The sequel is out!
Comes the Sunset, the sequel to Vengeance of Dawn, has just been submitted for approval. You can find it here. I plan to take it in a bit of a different direction from this story, in ways that will hopefully become apparent as it goes along, and I really don't want it to seem like a rehash of this fic but with Sunset Shimmer as the villain so if you spot any of that please let me know.
Other than that, hopefully Comes the Sunset will seem a bit bigger than Vengeance, larger in scope, but most of all I hope that all of you who followed this fic to the end will go on to enjoy the sequel too.
1 chapter is up so far, and I'm already working on the second.