Wake up. See This. What do? (Comment driven story)

by RazortheAwesome

Cuddles

Despite everything good about this pony (and there are quite a few good things about her that are good) you don't let your guard down even for a moment. Rarity tried to play it nice at first, but then look how that turned out. For now though you don't move. You look around and notice that the doors and windows are indeed closed, but they don't appear to be locked.

You don't see any clocks around, so you have no idea what time it is at the moment, though from the look outside, its still probably really late at night. Probably like three in the morning or so.

You don't see any ponies around either, at least none inside the house. You don't see any outside either, so you're still okay. At least for now.

After you check the room, you look back at Fluttershy to see if she is truly sleeping. Surely enough, she is. You can see the rising and falling of her stomach and follow her the rhythm of her breathing, she is asleep. She's asleep, and that's all she appears to be. She hasn't done anything yet.

As you watch Fluttershy sleep, you suddenly realize something again........ You try to think of infinitely many things to realize, but all your mind goes to is.

"BY GOD, ODIN, ZEUS, HORUS, SLENDERMAN, AND WHOEVER THIS CELESTIA PERSON EVEN IS SHE IS F***ING ADORABLE!!!!!"

Also, you're pretty sure you died for a moment due to your heart stopping from sheer adorableness before restarting again, but you forget about that as soon as it happens.

You cannot control yourself, you throw your arms around Fluttershy and pull her closer to you. You're snuggling with her as much as she's snuggling with you.

"Mmm... so good..." you think you hear her mumble as you pull her close, but you don't pay attention. All there is is the adorableness that you are currently cuddling with. She's like a giant teddy bear, then again that's also must be what you're like to her. Also you're not entirely sure, but you think you can see the smile on her face grow larger as you pull her closer.

You lay there cuddling with her for several moments. Time stops for you, there is nothing else, just you, and the adorable.

Eventually, you notice her mane is just about in your face. You let your curiosity get the better of you and lean in closer to sniff it. It smells nice, just like a freshly mown meadow, also cherries. You're not sure how those mix together, but apparently they do.

You feel your hands move down and grab the places where her wings meet her back and begin to massage them as you hug her, she lets out another moan as you do. You can feel yourself drifting off back to sleep. There is nothing else for you right now. You don't care about Twilight, or the animals, or what is obviously Rainbow Dash staring at you from the window above you... all this is is...

Wait what...

Instantly, your eyes shoot back open and look straight up. On the other side of the window right above Fluttershy's bed, you see a blue coated face staring back at you. There's only one blue coated pony here that you know of....

You feel your heart rate begin to go up (which confirms for you that you are in fact alive) as you feel the beginnings of panic begin to set in. You don't really don't know what to do right now. You've got Fluttershy on top of you so there's nowhere to go, and even if there was there.... wait...

You take another look up at the pony in the window that you think is Rainbow Dash. As you look closer, you realize something.

That's not Rainbow Dash.

It was another pony, and it had a blue coat, but it wasn't Rainbow Dash. For one, it was a unicorn, and for two, it didn't have Rainbow Dash's signature mane. Instead, half of her mane was dark blue in color while the other half was a sort of off white color.

You have absolutely no idea who this pony is, but whoever she is, she seems worried. Incredibly worried. Like really, really, really incredibly worried.

"Get out of there!" You think you can see her mouth to you while making some kind of weird gestures with her hooves. Unfortunately, since she's on the other side of the glass, you can't hear a word she's saying. Also you have no idea what she is gesturing with her hooves, as they lack any digits with which to make signals.

You don't pay much attention to her and turn your attention back to Fluttershy. As you move you head up to look at her, you slam your face right into her's, accidentally headbutting her. It seemed as if Fluttershy had apparently moved several inches closer to you while you were snuggling. Thankfully you don't hit her to hard.

Your accidental headbutt though, causes Fluttershy to moan again and open her eyes. Great, now you've woken her up. Nice going genius. You don't see it, but the blue unicorn in the window above you is looking absolutely terrified right now. Also she ducks so she can't be seen.

"I'm sorry," you say to her as you watch her wake up. She doesn't respond to you. Once her eyes are open, you can see her face redden and she looks down at the position she's in. She doesn't let go. Instead, she just looks back up at you and smiles for a bit.

"Um, I'm just wondering if it's okay if I hold you down against your will for a little bit?" she suddenly asks you. The moment those word's hit your ears, your eyes snap completely open. The adorable induced euphoria is now completely gone.

"F***!" you say in your head. This was what you feared, that she might turn out like Rarity. Then again however, she isn't like her. You also think that her asking you permission for that is kind of strange. You know it might be a bit of a risk, but you decide to try it anyway.

"I'd rather you d-" you begin to say before you're suddenly cut off. You try to say the next word, but find yourself unable to, like someone's taken your ability to talk.

