Okay, I know it's been a while since I've wrote a chapter for this story, but I was thinking of something during my first period class today. I thought, you know, my first story started off pretty bad, didn't make sense, and the characterization wasn't too good either. So I came up with an idea. First of all, I'm thinking of changing the story to first person ( I hate writing in 3rd person -_-), totally remaking the story from the ground up (Don't worry, CJ will still be the main character, and he will still enter Equestria the same way), the characterization will be better (I hope), and I'll actually have a plot line rather than writing it as I go (which is what I usually do).
Overall, I'm going to change a lot, but the story will have the same concept. CJ now has a first and last name; Christopher Johnson. (It makes more sense than his actual name being CJ) Instead of being a clarinet player he's going to be something else (mainly because wouldn't Equestrian instruments be made for ponies and not humans? That means when his reed breaks then he won't be able to play it anymore). Instead of being in college, he's going to be in high school, and it's going to start off as a normal day for him.
That's all I'm saying so far, but that means this story get's cancelled, and the new one follows this one's plot line (slightly). Since I wasn't that far in, there isn't that much writing to do, but the chapters will have more descriptive terms (Meaning things will be described more clearly) and no longer have many mistakes. Writing my other story has improved my English a lot, and it keeps on improving (Ignore any mistakes in this XD).
However, it's up to you guys. Either keep going with it this way, or start all over and make it a better story entirely. (With some minor (Major for CJ) character changes). However, whichever you choose I should be fine with (I just hate writing in 3rd person -_-...I was an idiot for putting this story in 3rd person when I can't write 3rd person for shit).
Anyways, comment your opinions, and I hope to be writing again soon...but for now...MINECRAFT! =D