//------------------------------// // Derpy gets tickled // Story: Pony Tickling Stories // by Unicron //------------------------------// Derpy gets tickled Before I begin, this is my version of Derpy, She is not retarded, she just has an eye problem, she is a young mother, she is a little clumsy, but not stupid, she is a well-educated pony, it’s just an eye problem. Note: I wrote this on paper before I typed it, and it was really early, “Good morning muffin.” Derpy called out from the kitchen table. Dinky ran downstairs and looked at her mom, she looked tired, the coffee wasn’t finished yet. “are you tired mommy?” Dinky asked “Yes muffin, I’m very, very tired.” Derpy said It was so early it was dark out. “I know to make you not tired.” Dinky said “How muffin?” Derpy mumbled “Lay on the table.” Dinky said “Lay on the table?” Derpy asked “You sure muffin?” “Yes mommy” Dinky answered Derpy got up and sat on the kitchen table, she then laid her head back. Dinky came over and moved Derpy’s legs in an x position. Derpy thought to herself “What is she doing?” Dinky got some rope and tied her mother’s legs down to the legs of the table. “Muffin? What are you doing.” Derpy said worryingly “You’ll see…” Dinky grinned Dinky plucked a few feathers from her mother’s wings Derpy finally figured out what Dinky was about to do “Muffin, you know how sensitive I am.” Derpy said. “I’m not tired anymore hon, please kiddo, see I up, not tired this is me, not tired!” Dinky ignored it, she put a feather to her chest, she slid it down all the way to her waist. This made Derpy giggle slightly at the sensation. Dinky then looked at her mother’s waist, she bent down and blew a huge raspberry, Derpy squealed really hard. “MUFFINN STAAHAHAHAHP WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH!!!!” Dinky blew another raspberry on her waist, this made Derpy jump and struggle in the ropes. Dinky then went into the living room and came out with a belt and a feathery, fuzzy blanket, she wrapped the blanket around Derpy and wrapped the belt around her and the table, Derpy could not struggle as much now. Dinky used her magic to vibrate the feathery blanket, Derpy screamed and laughed at the top of her lungs, Dinky had never ever heard her mommy scream like that before. Tears came down her derp eyes. Derpy laughed manically, and uncontrollably. “MUFFFIIINN PLLLEEEHEHEHEHEHEEHEESE NOO MOREE. Dinky put two feathers under her front legs and stroked them, while the feathery blanket kept vibrating, parts of the blanket became wet, Derpy had wet herself, Derpy struggled to breathe while her own daughter tortured her. Dinky was getting tired of using her magic to vibrate the blanket with her magic, so she stopped. She took the belt off, then the blanket, revealing the thin slender, grey body of Derpy, who was sweating very hard, while panting. Since Derpy was stretched out, Dinky could see her ribcage, Dinky grinned and hopped on her mom’s belly, Dinky took two hairbrushes and slowly stroked both side of her ribcage, Derpy of course being super sensitive, wet herself again. Derpy laughed harder than ever, she begged Dinky to cease the infernal torture. Dinky stopped stroking her ribcage and moved to her sides, Dinky started to gently rub her sides, in an up and down motion, Derpy just squeezed her eyes shut , and tried not to pee herself again. She laughed helplessly. Dinky grinned at the sight of her mother’s distress. “Choochie, Choochie coo!” She taunted. Derpy attempted to break free from the restraints, but to no avail, she was stuck on that table, Derpy had to make an excuse, and fast. “HON I GOTA GO TO WORK!!!!! YOU GOTAAHAHHAHAH LEME UP!!!” “You think I’m stupid, it’s Sunday, the mail doesn’t run on Sunday heeheehee.” Dinky tickled her sides a bit faster. Dinky moved her hooves to Derpy’s warm chest, she stroked her chest up and down, and it made Derpy in a state of total laughter. Tears just rained from Derpy’s face, it was too much for the Mail Mare. Dinky stopped to get a drink of water “Muffin….stop…please……muffin…” she panted. Derpy caught her breath, as Dinky drank her water. After Dinky finished drinking her water, she went back to her squirming mother, this time she tried to bribe Dinky with candy and toys. “I don’t want those things; I just want to tickle you.” Dinky replied. Dinky took one hairbrush and stroked the top of Derpy’s left back hoof, Derpy struggled some more, but that didn’t work. Dinky stroked her hoof up and down, Derpy threw her head back, trying her absolute best not to wet herself, but that was extremely hard. Dinky got out another brush and did the same with her right back hoof. Derpy screamed, she swung her head back and forth, she kicked all four of her legs, and she tried jumping in the ropes, anything, just anything, to get off that table. “MUUFFFFANNNN PLEASE, YOU KILLING MEEHEEHEEHEE.” Derpy screamed. Dinky stopped tickling her hooves, and moved the brushes over to her thighs, it was too much and Derpy wet herself again. Dinky then tickled her a little bit below her waist, that was Derpy’s tickle spot, she screamed and kicked, and begged. Dinky tickled faster; and then ocean of tears started to form below the table. Dinky finally was satisfied, she had tortured her mom enough, she stopped and untied her. “I’m sorry mommy, you’re not mad right. Derpy even though untied, still lay on the table, she was regaining her breath, and sweating “No mommy’s not angry with ya,” Derpy panted The sun was just coming up, Derpy eventually regained her strength and got up from the table, “How…about we go out to eat breakfast….” She still panted. And so they went out to eat, and went shopping and had a great time I have no ideas at the momet SO tell me which pony should I tickle, message me or say in commets, If theres time I will fill out you request, I will do origanal charecters, just make sure the owner aproves.