Its then that you realize, you're looking right into her eyes. Her large.... round.... intoxicating.... cyan eyes....

Suddenly, you feel yourself shut down. You try to move your limbs but find yourself unable to. You try to speak, but can't do that either. You can't even blink.

Then suddenly, you feel yourself begin to relax as the euphoria from before begins to set in. Slowly but surely, you're feeling good again. You think that....

All of your thoughts are interrupted when a white cloth encased in a golden glow suddenly falls in front of Fluttershy's face and presses up against her snout. You see her eyes go wide for a moment before they suddenly glaze over and she falls to the side and off of you, apparently having been knocked out.

"See, I told you we should have told him to avoid her!"

"Well excuuuuuuuuuuuuse me. How was I supposed to know that this would happen?"

You suddenly hear two very familiar voices say.

Your ability to move suddenly returning, you sit back up like the bed below you suddenly became lava and look right into the eyes of Lyra and Bon Bon. A bottle and white rag floating next to the former with a golden glow.

You feel your heart instantly swell with joy upon seeing them again.

"Lyra! Bon Bon!" You practically scream as you practically jump out of the bed and tackle both of them in a hug. You are so glad to see them right now you can't contain it.

"It's good to see you too," Lyra says to you as she returns the hug, apparently having missed you as well.

"Not that I'm complaining," Bon Bon began to say, "But we probably should get out of here. Right now."

At that moment, the logical part of your brain returns, and you realize that Bon Bon is right. There will be time for hugging later, but for now. You NEED to get out of here right now.

You let go of them both and stand back up, only to realize that you still aren't wearing any clothes again.

"Uh... give me a moment," you say to them as you run over to where you let your clothes (which miraculously are still there) and quickly throw them on. If you're going back outside, you're not going out naked.

"Oh, nice threads," Lyra says to you as she watches you get dressed. You think its kind of weird that she does, but then you remember that these ponies typically don't wear clothes so being naked is probably nothing to them.

"They're Big Macintosh's," you reply. "He lent me them while I was working at Sweet Apple Acres."

"You were working at-" Bon Bon begins to say before you cut her off.

"It's a long story. I'll tell you later," you say right as you finish adjusting the belt and getting them on.

"All right, let's go," Lyra says as she can see that you're done.

Right as all of you turn to leave however, a certain obstacle blocks your path. The little white bunny (you think his name is Angel) is standing in the doorway to Fluttershy's room, and boy does he looked pissed.

Almost as instantaneously as you see him, he suddenly jumps up and flies right at you with his leg extended. Right before his jump kick can even get close to you however, Lyra holes the rag out in front of him. The bunny slams right into the rag, and then falls like a mosquito. A quick check confirms that he is indeed out cold.

"Did you..." you turn to Lyra, somewhat concerned for the little bunny.

"Relax, its just chloroform," Lyra responds in the most casual tone possible. "I just knocked him out, that's all."

"What are we gonna do with him?" Bon Bon asked as she looked down at the poor little bunny.

"Hmm..." Lyra vocalized as she raised her head in though. Then suddenly, you can practically see the imaginary light bulb go on in her head as she comes up with an idea. She then sets down the chloroform bottle and the rag, then picks up the bunny and walks back over towards the sleeping Fluttershy.

"Did you just tie that bunny up?" You ask Lyra.

"Yep," Lyra responded.

"Using her hair..." Bon Bon adds, her face holding just as much shock as yours.

"Yep," Lyra responds again. You and Bon Bon just look at each other for a moment. You gotta admit, it is a strange idea, but given the circumstances, you don't really think you can argue about them right now.

"All right, lets get going," you say to them.

"Yes, lets," Bon Bon adds as you, her, and Lyra all walk out the door.

Right as you exit Fluttershy's little cottage however, you find another pony waiting for you. Thankfully, its not Twilight Sparkle.

"Oh, thank Celestia!" she says to the three of you. "I thought for sure that he was gone when I saw her wake up." You notice that this is the pony you saw staring at you from the window from earlier. Now that you can see her more clearly, you can clearly tell that she isn't Rainbow Dash.

"Ah don't worry about it," Lyra said to her as she walked forward. "I had it under control."

"Except when you didn't," Bon Bon adds, which causes both you and the blue pony to giggle a little bit at Lyra's embarrassment.

"So, this is the human you were talking about?" The blue pony asks as she looks up at you.

"Yep!" Lyra says excitedly as she walks up next to her. "This is our friend Minuette," Lyra says to you as she puts a hoof around her. "She's here to help us."

"Nice to meet you," Minuette says as she holds out a hoof.

"Nice to meet you too," you reply as you shake her hoof, you're just about to give her your name when Bon Bon interrupts you two.

