Please before you say anything. This story needs work....like....well i really shot far and now looking at it....i kinda shot a bigger target then i hope. SOOO i will fix it, i will make it better, and i'll get to it. Just need to let you know that if you read it word for word....
It sucks but hey being gone for a while open my eyes to lots of things....one is how to make mistakes. XD without further due this story will be....hahaha....yeah i know but i have...no i need to say it.
This story will be on hold for a...hmmm...a week. That should get me to fix and make a damn plot out of this. I mean wow i kinda wrote it at the top of my head and thanks to people that were first to read it and help me fix it...well lets just say people who correct others...don't take it to heart, if you think about it....they are helping you in MORE ways then correcting a spell error. For correcting someone in a way you can see what they see in your stories and so on.
Kay....I'mma start fixing stuff and....hey maybe i can write another story....hmmm i don't know only time would tell.