."

With that, Twilight's eyes glowed completely and she lay down on her bed, she was in hypnotic sleep.

"Listen to me Twilight, all you want to do is obey my every command..."

"Yes... obey..." Twilight mumbled drowsily.

"Whenever I say the word, 'Obey Trixie', you will obey my every command. But when I say, 'Natural Twilight' you will awaken from your trance." I said, happy with myself.

"Yes... Trixie..."


"Awaken."

Twilight woke up and looked at me, her eyes back to normal. "Woah, did it work or not?" she asked me, a dazed look on her face. "Oh, it was great," I said, smiling. "Thank's Twilight. Oh, and one more thing..."

"Yes?"

"Obey Trixie."

Twilight's eyes changed to pink and she looked at me.

"Trixie, what shall I do for you?" She asked, completely under my spell.

"Give me a book on hypnotism." I said.

She grabbed a book with her magic, the book was labelled Hypnosis & Mind Control. I turned to her and gave her another command, "Very good Twilight, now go to sleep. You will wake up as you're normal self and tell your friends that I will be staying here. Understood?".

"Yes, Trixie..." She said, before crawling into bed.

I smiled as she fell asleep, I then went into the guest room and slept. Soon her little group of friends will be under my control, but I had to do it in secret. All I had to do was figure out my next target, I knew just who to go after,

Fluttershy.