"There will be time for introductions later," Bon Bon says as she walks past all of you. "Lets just get back to camp. We don't have any idea what else might be out here. Or if anything purple might show up," she says as she looks at you.

"Oh right," Lyra says as she turns around. "Come on, lets go." As she says that, she starts walking forward. Bon Bon follows her as does Minuette. You, with nothing else to do and no better ideas, follow them.

Eventually, after not long at all. The four of you enter the forest they mentioned in the note. Apparently, Fluttershy lived right next to it.

"Careful," Minuette said to you as you entered. "There are monsters in this forest. Best not to wake them." You silently laugh to yourself as you hear that, but then you look around and notice all three of them staring at you.

"Oh," you say. "You weren't joking..." you say with a stupid smile on your face, hoping to god that she was. You don't get an answer. Instead, they all just keep walking through the forest. You follow them.

After several minutes or so of walking, you're staring to think that Minuette was lying to you when she mentioned the monsters, cause you haven't seen a single once since you've entered this forest. If there are any in here, then either you're extremely lucky (which you kind of doubt), or Lyra, Bon Bon and Minuette just knew how to avoid them. You assume the later is more likely to be true.

Regardless, the four of you keep walking. Lyra and Minuette are in front of you, their horns alight with what you are calling "flashlight magic" cause that's just what they are doing, while Bon Bon is a bit behind you, hopefully checking to make sure nothing is following you.

After about a minute or so of walking, the four of you finally find what you are looking for.

"Oh my god a giant rock!" You exclaim as Lyra and Minuette shine their lights on it.

"That's right," Lyra replies. "A giant rock." You honestly cannot believe what you are seeing. A giant rock. Its a rock and its giant. You can't help but be fascinated by just how giant and rocky this giant rock is.

"Oh but its not just a giant rock," Minuette says as she shuts down her flashlight magic. "In a moment, all will be revealed." You take her word for it, but in your mind you know its gonna be touch to be that giant rock.

After a moment, Lyra shuts off her flashlight magic as well. The two of them then point their horns at the giant rock. you then see the giant rock glow with a mixture of gold and blue from their horns, and then suddenly, the rock moves several feet to the left. Behind it, is a cave.

"Is that a cave?" you ask.

"You bet its a cave!" Lyra replies excitedly.

"And we're going in there?" you ask.

"Of course," Lyra replies. "We said we had a hiding spot didn't we?" She looks up at you with a huge, yet a the same time incredibly stupid, grin on her face.

"It might not be much," Bon Bon says as she steps up next to you. "But it's our best bet." You really can't argue with her on that one. Really, you have no better ideas of where to go. Plus, this place has a giant rock blocking the entrance, so you can't complain there.

"All right," you say to them. "Lets go inside." You say as the four of you walk into the cave past the giant rock. Once you're on the other side, Lyra and Minuette turn back around and close off the cave with the giant rock behind you, effectively sealing the entrance.

The four of you walk through the cave in silence for a few moments before you see a light at the end. As you reach the light, what you see kind of shocks you.

Inside the cave, you find amounts to a small oasis. There's a rather large pool of water in the middle (large enough for swimming) with a small river branching off of it into another, deeper part of the cave, a couple of trees around the pool, the ground is made up of soft dirt and now rock, and above you, you notice a rather large, skylight like hole above you to let in the light. Kind of like a hole in the mountain.

"Wow..." is all you can say.

"You like it?" Lyra says as she walks up next to you. "It's our secret spot. We come here to hang out every so often and get away from it all." You don't respond, as you can't help but stare in awe at this place. Its kind of amazing that this is even here.

Over by one of the trees, you can see three tents set up, and another, almost pinkish purple pony with some grapes and a strawberry on her rump sleeping in one of them.

"Ah, she's sleeping," Minuette says in a kind of disappointed manner as she walks on over to the tents, you, Lyra and Bon Bon follow her.

"Berry... hey Berry," Minuette says to the sleeping pony as she nudges her in the face with her snout.

"Mmmm... mmm.... five more minutes," the pony says as she rolls over.

"No Berry, now," Minuette says to her. "Wake up!" She pokes the pony more furiously as she says that.

"All right, all right I'm up," the pony says as she sits up and rubs a hoof over her eyes. Once she stops, you see her look right at you.

"This is the human, Berry," Minuette says to her as she walks up next to her.

"So it is," the pony says as it stands up and walks over towards you. The pony stops a few feet in front of you and looks up at you. You don't move, and Lyra and Bon Bon are still on both sides of you. If they trust this pony, you see no reason why you shouldn't.

"I gotta say," the pony says as she looks you up and down and takes you in. "You are something to look at." She smiles as those words leave her lips. Minuette then walks up to her and puts a hoof around her neck.

"This is my friend Berry Punch," Minuette says to you.

