Chapter 5: Pinkie Pie
It was a sunny day all the ponies were talking and all obiously working . Especialy Pinkie pie she had to fill in many orders today , it was a very busy day . Pinkie pie came with a fresh batch of cookies and cup cakes thee cup cakes had strawberry frosting on top and the cookies had chocolate chips and marshmallows . They treats smelled great and all the pony's came and gave her bits she was just about to finish her last order "That will be 2 bits please , have a good day !" said pinkie . Then all of a sudden her tail started to twich violently and she started to shake and she had the feeling that some thing was wrong because her pinkie sense told her that there was danger so pinkie tod Mr and Mrs Cake that she had to go very urgently some where and they said yes and pinkie smiled and said," thanks i knew you guys would understand , bye gotta go !" Mrs. Cake said ," be careful pinkie dont be too long ". "Okie dokie lokie !" pinkie said and started to run off to rarity's boutuiqe and see if she eas okay she thought What if some thing bad did happen to rarity ! then she started to panik and ran faster and faster till she was there and went closer and closer she heard some pony sobbing ! Then pinkie said," Oh no i hope nothing bad happened to Rarity!" Then she opened the door and followed the weeping of Rarity and saw her covered in blankets .
Then, pinkie came and took the blanket off rarity and saw something that she didn't expectand did not want to see and pinkie screamed in horror and said"rara-rarity isss tthat youu?!" Then rarity said " Dont look at me i look horrible!!!" . " Who did this to you rarity !" " i cccant tell you " said rarity . Come on pinkie you gotta make rarity spill the beans! ",I pinkie swear i wont tell any pony !" said pinkie pie . "pinkie pie go away .. just leave me alone ... Im sorry but i cant tell you about this , Now go awwwayy !" rarity said . "B-butt i, okay ill leave.. I hope you get better soon ...!" pinkie pie said while trying to leave . After she closed the door rarity started to cry again . The scene was horrifying with lots of blood she wondered what happened to raity . And then she heard rarity screaming and crying and pinkie thought that she had enough of this and that shw would try to finf ouut what happened to rarity no matter what happens . She thought ill find this pony criminal no matter what ill try to stop that pony , pinkie pie style !! . And the more pinkie thought about rarity the more pinkie pie got depressed .
After, pinkies hair went from poofy to straight and depressed . "im going to find out soon ... What a minute since when did i start thinking so much ?" she thought " Oh well , soon enough " pinkie said sadly . She started to walk bery slwly because she was thinking about rarity . When she got home she started to plan something , the next morning she was going to tell allof her friends . She decideded that she was going to get revenge
Aouthors note: i had to write this all over again because i realized that i wrote it in the comments section , i hope that this was a better chapter than the others sorry if this was too short , please comment and reveie :) , :( thank you :)