Rise of Discord (Short Story)

by Shining Crescent


To The Readers

I wrote this story merely as a daily practice. I know it's not perfect but like I said in the long description I have always wanted to contribute to the brony/pony fandom. The story idea came to me because well I had always enjoyed the character of discord, but wanted to portray him as a more dark silhouetted character. The main boss that is seen from the non-hero's eyes. I hope you all enjoyed at least seeing my view and attempt to portray what I envisioned Discord as for Dreven. Also I wanted to try and show how I would see Pinkie Pie acting as a more human like girl. Diane as you can tell is my version of Pinkie. I tried to fit Twilight in there as well, but I was having a race to 750 words with another writer at the time so I cut out the scene with my own version of Twilight. I may post a finished version including her part and some suggestions you all may throw at me! If you want me to write more then please comment and tell me so otherwise I think I'll stick to my tumblr no one reads! In all seriousness though please do comment whether you liked it or not. All views are accepted! Thank you for reading my story and I hope you or someone out there wants me to write more. All in all I enjoy writing and using the characters of the show.