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// I Deeply Apologize 
// Story: Haylo: Project Thunder 
// by Twisted Visions 
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I started writing this story years ago, thinking a great imagination was all you needed to make a great story. I learned it requires patience, dedication, and over all, an actually solid idea of how the whole story is going to play out. I didn't have any of that when I first started this, and I don't have any now.

I had too many plans around this story to revive it. Being in an established universe that has ground to a halt it seems, and my plans with the author of the original story having gone to shit what with him rewriting the story I have had nothing else to draw on. In other words, I put all my work into a single conclusion, and see no where this could go as it is set AFTER the current rewrite.

In my eyes, after rereading this damn thing over and over TRYING to find a way to save it, I have failed. It was poorly written ((But hopefully not atrociously so)) and there are some huge holes and things I find difficult to carry on. I will personally admit that this was my attempt to write a deliberate self insert, The main character ((golly gee)), the Major, and one of the AI all being various personas I claim as my own. Not only that but the supporting characters were based on people whom I am either no longer friends with, or have no contact with any more. Kinda demoralizing to say the least.

Anyway, feel free to remove this story from your watch list. I never see it going anywhere, and the only reason I don't take it down is because in some strange and sick way I think it has a decent ending. Total cliffhanger I know, but they are alive, they accomplished the mission they had for the most part, and are on there way to help with the war, as was intended. I will mark this as complete, but for those of you whom are hoping for it's Resurrection, please don't hold your breath.

I am however thinking of writing another story. One with a steadier foundation in a genre I feel is more flexible and more to my liking. Long strung out combat scenes really aren't my forte, and I plan to not have many of those in my next fic, if it ever gets off the ground.

THANK YOU to those who have read it, and given me your comments. They are appreciated greatly and I have read them all numerous times. They have all in some way let me learn if they are constructive, and have made me feel good if they were complimenting. I know some of the things I did in this story would make most writers cringe ((And get me in a lot of trouble with copyright laws should I had ever made money from it)) but, I was a whole hell of a lot younger before. 

Anyway, I think I am done! I hope to see all of you again in another story should I ever write one!