//------------------------------// // Victimized Elements (Edited) // Story: The Bats Return // by MetalBrony823 //------------------------------// Fluttershy came to Ponyville in the dead of night, and looked down upon them from the air. She was specifically looking For Rarity's house. She found it, and quietly swooped down, and landed really quietly on a tree branch, right next to Carosel Boutique. She hovered on the other side of the branch, and quietly opened Rarity's bedroom window. There she was, fast asleep with a blindfold over her eyes. Fluttershy smiled evilly, and walked towards her. Fluttershy then looked to her sides to and fro, seeing if there was nopony else in the bedroom except for her and Rarity. Indeed, it was just the two of them. She then rubbed Rarity too and fro gently, and she woke up. "Wha... what is it, Sweetie Be-?" Rarity said, before seeing Fluttershy with her smile. "Fluttershy?" said Rarity in shock. She turned on her light and said "Is that you?" "Of course it's me." said Fluttershy "What.... happened to you?" said Rarity in a tone of fright and shocked. "Oh, I'm a bat pony again." Fluttershy answered. "I... I thought that Twilight turned you back to normal?" said Rarity. "You poor darling, you must be scared to death right now." She hugged Fluttershy to comfort her. "It's not bad, Rarity. It actually feels... good." said Fluttershy with honesty. Rarity didn't know what to say, except for "How?" "Well, I feel so much braver, and have more confidence." Fluttershy answered "I don't understand." said Rarity. "I know you don't, Rarity." said Fluttershy in understanding. Then, a sneaky side smile appeared on her face. "That's why you should join me." she said in a more sinister voice. She showed Rarity her eyes and said "Look into my eyes." And, in an instance, Rarity was completely hypnotized, and she just stood still with her mouth slightly agape, with her with swirly lines in her eyes. "Yes, mistress." said Rarity "Now, who am I." said Fluttershy "my queen." Rarity replied Fluttershy smiled at her answer and said "Good. Now, from now on, you shall be my servant of the night." "Yes, my queen." said Rarity. Fluttershy licked her lips, and bit Rarity's neck. The pain wasn't so bad, but Rarity fainted with her hoof on her forehead, like in the movies. Surprisingly, the so much talking hasn't woke up Sweetie Belle, or Opal. After Rarity was bitten, she woke up with a drastic change: Rarity's eyes turned blood red like Fluttershy's, and grew bat wings from her body. Rarity also grew fangs like Fluttershy did, and her skin looked more pale. "Rarity?" said Fluttershy. "Do you remember what I am?" she now said in a more evil voice Rarity smiled, very wickedly baring her teeth. "Yes... my queen." she said finally. Fluttershy smiled wickedly, and said very evilly "That's good. Next stop: Twilight's castle." She looked out Rarity's window and instructed "I want to make sure that She will be my servant too, and that nopony will stand in my way." "Right behind you, your highness." said Rarity. Then, in the still of the night, Fluttershy and Rarity flew off to Twilight's castle. Twilight's castle Fluttershy and Rarity landed on the large balcony of the castle, very quietly. "What about Spike, my queen?" Rarity whispered "I have something special for him." said Fluttershy. "I plan to save him for last." "Ooh, I like the sound of that." said Rarity. "For now, Our friends, and soon, all of Ponyville first." Fluttershy added. "Yes, my queen." said Rarity. Fluttershy and Rarity entered the castle, upstairs into Twilight's bedroom. "Twilight." whispered Fluttershy. Twilight woke up slowly with a yawn, and gave out a small yelp seeing Fluttershy and Rarity, both bat ponies! "F- Fluttershy?! Rarity?!" said Twilight. "What happened to you two?!" She cralwed back on the head of her bed, horrified "We are bat ponies now, darling." said Rarity. "And you must join us." Fluttershy added. "What?! No! No!" Twilight exclaimed Fluttershy used her hypnosis, and it made Twilight calm, and in a zombie like state, right under the bat ponies spell. "Now listen, my servant." "Yes, my queen." Twilight said in a zombie monotome. Fluttershy smiled in satisfaction, and licked her lips. "You will do exactly what I say, when I say it." Fluttershy said in an evil voice, and in her normal voice, she said "Does that sound good to you?" "Yes, my queen." Twilight replied "Excellent." Fluttershy said evilly. The yellow pegasus then bit Twilight's neck, like she did Rarity's, and the purple allicorn could do nothing under Fluttershy's hypnosis, except make a few gasps of pain. a small stream of blood was pouring out of the bite marks on Twilight's neck as she was being bitten. When Fluttershy was finished, Twilight just collapsed right on the spot. A few moments, later, Twilight transformed into a bat pony as well, and gave a wicked, evil smile, baring her new fanged teeth. "At your service, my queen." said Twilight wickedly with an evil giggle. "Good." Fluttershy said. "Now we turn all of Ponyville!" She tried to do an evil laugh, but it was more of an adorable giggle than an evil laugh, she stopped herself, and looked at her servants with embarrassment. The last time she did an evil laugh was at the Grand Galloping Gala, trying to make friends with the animals at Celestia's garden at castle. She felt her shoulder being touched by Twilight's hoof "Don't worry, Fluttershy." said Twilight sweetly. "You'll get better at laughing evilly." "Yes, darling. It's just an improvement." Rarity added softly. "I know. I just need some practice." said Fluttershy. "We'll teach you." said