Hello I am back, and just in case you didn’t know, I have a second story called the time adventures up, lots of people hit favorite on it, a few commented and a few hit like, but I would like you guys to check it out, I know it’s not twixie, but that is because me and Swift Whooves, and Chromatic Reverb are making OC stories with our oc’s and our friends oc’s. Mine is one of mine, Swift, and Chromes. Please check it out, and also, please in the comments, even if you don’t leave any, I want you to read all the comments by Little Jackie Pappercut and tell me if you agree with him, also tell me what you thinkg. Now with that out of the way, time to get this started.
The sunlight hit Twilight in the face, forcing her to get out of her bed. She groaned then realized the bed was occupied by another pony, but before she freaked out she remembered she and Trixie were living together and were in love. She smiled but then sat up causing Trixie to groan.
“Ugh, I hate the sun. Curse you Celestia, it’s too bucking early.” Trixie muttered rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. “The morning is evil.”
“Well good morning to you too.” Twilight said stretching.
“Sorry Twi, but I hate and I mean HATE mornings.” Trixie said.
“Ah you’ll learn to like them.” Twilight said until they heard a loud crash and slam from downstairs Spike yell in surprise and minor pain with the sound of fire.
“Um Twi, what the hay was that?” Trixie asked confused.
“I think that was Derpy.” Twilight said rushing down stairs to were spike was.
“What the buck just happened?” Spike asked them rubbing his head.
“SPIKE, LANGUAGE!” Twilight said angry.
“Besides, that’s what we came down to ask you.” Trixie said to him.
“Sorry but I was on my way to go see Applebloom before school and boom, Derpy comes in, slams into me and I accidently breath fire on her.” Spike said slightly peeved.
Trixie went over to Derpy who was covered in burns. She was breathing but had a weak pulse and was unconscious.
“Twi, we have a problem over her, she is unconscious and breathing but she has a weak pulse.” Trixie said worried, “Should we take her to a hospital, or have you cast your spell?”
“Yeah, I don’t have her boyfriend’s consent to heal her with my magic.” Twilight said levitating her with Trixie’s help, “Spike, you can go see the Cutie Mark Crusaders, alright?”
“Bye!” Spike said running out the door.
“Help me teleport her, we need to get there quick.” Twilight said her horn glowing. Trixie mimicked her then suddenly they were in front of the hospital no worse for wear.
“Alright, so in we go.” Trixie said starting to walk with Twilight following, them both levitating Derpy.
“Hello and welcome to- WHAT THE BUCK HAPPENED THIS TIME!?” The nurse asked seeing Derpy being levitated in by Twilight and Trixie.
“Long story, but we need a room and she needs to be scanned for anything.” Twilight said with the nurse rushing them to a room. Then in came the doctor who quickly scanned her.
“Multiple cuts and lacerations and multiple first to third degree burns, let me guess, crashed through a window into Spike?” He said looking at them.
“Hit the nail on the head so to speak.” Trixie said nodding.
“Contact Doctor Whooves.” The doctor told the nurse who rushed off to find where he was this time.
“Shouldn’t he be here if he is a doctor?” Trixie asked confused.
“Um no, he is not that type of a doctor, that’s just his name.” He said not helping Trixie understand it anybeter.
“Don’t worry, he’ll be here in about 5 seconds.” Twilight said which not even 6 seconds later the door opened and in came Derpy’s boyfriend and her daughter. “Huh, he brought Dinky also.” Twilight muttered.
“Who is the unicorn?” Trixie asked confused.
“Derpy’s daughter Dinky, and no Doctor Whooves isn’t the father.” Twilight said to her, seeing her with a confused look she decided to put it off for a while, “I’ll tell you when we get home.”
“Derpy, please be okay!” He said rushing in.
“Mommy, why are you sleeping so late in the morning, you need to get up!” Dinky said nudging Derpy’s hoof which somehow made her open her eyes and groan.
“Ugh, why do you look so sad Muffin? And you too Honey, and is this a hospital? Derpy said confused more than usual, “Why am I in here?”
“Yeah, well I was about to ask Twilight and Trixie that.” He said turning with the fire of rage in his eyes, “What the hay happened? She hurts herself quite often, but never is she stuck in the hospital for something not related to fire… oh, I see now.”
