//------------------------------// // Sentry Down! (Teen) // Story: Final Draft's Rough Drafts // by Final Draft //------------------------------// Shining was in jail and Flash was a mess. What were the reasons? Just take a guess. All it took was a little alcohol To incite the feud, to start the brawl But this is not where the story starts I’ve skipped over all the important parts Let us go back to the start of their day And find out how things wound up this way Flash the rookie stood at his post Taking his job more seriously than most He did not budge, nor did he move Standing statuesque like he had something to prove Shining, the captain, watched for a while The rookie’s integrity making him smile. He trotted over and stared into his eyes The rookie tried desperately to hide his surprise He straightened up more, swallowing hard Trying to appear as the perfect guard He saluted his captain, awaiting command Wondering just what the unicorn had planned. “At ease, Sentry,” Shining said at last And he took up his post right beside Flash “Thank you, Captain,” the rookie replied And he cracked his neck from side to side Minutes passed by and neither stallion spoke Until at last, Flash decided to crack a joke The punchline fell flat to Flash’s dismay He wanted more than anything to fly away The captain laughed just to be polite It was almost funny, but not quite. They both fell silent, Flash stared at the ground Keeping his lips shut, not making a sound The captain suddenly stood up straight Noticing Celestia approaching the gate Flash mimicked his captain, looking ahead Adjusting his hooves so they were evenly spread That’s when he noticed Celestia wasn’t alone The problem starts here—if only he’d known. A purple mare with wings and a horn (Princess Twilight Sparkle, the newest alicorn), Accompanied Celestia on her daily walk Flash wanted to say hi, but didn’t dare talk Guards were meant to be seen and not heard Protecting the grounds without saying a word Instead, he let his mouth fall agape As he admired her curves and admired her shape She took no notice of his awkward stare Even if she did, he didn’t care In his mind, they were already together Two peas in a pod and birds of a feather. Reality was different as he soon found out Because the purple alicorn gave a joyful shout “Shining! I missed you!” the mare exclaimed Is that his wife? I should be ashamed. Shining didn’t budge through the whole embrace No sign of emotion appeared on his face “At ease, guards,” Celestia commanded the two Now Flash could turn his head for a better view He saw his captain holding the mare Signs of love were clearly there