Troubles By The Score

by ADRNEL


Score Nine

It all happened so suddenly, one minute he back himself into a corner, the next, he is making-out with his marefriend's sister. At least Maude's tongue wasn't so large compared to Pinkie's.

Maude broke the kiss and removed Mac's yoke. "Let's take this up another level." she immediately started to nibble Mac's neck.

"Oh no! Not the neck...that's my weak spot..." he though as he felt his body turn into jelly from the nibbling. He gave a grunt as he felt something rise.

"Impressive...now we can take this all the way." commented Maude as she pushed Mac to the ground, on his back. Mac did have to admit though, she was impressively strong. Maude proceeded to remove her belt and lift up her dress. "This will indeed make me feel fulfilled..." she immediately got on top and lined herself up.

But before she got down, she looked at Mac to see a look of shame and terror on his face. That look just broke her heart. What the buck am I doing? she thought.

"I'm sorry Mac...but I can't do this...it's not right..." said the mare with a hint of disappointment in her voice. She quickly got off and looked away from him to hide her shame.

"Maude?" the stallion was confused. "What's goin' on?"

The mare just sighed. "Pinkie put me up to this, she wanted me to flirt and seduce you."

"PINKIE?! My marefriend?! Why?" Mac was in shock.

"To guilt you into being more intimate with her! And yes, it is a stupid and horrible idea, but I couldn't just say 'no' to her." she was ashamed at what she did.

"Why couldn't she just talk this out with me? Why must she use you?"

"That's my sister for you..." Maude turned around to reveal tears flowing down her cheeks. "I greatly apologize for my behavior...I-I must go, can't let anyone see me like this..." she turned to leave.

Mac was dumbfounded...why would Pinkie do all of this? Use her sister like that? All because he refused to go all the way with her. "Uh...is there anythin' ah can do to help-"

"NO!" snapped Maude as she turned around to face the stallion, tears flowing down her cheeks. "THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO FOR ME!"

Awkward silence fell between the two of them, before Maude sprinted out of the barn.

Mac did not know what to do and still was having trouble taking the whole thing in.


"I'm coming." exclaimed Bulk as he walked to his front door while lifting a dumbbell in his hoof. He opened the door to reveal Fluttershy. "Shy? What are you doing here?"

"Oh...uh...I-I just came here to thank you once again for making me feel better and I thought maybe I...I mean...we, can have some dinner together sometime? If you want...it's okay if you don't...I completely under-"

"I would love too." interrupted Bulk as he smiled the mare.

"You would?!" she was not expecting a 'yes'.

"Of course I would love too, you seem like a nice mare to be around, so why not?"

"DADDY! WE'RE MY HELMET!" yelled a filly from inside. Bulk turned around.

"It's on the coffee table where you left it last time!"

"OH! NEVER MIND!" yelled the filly back. Soon, the filly ran out the door. "Anyways, me and my friends will be off crusading...love you daddy." the filly was, to Fluttershy's shock, Scootaloo.

Scootaloo nuzzled up to her father. "Love you too...now don't hurt yourself and be back before sunset." he instructed.

"Of course. See ya." Scootaloo gets on her scooter, "Hey Shy!" she waved as she scooted away and into town.

"Oh...I didn't know you were a father...much less Scoot's..." Fluttershy didn't expect it. "You must be married then..."

"Formally married."

"Huh?" Shy was confused by what he meant.

"Her mother died during childbirth...I have been raising her by myself since...she has a high resemblance to her." Bulk admitted, although it still pained him to talk about it.

"Oh...I'm so sorry to hear that." she now felt bad.

"It's okay, everyday I am thankful that I have a beautiful daughter to take care of, she's one of the few reasons I get up in the morning...so...you said something about dinner?" changing the subject.

"Oh right...how does tomorrow night sound?" asked the yellow pegasus.

"Tomorrow night sounds perfect...uh...you won't mind if I come as is...I don't usually do fancy."

"That's fine by me...I'll pick you up tomorrow at sunset?"

"How about I pick YOU up at sunset tomorrow." he corrected.

"Oh...that's nice too." Shy blushed. "Uh...I have to go on my spa date...but I'll see you tomorrow night."

"Can't wait" he smiled.

Shy blushed even more. "Uh...bye..." waved him off and quickly flew off into town.

Bulk waved her off. "Such a nice mare...my wife would approve." he smiled. For the first time in such a long time, he was going on a date.


Little did Fluttershy or Bulk knew, but Thunderlane spied on them from a nearby bush. "That two-timing bitch!" he growled to himself, blood boiling.


The sky grew dark and gray, a storm was coming.

Cheerilee walked to the library and knocked on the door. To her surprise, Twilight answered. "Cheerilee?"

"Twilight."

"What are you doing here?" asked the unicorn.

"We need to talk."


Big Mac was at Sugercube corner, he walked through the front door.

Pinkie heard the main entrance bell ring from the kitchen. She peeked from around the corner to see Mac there. "Mackie! This is perfect! He's probably here to quell his guilty conscience by having 'super fun time' with me! Thank goodness I limbered myself up this morning." she was so excited from the prospect. She took a deep breath so she wouldn't look TOO eager and walked out of the kitchen. "Hey Mackie! What brings you here?"

"We need to talk."


Fluttershy happily trotted into town. She was in heaven, she finally found a stallion that was not only perfect, but treats her nice as well. Strong body, soft heart; her favorite kind of stallion.

"SHY!" yelled a voice. This snapped the mare for the trance.

"Huh?" she turned around to see an angry Thunderlane standing behind her.

"We need to talk!"