“Yeah, she ran into spike causing him to burp out some fire and it engulfed her.” Trixie said, “Oh and I’m-“
“The Great and Powerful Trixie, I was there, and I don’t get why you’re allowed back.” He said with Dinky looking at her confused.
“Wait, you’re that magician lady? Can you teach me how to use my magic?” She said knowing magicians were powerful in magic.
“Well if your mother will allow me, I could show you some tricks, teach you some easy skills, with Twilight helping of course. But first, I wasn’t going to speak in third person, I was going to say, I’m Trixie Lulamoon, and I am a new resident of Ponyville, and Twilight Sparkle’s marefriend.” Trixie said surprising The Doctor making him reconsider her, and Dinky who giggled with a smile on her face.
“Congratulations you two, you make a wonderful couple.” Derpy said from her bed, “And Dinky, if you want to learn magic from them you can alright?”
“YAY, I GET TO LEARN MAGIC!!!!!” Dinky yelled out in pure joy bouncing around causing everyone to chuckle and Derpy to get up out of bed.
“Wait, don’t get up, you’re still hurt!” everypony in the room quickly said rushing to her but she simply waved them off.
“I’m not helpless everypony, I need to finish my route, Twilight, if you would please heal me.” Derpy said using her genius that was hidden under her persona.
“Alright, stand still.” Twilight said casting a spell and healing her instantly without nearly passing out.
“Thank you Twilight, now if you will excuse me, I will finish my job, Muffin, I want you to head back to school.” Derpy said walking out the door and getting ready to take off, “Oh and before I forget, Twilight, the mail I was to give you might be gone, but what it was, is that Luna is coming to town to introduce everyone to the pony she is dating.”
“Alright that sounds nice- wait her what!?” Twilight said staring at Derpy in shock.
“She is in a realationship, and is coming her to announce it.” Derpy repeated. “I’m not the smartest pony, but I was the first to be told, so I know some stuff.” Derpy said then she took off, at a speed that would even impress Rainbow Dash.
“So, you and Twilight huh?” Doctor Whoves said making small talk to Trixie.
“What of it?” She asked looking at him.
“Nothing! I think you’re a cute couple, just didn’t really see it coming to be honest.” He said shrugging.
“Well neither did we so you know, it just happens.” Trixie said walking up to Twilight and nuzzling her. “Come on, we should tell the others about Luna.” She said bidding the Doctors farewell as they left the hospital.
They started into town and headed towards Sugar Cube Corner to tell Pinkie, whose first reaction would be to, of course, throw a party, Pinkimena just looked at them and shrugged, not really caring that much. Then they went to Fluttershy’s cottage to inform her so she wouldn’t freak out and, of course, found her with none other than Rainbow Dash, cuddling on their couch just enjoying their time together. Upon being informed Rainbow got excited and Fluttershy got a bit nervous. She was commanding in a relationship but around royalty she still got scared. Next stop was Sweet Apple Acres. They expected to find it full of workers but no apples were on the trees, just flowers and when they stepped in all they found was Big Mac reading a paper and sipping some beer, looking like a boss.
“Uh hey Big Mac, where is everyone?” Twilight asked confused.
“Well, seeing as we don’t have any work at the moment I would take a guess to say that they are on a picnic in the south fields or they are at the spa.” Big Mac said scratching his chin. “Of course they might be in both, seeing as I’m also thinking of the young ones, I’m here making sure Granny Smith is fine.”
“Wait, I thought that you didn’t talk all that much.” Trixie said never have heard him speak before.
“I didn’t but I started to when everyone started dating. Speaking of which I am going to head over to visit with Cheerilie, she let school out early today and asked me if I wanted to have lunch with her.” Big Mac said with a smile on his face getting up and throwing away his beer bottle, not even tipsy from it.
“Wait I thought that you guys were only friends, were the CMC wrong?” Twilight asked confused.
“I’ll tell you next time I see you, good day ladies.” Big Mac said trotting out of the house.
“So let’s head to the south fields first.” Trixie said looking down to where south was, “It seems like some of them would be there.”
“Alright, let’s go.” Twilight said wrapping a hoof around Trixie and teleporting. When they arrived in the middle of a grove, they found the CMC with Spike talking and eating some sandwiches and eating some apples.
“Hey girls, we came to tell you guys that Luna is coming into town today on a surprise visit to introduce the pony she is in a relationship with.” Twilight said right as Spike burped out a letter saying exactly that.
“Wow, well it says in an hour, so let’s go.” Spike said standing.
