Opening Notes
*(As per Tuners advise in previous comments, I am nixing the narrator role. It was really just a way to have an introduction to the story and, while it was amusing to me to have, it still doesn't have the right feel. Keep in mind that I am going to re edit the stories once I am finished at least with chapter 10, so yeah keep that in mind.)
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Vinyl had not been the quickest on her hooves, and when the opportunity arose, she'd ride a carriage rather than wear down her precious DJing hooves on the cobblestone back in Canterlot. Vinyl took a second to catch her breath as she entered into Ponyville, and took that moment to look at her hooves. Her forehooves were bruised and scratched from the rugged path and from the earlier tumble down the hill. 'Oh well that's just perfect' she thought glumly. A glint across her eyes caught her attention as she kept scanning herself. She crooked her head over to her tail and noticed a piece of her glasses was buried in it. She gently picked it out with her magic and rested it in front of her. The deep violet glint of the glasses reflected off of the streetlamps. Vinyl took a few deep breaths and concentrated on her task at hand; if only to avoid collapsing into sobbing fits. She shook her eyes free of her loose tears and trotted farther into town, doubling her efforts to find a doctor.
Just a few homes away from the Carousel Boutique, Doctor Whooves was finishing his latest medical thesis statement on how muffins can help prevent tooth decay, per request from Pinkie. He knew that the research was entirely biased, plus he wasn't a dentist, but he did the study anyway, and was actually surprised at the findings. He had also gained some unlikely assistance few some lovely ponies, inlcuding his new employee, Derpy Hooves. "Ms.Hooves, could you please take this file upstairs for me." "Sure thing," Derpy chipperly replied. 'It's quiet an honor to have her here,' Whooves thought. 'Plus, I always get my mail when she comes in in the evening which saves me the hassle of going down to the post office.' Derpy was just bouncing down the stairs, when the window next to her crashed open. When the dust settled and Whooves refocused his attention, he now saw standing on top of Derpy was... another Derpy? 'What the hay is this!?' Whooves thought incrediously. 'Am I going insane now?' "Um...Ms.Hooves, who is your friend there?" The two mares looked up at the doctor at once and after some scrambled shuffling, Derpy was the first to speak. "Oh, my bad. This is my twin sister, Ditzy Doo. She works with the Weather Patrol, so I'm not surprised you haven't met her." Oh dear Celestia, I AM insane. The Doctor wobbled slightly in an attempt to prevent himself from fainting. "Hey sis," Ditzy turned to her sister and smiled goofily, "I needed to stop by and tell you the you didn't have work tomorrow." "Well, duh Ditzy, It's Saturday; so of course I wouldn't have work tomorrow." Derpys eyes shifted quickly over to Whooves, then back to Ditzy. "Then why has your boss made me remind you these past couple weeks,"Ditzy responded. "B-Because," Derpy quickly replied, "I was kinda distracted." Her head shifted slightly at this, scanning over the Doctor. 'Its not really that much of a lie, is it' She blushed at the thought. "Anyway, it was your turn to watch Dinky, so you need to head home befo-"
The room was invaded with a thunderous crash as Vinyl rushed in, out of breath. "The sign outside said...the S-sign...I-i-iii need a doctor RIGHT NOW," she finally wheezed. "Please, catch your breath, miss," doctor Whooves strode over to the gasping mare and looked her over, "I'm sure all you need is some first aid for those wounds, so if you just come this way-" "NO," Vinyl shouted, nearly knocking Whooves over in one deft movement, "I need you to follow me NOW." "For what" "No time, just grab whatever doctor stuff you need, and follow me." "Derpy, if you would," Whooves curtly asked. "Of Course," she replied as she flew up the flight of stairs. " Is there any thing you need me to do?" Ditzy walked up to Vinyl as she was turning out the door. "Um, yes you can," Vinyl said, "do you know where Fluttershy lives?" "Yes, of course I do." "Can you fly to her cottage and tell her I found a doctor." "Yes, at once." And with that, she was off. "Whew, Thank goodness," Vinyl slumpled against the wall and passed out. "Oh horseapples," the Doctor cursed as he caught her mid-fall.
Ditzy skirted the sky in a bee-line for the cottage when she was intercepted by a blue blur. She was lucky her good eye had caught her at the last second, or they would've collided in a spectacular crash. "Oh ponyfeathers," Ditzy swore as she spun around. "Are you OK Rainbow Dash?" Woah, Deja Vu. Dash wash buried up to her wings in a Nimbus cloud. Nmphhehh... "What was that" ...Mrphhhmm. "I said I'm alright," Dash replied, as she pulled herslf out of the cloud cover. " What are you in a rush for?" Ditzy asked. "I could ask you the same thing," Dash replied. "Actually, I was headed to Fluttershy's house to tell her that Doctor Whooves was headed on over." "Oh, well you're in luck," Dash smugly exclaimed, "I was headed that way myself to get some food for tank. If you'd like I can go ahead and tell her myself." "Thanks Dash." Ditzy turned and floated down towards Ponyville as Dash returned on her journey.
Fluttershy had just settled down in her chair to observe the sleeping mare when she heard a knock at the door. "Hi Shy," Dash said quietly. "Oh, hi Rainbow, Please do come inside."
TO BE CONTINUED
Authoritative notes: Please don't rage about the Derpy/Ditzy sisters idea. It took alot of searching in my mind to figure out if this was right or not. On another note, if anyone would like to make a derpy and ditzy scene for this, that would be greatly appreciated. Also, I realize the the chapters are kinda short, but they will keep getting longer as the chapters build, hopfully to building like a musical piece. Thank you for reading. Tsubaki out.