//------------------------------// // Chapter 10 Ending Two // Story: My Little Apple Pie // by Jeremy Llama //------------------------------// "Hey guys sorry for not updating my birthday came up on March 6th a few days ago and I've been more busy than usual anyways I started writing Chapter 10 Ending two but I felt like it wasn't very good. So tell me what you think about it and be as harsh as you can I need to know so I can write a better version. (It doesn't seem very well written so tell me waht you think about it so far and most of all be honest.) NO SPOILERS IN HERE YET. Also incomplete." ~4 Years later~ All my life I have dealt with everything the same way I just ignored it. That was until a special orange pony named Apple Jack came by and changed that. She was my family nothing will change that...Or so I thought. Today was Apple Jack's birthday. So I decided to go get some furniture and such for her bedroom. I told Apple Jack that I was going to buy something for her birthday. I was ready to go and heard a knock at the door. I told Apple Jack to go upstairs to her room. We never get visitors here. I opened the door and that's when I knew today wasn't going to be a good day. I saw several ponies of a many color. Pink, Yellow, White, Purple, and white again. But no blue. I wondered why. I also wondered why they were here. Although I did know why, but I ignore it. "Um...Hello?" I said. Celestia began "Hello have you seen 2 differently colored ponies?" Barely audible she whispered "There's no use lying." Although she said it in a way where I wouldn't take offence to it. I was silent. I thought this day would come a few years ago but...I wish it wasn't today... I could feel tears coming. "Y-...Yeah... Why ya looking for her?" I said. "Twilight Sparkles I need you to come here and explain for me." She said. After she said that she came closer smiled shyly and coughed. "Well you see whenever a pony is in this universe, the universe in our world loses it time span giving ours to yours and also changes the atmosphere as in this planet's atmosphere having mostly hate it would change the atmosphere in Ponyville to hate but replace the one in this planet's to love." Everything was going in fast motion nowadays. even right now as we speak it's going to fast for me to bear... "So you're going to take Apple Jack? Also where's the other pony?" I said. "Well we've been looking for them both for the past 14 days." Twilight said. Does this mean... that My Little Dashie hasn't happened yet? Or does it mean time is reversing in an area..... "Um sir your face is becoming pale..." Twilight said. I was at shock I'm about to lose Apple Jack and if I keep her here the world will eventually cease to exist... most of all Where was Dashie now? At that one guy's house? Time is going by fast. "I...D-...." Is all I can mutter out right now. something happened that made me go stiller than stone... "Hey Pa ya there?" Apple Jack yelled down. "Um did Apple Jack just call you...Pa?" Images of her flew through my mind and I couldn't bear it.