Hello community, here's Daniel aka justding.
At first, thank you for your help! Without you, I would not have edited this story.
But justding, we only liked and favorited your story!
Yes, you all only read, liked and/or favourited this story. But it gave me motivation to edit this story. I did not need very long, just a little over a week. And yes, maybe the story still needs some work, but I think I've cleaned more than 80 percent of the errors and grammar mistakes I made when I was a unexperienced writer.
I wrote this story because I noticed the lack of F.E.A.R. crossover which involved protagonists and antagonists of the game series. There are some F.E.A.R. crossovers, but none of them include Alma. There are plenty of Battlefield and Call Of Duty xover... I did not read one of them, because I don't like these games. And now I got an idea:
Shall I write a one-shot story about TCB ponies interrogate Alma? Could end funny... for Alma, at least.
I hate the ending of ur story. DISLIKE! MUAHAHA!
I don't care. The story is a F.E.A.R. xover and like the games, it has an open/bad ending (F.E.A.R. 3 doesn't count, because this game is stupid, and Perseus Mandate is an exception). To this fact, I think these videos could fit as the story's main themes and also to intensify the dark ending:
Thank you for reading the story and see you soon in my other stories.