“woah.. facial Features” EDI Said as he twisted and turned his face.. smiled and frowned, licked his lips and spat on his hoof?
“ew..” everyone said as they saw this, even Alex who was sprawling on the floor.
Realisation hit EDI “oh… opps. Got a bit to carried away sorry.” He said wiping the spit into his mane. Without all four of his hooves on the ground he stumbled forward.
“well now that that’s all sorted I guess we should be GOING NOW” Luna spoke giving emphasis on the last two word.
Celestia Sighed. “ ok Luna you can go.. I’m sorry for keeping you up all day.” Luna nodded and said her goodbyes before teleporting off to Canterlot where she could sleep. “ now as for the rest of you.” She said eyeing each of the humans. “ I think you should all get some rest at each of your new respective houses.”
Rochelle looked up to the Princess and then over to Rarity “ Sounds like and idea, lets go .. Appl?”
“Rarity Daring, my name is Rarity.” She butted in. The two got up from where they sat , said their goodbyes and walked out of Twilights Library on the route for the Carousel Boutique.
“so Celestia am I going to Vinyls or do I just wonder for a while until sunrise?” EDI asked.
Celestia Nodded “ well yes you will go to Vinyls but first we need to find you a suitable name, EDI or TinMan will not do around here, for a Pony at least.”
“but aren’t we using our name Celestia?” Tex Asked and Celestia Nodded in return. “then whats wrong about EDI using.. well EDI?”
“well it’s the same as if you called yourself GumDrop Riddles in your world would that not sound weird.”
“well yea.. Ok whatever” Tex said.
“ok well what name could I have then?” EDI asked.
“well what things from your world do you like?” Celestia asked.
“oo Night Rider.” EDI said.
“try Stealth Rider TinMan makes more sense in their weird world.” Alex said as he sat up on the floor.
EDI raised an eyebrow, at least he thought he did he actualy just lifted his whole face up a bit. “ and when did you become an expert on the subject?”
“since I’ve been lying here on the ground for the past 10ish minutes reading book titles. DUH.” Alex Replied.
Applejack yawned “ oh pardan me I think its best that me ‘n’ Texter thar should be heading over to the farm before I fall asleep on ya Princess.”
“good Idea” Tex Agreed.
After sorting EDI’s name out to be ‘Stealth Rider’ the human and the Element of Honesty walked back to the Apple family’s farm house.
“well Mr Rider I guess its about time we headed over to Ms Scratchs house don’t you think?” Celestia started to walk out the door. “its was nice seeing you again twilight and rainbow dash and nice meeting you Mr Alex.” Everyone said goodbyes to the pair as they walked out.
“I might copy the rest and get out CYA Twi!” Rainbow said as she sped out of the room at high speeds.
“hmm ya rainbow.. anyway I guess we should probably get some rest, hey Alex?”
Alex looked up at twilight and winced when he moved to fast. “yea twilight?”
“do you think you could walk down stairs?” she asked.
“not with what Rochelle did to me… I’ll just sleep on this floor for tonight, my helmet is cushioned and my suit is pretty warm.” He started to lie down and curl into a ball again.
“oh ok well… goodnight then.”
End Chapter 6 Part 1 (Alex’s Night)
Ok just to put this last bit on.. I’ve finished the cover art and it should be up around the time I post this and this Chapter will be put into 5 parts Alex’s, Rochelle’s, Tex’s, Stealth Rider’s (formally known as EDI) and Rainbow Dash’s. so have fun.
PS: I’m also considering doing it so you can follow your favourite if you like and it will play out from each of their perspectives. But it will then give less time if you don’t want all their perspectives. So I’ll just stick with this for now. Constructive Criticism would be nice and even if you think its bad because of one tiny thing.. please tell me so I can either improve it or do something different.
Amen Coco
“Amen is for Jesus”
“good now they both know what to get me :)
^ if you get this you are awesome..