//------------------------------// // Chapter 1 // Story: Redo // by Roamingmoon //------------------------------// I still don’t own anything AWWWWW Okay so I’m writing and I’m not very good at intros so if these aren’t very good then sorry but I will never make a 500 word intro or an info chapter if you want info message me. Also please review Chapter 1 Confusion: Sam’s pov The first thing that Sam noticed was that he was not in bed. The second was that there was a slight breeze hitting his face. He groggily opened his eyes and tried to rub his eyes but hit himself instead. Pain explodes on his face and he yelps out. Slowly opening his eyes to find the reason he hurt himself and stares down at a diminutive hoof not a hand. For a few seconds he stares down at his new hoof, and then did a check of the rest of his body. Four hooves, short legs, small body, snout, small wings, and a small horn slowly he looks up at the sky and screams. “Ahhhhhhhhhhh” he” he screams for a full minute, and proceeds to the freaking out” Where am I, what am I doing here, and why am I a pony” he says while running around in circles and yelling at himself. Until he stops and gets a huge smile on his face” THIS IS awesome” Sam screams at the top of his lungs his smile slowly fades and he looks around at the giant trees and bushes. But why is everything so big or am I just a lot smaller He thinks to himself looking at his back and the under developed wings that sit there. Well it’s still awesome and makes me want to sing out he thinks while tears gather at the edge of his eyes. Until he looks around again and notices something” Where exactly am I” he asks nopony in particular. Scootaloo’s pov Scootaloo rubs the back of her head with her hoof and looks around the forest confused. Why did I feel like I should have come all the way out here, it’s so boring? Scootaloo thinks to herself and flaps her wings a few times in annoyance. Which reminds her that she can’t fly? Why can’t I fly yet I’m six years old and can’t fly, it’s embarrassing especially in front of Rainbow Dash she sighs. “This is awesome” Scootaloo hears someone yell and she turns in that direction. Who’s that? She says to herself as she runs in that direction. Until she reaches the edge of a small clearing and sees the lone foal in the middle. His black coat seems to absorb the sunlight around him, while his mane and tail seem to burn a fiery red in the slight breeze. His wings from the outside are black but when he stretches she sees the same fiery red that she saw on his mane and tail. He looks around and she dashes behind a tree eyes wide as plates at what she saw. He had a horn, she thought he was another Pegasus but he can’t be. I gotta act like rainbow Dash in this situation. She mentally slaps herself and then sets a stern look on her face and begins to trot out to talk to him until he speaks. “Where exactly am I” He says to nopony in particular. This makes her freeze for a moment before she continues forward a few more feet and say’s “HI”. He spins around and stares at her for a moment before his face breaks out in a wide grin and he runs up to her walking around her a few times with that smile still in place. Sam’s pov Sam flips around to see Scootaloo standing there looking at him. Oh my god, it’s Scootaloo I can’t believe it. He does a squeal in his head and a huge grin breaks out on his face. He runs up to her and trots around her a few times. She looks just like she does in the show wow. He says in his head. “Hi” Sam says still staring at her. “My name is Scootaloo what’s your” she asks him while looking at him weird. Oh dang I need a pony name, um… nightfire. No star streak. No. I got it. “My name is Star Spinner, but you can call me Star” He says feeling proud of the name. “Okay Star, um why are you out in the woods” she says cocking her head to the side. Uhhh why am I out here. “Um well I don’t really know I think I might be lost I was heading to ponyville” Sam says finally tearing his eyes from her to look at the woods. He looks at her from the corner of his eye as she processes this and comes to a decision. “Well I can show you to town if you want. Where are you staying” She asks looking at Sam. Well I have nowhere, should I tell the truth. That works. “Um well I don’t have anywhere to stay yet, I thought I could find a place when I got there” Sam says while looking at the ground slightly red in the face. Scootaloo’s pov Scootaloo looks at Star Spinner for a moment than she understands. He has nowhere to go like I didn’t; I should ask Rainbow Dash if he can stay with us for a little while. “Um I can ask if you could stay with me and Rainbow Dash” She says quickly. He looks up at her and says” Really do you think she would let me” his eyes where filled with hope and joy. She gets excited to at his reaction and says “yeah”. We should go soon so we can ask Rainbow Dash before dark.” Can you run fast” She asks getting really excited. “I’ve never needed to, but I can try” He says while blushing. “Well let’s go than” She yells as she starts to run toward the trees. Sam’s pov Sam looks at the spot where Scootaloo was a second ago, then her running form and groans “Hey wait up”. He takes off in a sprint to catch up. Wow running feels so natural. Wait am I catching up to her, yes I’m fast. The burn in his legs feels great as he eats up the ground between them eventually catching up to her. He feels like he can go much faster and looks over at her “So we just go straight right” “Umm yeah, why” She looks over at me and sees me next to her with a mischievous smile. I reach down and pick her up depositing her on my back. I hear a small hey, before I go full tilt. Scootaloo’s pov She felt her hooves leave the ground and landed on Stars back.” Hey” was all she could say before he flew forward so fast his legs where a blur. She looked behind them to see small flames flicking out behind him. Than feels him slow down and eventually stop “Why did you slow down you had a flame trail behind you” She asks still looking at where his trail was. He turned his head, that was still smiling softly and he gestured in front of him “I think we are here”. To be continued… So first actual chapter I think its good it makes me feel good. Scootaloo was my choice because I thought she would be the easiest to have except Star so fast. Also they are both young Scoot around six, Star around eight in body. I’ll see if I can get another chapter soon. Review please and comment all you like