Twilight "Thanks, Twilight." Fluttershy said. The purple allicorn smiled at Fluttershy. "You're welcome." Twilight replied. "Wait!" Twilight just remembered something. "What about Spike?" she asked "I've decided to plan something special for my little Spikey-Whikey." said Fluttershy deviously. "Oh. I see." said Twilight. "What for?" "In time, Twilight." Fluttershy replied. "Now, where was I.... Oh yeah, Turning all of Ponyville into bat ponies!" Fluttershy said evilly "Oh, except Spike." she added in remembrance. She did her evil giggle again, while Twilight and Rarity did their evil laugh. While they were all laughing, and they went out of the bedroom window, looking for some more victims. Next stop for them was Applejack's place. Sweet Apple Acres It was very quiet, at Sweet Apple Acres. The whole animals on the farm were asleep in their pens. Fluttershy, and her new bat servants, Twilight and Rarity flew on the roof of Applejack's house, silhouetted under the full moon, with their eyes glowing blood red, and their pure, sparkling white teeth in an evil smile. "Be careful in this house." Fluttershy whispered. "Also, be careful not to wake Winona up while inside. Winona is not just a friendly dog, she can be a pretty serious guard dog, too." "Yes, my queen." Said Twilight and Rarity in unison. The three quietly went into a window and were inside Applejack's house, looking around the room around them. "I'll take care of Applejack, and Big Mac. You two can pick either Granny Smith or Applebloom. Oh! And Winona too. The two nodded and they split up. Fluttershy thought of whether to bit Big Mac, or Applejack first. Her mind was made up; she decided to bite Applejack first. She quietly went into her room. And woke her up. "Wha.... What is it?" Said Applejack in a sleepy voice. She look absolutely horrified to see Fluttershy as a bat pony again "Fluttershy?!" She exclaimed "Shhh. It's alright Applejack. I won't hurt you." Said Fluttershy. "How.... How did is happen? I ... I thought Twilight changed you back to normal." Said Applejack a little more quieter "I thought so too." Said Fluttershy. "But I guess not, but I really like being a bat pony." "Do... Do you really mean what you're saying?" Said Applejack in disbelief. "Oh yes. You will love being a bat pony too." Said Fluttershy "What?!" She exclaimed, but before she could try to get away, she was hypnotized by Fluttershy. "Now you will do as I say." Said Fluttershy "Yes, my queen." Applejack replied "What's all the racket, Jack?" Said a familiar deep male voice. It was Big Macintosh, he came in to see what all the commotion was about, and he gave out a "Whoa!" When he saw Fluttershy a bat pony. "What... Fluttershy?!" Big Mac exclaimed. "Oh, hellow Big Mac." Said Fluttershy in a sweet voice. "What... What in Tarnation is going on here?!" Big Mac exclaimed again. Before he could react, he was also under Fluttershy's hypnosis "Look into my eyes, Big Mac" said Fluttershy "Yes.... Wait." Big Macintosh then snapped himself out of his hypnotized state, and was trying to fight off the bat pony's hypnosis. It turns out that Big Mac is pretty strong-willed, and has a pretty strong mind. "I won't!" He exclaimed. "What?" Fluttershy said "Fluttershy, you have got to snap out of it." Said Big Mac. "This is not you." "Of course it's me." Said Fluttershy. "Please, Fluttershy. You got to listen to me." Big Mac pleaded "I think you should listen to her, Big Mac." Said Twilight from behind in her evil voice. Rarity was right next to her. "Wha... Where's Granny Smith, and Applebloom?" Said Big Mac "We're right here, Big Brother." Said Applebloom. Twilight and Rarity stepped aside from the now vampiric Applebloom and Granny Smith. "Oh no....Not you too!"Said Big Mac, becoming more horrified on what was happening around him. "Don't fret, Big Mac." Said Granny Smith. "It's actually a very awesome feeling. You will enjoy being a bat." Said Applebloom. While Big Mac was busy distracted by how he saw his family transformed, he heard Applejack making some painful gasps, and looked to see Applejack being bitten by Fluttershy. "No!!" He exclaimed. He witnessed the horror of his sister transformed into a bat pony. When the transformation was complete, she looked at Fluttershy with a smile and said "I am here for you, my queen." Applejack bowed to her after that "Good." Said Fluttershy with an evil giggle. Winona then ran in, barking loudly In alarm, but Fluttershy gave her the stare, scaring her off, and running downstairs, yelping in fright. Applejack then looked at Big Macintosh, and said "now it's your turn to join us!" She dashed straight for him. she tackled him, and tried to bite him on his neck, but Big Mac kicked her right on her stomach, knocking her into her wardrobe. Knowing that he stirred up the hornet's nest, he got out of the room and out of the house while the going was good for him. When Applejack recovered, she growled with anger, and said "Oh no you don't!" She was about to go after him, but Fluttershy stopped her "No." Said Fluttershy. "Let him go. We'll deal with him later." Applejack didn't like it and said "Yes.... My queen." "Good." Said Fluttershy. "Now my minions, we shall go forth and bite everypony in Ponyville." She told Applejack is a special case, and they went out of a window into the night, and continued their havoc. "Now my minions, come with me, we're going for Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash next." "Yes, my queen." Said the rest of the bat ponies. They all flew out of Applejack's bedroom window and went to back to their chaos in Ponyville, trying to turn everypony into bat ponies.