A Bit For Your Thoughts?

by Kihano


An announcement (Not a chapter)

I'll be blunt with you... this story is very likely to get canceled.

When I saw ChronoMitsurugi's comments and, soon after Eliseo221, I went back to read my chapters.

Looking back on them, even I became confused with where I took the story. Originally, I wanted to make it like an adventure-free roam-wide world sort of deal. The merchant travelling Equestria and beyond, collecting various artifacts that several villains (both new and familiar), as well as heroes, who are using them for their own schemes. Whether the individual's motives are for good or evil, the Keeper (or K) will still collect them as to keep the balance steady. Neither order nor chaos getting the advantage over the other.

The characters that were supposed to be the most frequent were 4 ponies and 3 OCs, namely;
-Daring Do (obviously)
-Flim and Flam (cause they reminded of Sithil and Quirt)
-Chrysalis (... no idea why to be honest)
-Sif (no background history relation to Dark Souls, other than that, still the same)
-Fenrir (no relation to Loki... yet)
-One Diamond Dog who I never got to introduce (not telling what my plans are with him)

But with how I made some of the chapters, that was proving to be difficult (mostly because I wrote whatever came to my mind). Honestly, I wasn't planning on K going to Ponyville so soon. I was satisfied with how I made the first chapter until the last part consisting of him deciding to head for Ponyville. After the part where Fenrir reports to K, It was supposed to transition to him going to another location (not Ponyville) where he would meet up with Daring Do to get an artifact, then it would go from there meeting up with the other aforementioned characters in other places. Though I'm not sure if this would please you readers, It was my intended path and I have no idea how I strayed from it and for that I'm sorry. But I'd still like to think, it was a good attempt at a first story.

I'm basically gonna rewrite the whole damn thing, still the same concept but with more planning. Sorry for this, but I thought I might as well say it now with me travelling soon for vacation. Expect the rewrite sometime around July. Again sorry to you guys and thank you for all your support.

Jumbodude signing off... for now.