The Life of a Wanted Changeling (Comment Driven Story)

by Down with Chrysalis


Episode 27: DON'T GO TOWARDS THE LIGHT And Rhyming!?

You wake up in a tunnel of black with a white light at the end of it. A voice tells you not to go into the light. You turn around to see a shape of hazy midnight blue with two pure white spots for eyes floating behind you. The figure spreads wings and, with a final warning not to go into the light, turns to fly away. You chase after it.

Purgatory


You wake up in a tunnel of black with a white light at the end of it. You look around to see that you are completely surrounded by darkness and that the only source of light is the one at the end. You begin to wonder where you are and how you got here, considering you were just thrown of a cliff by Smaug. Then it hits you, the light at the end of the tunnel, surrounded by complete darkness. Your dead, your stinking dead. You would have started to freak out if weren't for the fact that the light felt really good. You begin to walk towards the light in a zombie like trance, when you hear someling from behind you screamed "DON'T GO TOWARDS THE LIGHT!"


You manage to turn around ignoring the light for now, and you see a....being of some sort. It looks like a shape of hazy midnight blue with two terrifying pure white spots for eyes floating behind you. "Wha....what are you?" You ask the being with fear, You feel as if those pure white spots are staring into your soul. The being gives a scoff of some sort and then says "I shouldn't be surprised that you do not know of me, but for now it doesn't matter. All you need to know is that if you go, so do I. So I'll give one warning that you better follow. Stay away from the light." With that the being spreads wings and it begins to fly away from you.


You don't understand whats going on, but you do know that the being is the only one with the answers. So with one last look towards the light and a whisper of "Not yet" you begin to chase down the being. When you get close enough to it, which should be impossible considering that the being is flying and your not, and you begin to scream questions at it like "Who are you? What do you mean you die when I die? How do I get out of here?" What you didn't notice was that you were heading straight towards another source of light. When you finally notice its to late, you already went though it.


THE REAL WORLD

you have just been beaten by a drgon and thrown from a mountain, you are either dead or delireous with all your injurys! therefore you must ramble on and on in your delireium as visions of your past come to you.(say a bunch of really emberasing crap as you mentally relive the past!)
like "noooooooooo aunt Bugameen i dont like knit-sweaters" or "maybe im not a good evil henchbug because i never wanted to be one in the first place! IT WAS YOUR DREAM DAD I JUST WANTED TO DANCE!(video-game?)"

We see the changeling (you) in a hut in the woods. You appear to be mumbling things in your current unconscious state. If someling were to listen closely, and someling is, they would hear this "Noooooooooo aunt Bugameen I don't like knit-sweaters. Maybe I'm not a good evil henchbug because i never wanted to be one in the first place! IT WAS YOUR DREAM EX-QUEEN I JUST WANTED TO BE UNIQUE! No no get away from me you nut-job of a changeling, how many times do I have to tell you I don't want your dirty magazine, NOW LEAVE ME ALONE!" This would continue until the you would open your eyes and scream...

wake up and yell
"ARE THE GIRLS OKAY!?"
To make yourself look all selfless and noble and stuff

Ask if the mane six are okay

"ARE THE GIRLS OKAY!?" You look around you, still resting on the bed, to see that no one around you to answer your question. You also see a mirror to your left. At least I can see how badly Smaug beat me. You think to yourself in a deadpanned tone. One of the creepiest thing's you notice is that right above you are...

you wake up in a hut with giant wooden masks grinning down on you.

A bunch of grinning wooden voodoo mask. You can't help but feel slightly disturbed at the smiles that they have. Deciding that you've had enough of the creepy voodoo mask show, you get up from the bed. Sadly you get up to fast and all the pain from yesterday hits you...

You then scream in pain because a dragon just used you as his personal pinball machine.

After we sit up too fast and yell as suggested by others
"Ow, Ow, Ow. Dear Luna, So much PAIN."

"OW, OW, OW. DEAR LUNA, SO MUCH PAIN!" You yell at the top of your buggy lungs. You feel as if you were just used by someling for their own personal pinball machine, oh wait...YOU WERE! You slowly, very slowly as to not cause any more pain to yourself, and you looked at the mirror. And you see something surprising. On your chest is a glowing midnight-colored mark that looks like this(This belongs to the rightful owner, not me.) ->



You begin to panic that there is a glowing mark on your chest that wasn't there before, when it suddenly disappears. You can't help but make this comment "Cadence is not going to like this, and I really hope I can contact her soon." You hear a "Ahem" from behind you. You turn around to see a zebra with a mo hawk. She has blue eyes and she appears to be wearing alot of jewelry. Her cutie mark appears to be a spiral with weird markings. She looks like this ->


"You are fortunate to have this meeting, it seems you have taken quite the beating." a voice tells you in rhyme as you come back to the world of not being dead.

"You are fortunate to have this meeting, it seems you have taken quite the beating." The zebra rhymes to you? "Would you kindly explain to me how this came to be" She asked you in a rhyme. You don't understand why shes rhyming, but you don't want to be rude to the zebra who probably saved your flank. So you begin to explain to her what happened.


45 MINUTES LATER


You and the zebra, who you learned is named Zecora, talked for the next forty-five minutes. Apparently you took more of a beating then you thought you did from Smaug. You've been out for six weeks! Luckily, Zecora saw you fall into the river and she rescued you. She's been taking care of you since then. You asked her if anything happened while you were out, and she told that the girls are okay, but for some reason the yellow pegasus was both crying and glaring at Rainbow for some reason. You didn't even know it was possible for that pegasus to glare. Besides a infestation of these things called Parasprites in Ponyville a few weeks back nothing else has happened. You asked if she wanted to be friends with a changeling, and she said yes! You admit you hugged her and jumped up and down like a little school filly.


After awhile Zecora left to do some herb hunting (which was what she was doing when she saved you) and you were left all b yourself. It is then that you remember something...

first things first CHECK THE GLOWY SPARKLE THING IN THE INVENTORY!!!! WHO CARES IF ITS DANGEROUS IF ITS SPARKLY AND GLOWY!!! SPARKLY AND GLOWY ARE GOOD BECAUSE OF THIS PONY: :twilightangry2::twilightblush::twilightoops::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::facehoof:

That The Inventory was glowing before you went to fight Smaug. You look for it, and see that the bag is still glowing with a midnight aura. "How did me and Zecora miss that?" You ask yourself in confusion. You shrug it off and decide to see whats going on with The Inventory. You slowly begin to open The Inventory, for all you know it could explode at any second. When it is opened, nothing happens. Then suddenly something jumps out of The Inventory. You fall backwards in shock and you scream a little in pain when you do fall. when you do get up you see this (I don't own this, it belongs to it''s rightful owner)->



The little filly appears to be wearing a smaller version of the armor you found back at the old castle. The filly looks around for a little bit, but then her cat like eyes stop at you. The little filly smiles brightly at you and then says two words that shock you to your very core...


"Hi Daddy."


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"WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!"


What do you do?