“To the spa!” Trixie said grabbing Twilight and teleporting to the Spa.
“Um yes, did you girls need something?” Rarity said seeing as they had popped right into the bath area getting soaked instantly.
“Yes, Luna is dating some colt or mare and is coming to announce it in about an hour.” Twilight said to Rarity and Applejack, then she turned to her marefriend with an eat shit grin, “Oh, and Trixie dear?”
“Um yes?” Trixie said nervously.
“I didn’t want to get soaked at the moment.” Twilight said with her grin widening.
‘oh buck me.’ Trixie thought right as Twilight tackled her and dunked her into the water then popping out of the pool having Trixie surface soaked as if she had been in there for more than a few minutes.
“Ah, payback is so much fun.” Twilight said grinning.
“Ugh, well at least I know a dry instantly spell” Trixie mumbled using it to appear normal.
“Already cast mine.” Twilight said with a smirk walking out.
“Well you girls coming?” Trixie said turning to Rarity and Applejack.
“Yes, we just want to finish making out which you two so rudely interrupted!” Rarity said giving her the hint to get out.
“I know, I just wanted to make you cause Applejack to blush more.” Trixie said dashing out with a giggle.
“Trixie, what did you do?” Twilight asked hearing the giggle.
“Noooothing.” Trixie said with a grin.
“Is this one of those nothings that get you into trouble?” Twilight asked.
“We’ll find out later, let’s head to the square.” Trixie said grabbing Twilight and heading out to the town square where Ponies were already gathering.
After a few minutes all their friends, the CMC, and Spike were there and they saw two huge black ponies flying towards them. Muttering started in the crowd, people confused at the fact that whoever was flying with Luna was pretty big. Then they noticed the other one was also alicorn, this caused even more muttering because the only ones they knew were Luna, Celestia, and Twilight’s new sister in law, Candice.
“Twi, who in the hay is that with our there princess?” Applejack asked confused.
“I don’t know but we are about to find out.” Twilight said seeing them head down to where they were gathered.
They landed with the other one staying behind Luna wearing a cloak of all things to cover up all but his marvelous blue eyes, and his pure black horn. Luna looked at all of them and as the mutters stopped she began to speak.
“Hello everypony, I can see you all got the letter that I was arriving here, so this is the colt I mentioned in the letter. I hope you all don’t get freaked out by him.” Luna said stepping aside for her coltfriend to walk up to look at the all.
As he walked up his cloak dissolved into smoke and showed he was a black coated alicorn, his mane and tail were a vibrant shade of violet, which had random streaks of electric blue and sanguine running through it. It was in a flowing motion looking like fire. His cutie mark was a sanguine heart with a dagger pierced through it surrounded by electric blue fie, the dagger was ruby hilted, had a black bald, except for the part that went through the heart, which was also sanguine. He turned to look at them all and looked as if he was sizing them all up for coffins and deciding upon where to strike to kill the most of them in one shot, then let out the kindest smile you would ever see. He let out a great loud belly laugh and the tension broke in the air as everypony chuckled.
“I’m so sorry everypony, but I wanted to see your first expressions and when you looked scared I couldn’t help but laugh because to be honest, I’m scared horribly so.” He said looking at them all with a heartfelt smile, “I wanted to let you guys know I’m going to be coming down here a lot because I like smaller towns than big cities, might make a house and everything, and I hope you ponies would welcome me like anybody else, seeing as I’m not really a prince of anything, I gave up that title long ago.” He said with a heat felt smile not looking sad about him not having that tittle anymore.
“Well sure we will except you but could you at least tell us your name.” Trixie and the entire town muttered stuff such as “yeah that’s what we want to know” after her words.
“Of course I will, Trixie Lulamoon. My name is Night Fire.” He said with a smirk.
And that is how I’m ending this chapter. If you want more background on him read the prologue I put up on my second story The Time adventures. Now I want everyone reading this to review, and Little Jackie Pappercut, I value your opinion very much, I think all people who read my stories should read every review you have on there. I’M PUTTING THIS IN ALL CAPS SO YOU WILL NOTICE, THIS STORY IS LOSELY BASED OFF OF THE COMIC THE GREATEST GIFT BY DEKOMARU ON DIEVIANTART.COM PLEASE CHECK IT OUT. Bless your face, if you sneezed during any of my chapters, or stories, bless you, peace off.