//------------------------------// // 25 - Call and Response (pantoum) // Story: Ponyville & Other Poems // by AugieDog //------------------------------// Within the shadowed forest deep, She watches where the flowers crawl. The trees that dance and flail and weep Entrance her, make her feel so small. She watches where the flowers crawl Abundantly; the bursting scents Entrance her, make her feel so small, The life the least here represents. Abundantly, the bursting scents Surround the dust she still can taste. The life the least here represents Confirms she's blessed. She's not disgraced. Surround the dust she still can taste With water flowing free. The air Confirms she's blessed. She's not disgraced. The land she left cannot compare With water flowing free, the air A spice that wraps her, sweet and cool. The land she left cannot compare. If she'd remained, she'd be a fool. A spice that wraps her, sweet and cool, Ingredients to make her whole. If she'd remained, she'd be a fool; It's here she's nurturing a soul. Ingredients to make her whole, The trees that dance and flail and weep. It's here she's nurturing a soul Within the shadowed forest deep.