"She's Minuette's marefriend," Lyra then says rather bluntly.

"LYRA!" Minuette practically screams as her face becomes red.

"Oh come on," Lyra replies. "Everypony already knows that you two are dating each other so you..." she stops talking when she notices Bon Bon glaring at her right through you. At that, Lyra just looks away from her and off to the left. Berry Punch just giggles at that.

"Nice to meet you, Mr. Human," Berry Punch says to you as she holds out a hoof like Minuette did earlier.

"Nice to meet you too," you reply as you shake her hoof. "And by the way my name is [insert=name]." As you let go of her hoof, you turn to Lyra. "So how did you guys..."

"Oh, we ran into them after Twilight and Applejack showed up," Lyra responded.

"They told us about your predicament and well, we agreed to help." Minuette responded.

"After they crashed through our wall and made furious love to us in an epic foursome of course," Berry Punch then adds. At that, both Minuette and Bon Bon blush simultaneously instantaneously. You just put on the best poker face you can.

After a minute or so of this, you take a seat right in the middle of all the tents while they walk around and take care of some things. What they are doing you really have no idea. After a while, Berry Punch comes back over to talk to you with Lyra.

"I see what you mean, Lyra," Berry Punch says as she steps closer to you. "I can smell it on him from all the way over there." At that, you are really confused. Rainbow Dash mentioned earlier something about your smell. You've forgotten about it for a while, but now that Berry Punch brought it up, its suddenly at the forefront of your mind again.

"What are you talking about?" you ask her. At that, Lyra just laughs for a moment and rubs the back of her head with her hoof.

"You see..." she begins to say. "Its something I had my suspicions about, but I wasn't able to confirm it until I saw you again..." she begins to trail off.

"Lyra..." you say. You really don't want to be left in the dark on this one.

"Twilight must have cast a heat spell on you," she then says. At that, you're even more confused. Yeah it makes sense somewhat, but it still doesn't explain at lot of things. "You see..." Lyra continues. "We ponies only go into season a couple times a year, and its the only time we can really get pregnant. However, those who can't wait, they can have a 'heat spell' cast on them that will induce the effects of heat even when they're not in season. Since you're not a pony and well, since we don't go into season for another couple of months, Twilight must have cast a heat spell on you so she could well... have sex with you right there."

Suddenly... everything makes sense. THAT'S WHY every mare in this town has been going crazy around you. Rainbow Dash mentioned your smell, so since Twilight must have cast that spell on you, you must have been letting out a scent associated with heat, which is what was driving these ponies to want to have their way with you. You're guessing that Applejack must have been incredibly strong willed to be able to resist it. No wonder all of these ponies wanted to do you, it was because you smelled like a stallion in heat, and they couldn't control themselves around you.

"So..." you say to her as your mind processes all of this. "How long does it..."

"Last?" Lyra interrupts. "Usually a few days, maybe a little longer if its a strong one." That makes sense to you, but then suddenly another realization hits you.

"Wait..." you as you look at Lyra nervously... "If I have a heat spell on me..." you pause for a moment before asking the next question. "Then how come you aren't affected? How come any of you aren't affected?" Now you're getting kind of nervous. After all, you are technically trapped in here with these four mares.

"We are," Lyra responds. You kind of didn't want to hear that. "In fact we're feeling it right now. Its just that since we all.... prefer mares over stallions...." she pauses to blush a little bit as she explains this. "We don't really want to have sex with you per se." She pauses for a moment and starts flailing her hooves around as if she's just said something wrong. "Don't get me wrong. You're attractive and all, for a human I mean... but I just don't..."

"Its all right," you say to her as you stand back up. You don't know why but you pat her on the head as you do. You're actually kind of relieved to hear that. You've had your suspicions about what was driving these ponies insane for a while, but now it all makes sense. You're really glad you met Lyra, one of the few ponies who is not only willing to help you, but is not willing to jump on you as a result of what happened.

"Can you remove it?" you ask her. Its a logical question.

"Unfortunately I can't," Lyra responds. "With heat spells, the only thing we can really do is wait for it to wear off. Since you've been here for a couple of days, I'm guessing that it should be better by morning." That kind of makes you feel better. Then suddenly, another realization hits you.

"Wait," you say. "Were you affected before. I mean when I first met you?"

"Yeah, well... It kind of did," Lyra begins to say. "But since we were kind of well... 'occupied' we really didn't notice until afterwards."

"What do you mean occupied?" you ask her. The moment those words leave your mouth, Bon Bon walks back over to you three. In her mouth are two things. One of them is a bong, the same bong from their house. The other one, is an incredibly large bag of a grass like substance. Lyra just throws you a devious smile as you take that sight in. You don't even notice Minuette walk up as you do.

"Oh f*** the hell yes!" are the only words that can leave your mouth.