When I Cry

by Brony Hectic


By the Entrance at 9:56

Thanks to Your overlord Diarch for editing this chapter and putting up with my grammatically incorrect bullshit.


"Well that was fun, to say the least," Dim said, chuckling to himself. These last few day's have been so hectic. He now began to think to himself, Who could have guessed that in two days I would be in a relationship someone I met in the previous two days? If you told me that this would happen, I'd call you crazy. Dim didn't think to himself or make a sound until he got home, he needed silence or he'd go insane. he merely enjoyed the beautiful scenery Ponyville had to offer, the leaves blowing in the trees, the grass waving side to side, the mid after-noon sky above.

"I'm home Mom," Dim said as he entered the house.

"Welcome back Dim, how was your play date with your new friend?" Dim's mother asked, she was always curious about Dim's new friends. He never really had many, he preferred to be alone with his thoughts and she knew that.

"You don't know the half of it..." Dim spoke softly under his breath.

"What was that?" she asked

"Oh, um, I'll tell you later. By the way, when's Dad coming home from work?" Dim said trying to change the subject, he didn't want to tell his Mom quite yet.

"What time is it now?" Dim's mother asked.

"It's five fifteen PM," Dim replied.

"Then he should be home in about an hour or so."

"Okay then," Dim said then walked into his room then began to write in his journal.

"Wow, all I can say about today is wow."
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Sweetie Belle regained consciousness. "Wow, today was amazing." Sweetie Belle stood up and remembered the design Dimshadow drew. "I should probably get these to Rarity," Sweetie said out-loud. She shook her head then began to walk to her room remembering what happened that day. She entered her room and looked for the drawing Dim made. "Where did he put that thing?" Sweetie Belle said, looking for where she last left it. "Oh, there it is, on my bed." She then picked up the drawing with her mouth, left her room, the proceed to walk up the stairs to show Rarity humming a small song the way there.

Sweetie knocked on the door, "Rarity are you there?" Sweetie asked before knocking.

"Yesh dear? Come in." Rarity said, holding a tape measure in her mouth. "What ish it?"

Sweetie Belle opened the door with the drawing in her mouth. "Look what Dim made..." Rarity gazed her eyes upon the sketch. "I wanted to know is you could sew three of these for us, please?" Sweetie said with a smile.

"Wait a second, Dim made this?" Rarity just stared at the sketch.

"Yes! I reacted the same way when I first saw it." Sweetie Belle wanted to say more by was interrupted when she paused.

"This isn't bad for an amateur. How long did it take him to draw this?" Rarity asked.

"Only a few seconds." Sweetie replied, waiting to see her sister's reaction.

"Really? That's... surprising. That reminds me of myself when I first began to make to sketch dresses for my classes. I would just look at someone and a dress, a delicately drawn dress, would appear on my paper. Those were the good old days Sweetie Belle." Rarity said looking out the window.

"Uh huh... so could you pretty please make some of these, I know I made the originals but I don't think I could make this, it looks a little too hard." Sweetie Belle said to Rarity, who was still looking out the window.

"Oh yes dear, just leave the drawing here and I'll have a few sashes for you and your two little friends by today or tomorrow," Rarity said, "Now run off and play or go to sleep, it's getting late, a filly like you needs her beauty rest."

"Okay, don't forget it sis." Sweetie said leaving the room. "My diary, I almost forgot to write in it!" Sweetie said, running down the stairs back into her room. She went under her pillow to get her diary and pencil. She flipped to a new page of paper and began to write

"I don't know what to say about today... YES I DO. It was the greatest day of my life! Dim and I hung out, got ice, cream, and KISSED, I him so many times and hugged him and he's my colt-friend now. Nothing will ever be able to better than this day. He even said he felt the same way there." She drew a few arrows pointing to what Dim wrote. "I'll never regret this day, no matter what. Me and the other Crusaders are going crusading and Dim is coming along! I can't wait!"
Sweetie Belle put her pencil in her diary and back under her pillow. She then turned off her lights and went to bed.
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Dim woke up the next morning. He got out of bed, standing up. He looked on the wall where he put his clock. It read quarter past eight AM. Well, I have to be at that apple orchard in about an hour and a half. I better get ready, it takes like twenty minutes to get there. Yawning, Dim started his day. He stretched then started to walk to the bathroom to take a shower. After he dried his coat, he began to make breakfast for himself. His parents were already at work by now. Unfortunately this morning, his allergies were acting up again. Just the normal, common allergy, the pollen in the air. Ponyville was luscious with newly blooming flowers every day, which was a bother for Dim. It caused his eyes to water up very badly if was near them too much. He looked at his watch, it was nine thirty. "I better get going," he thought to himself. He grabbed his saddle bag and proceed out the door.
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"Do you seriously think this will work?" Diamond asked Silver Spoon.

"As long as what I've planned works out, then yes."

"Remind me one more time what you plan on doing Silver. I want to hear it one more time, just to make sure I get this straight." Diamond Tiara still was confused about her friends plan.

"Uh! Fine. Yesterday when we were at the bakery I over heard that those two would be meeting up at Apple Bloom's pig sty of an orchard at about nine forty five. What's going to happen is I'm going to hide in a bush and wait for Dumb Shadow to come. When Sweetie Belle comes along you hit the tree three times .I'm sure you remember what happens after that..." Silver Spoon said in an impatient voice, this was at least the fifth time she had re-explain the plan. Silver thought that Diamond was still not able to comprehend her idea. Silver Spoon wasn't ever the pony to think of plans or anything, but, she had this undying hatred for the new pony. "We're almost there."

"Are you sure this will work?" Diamond asked. "What if Sweetie Belle comes first or maybe that one of them is already there? What if they don't come at all?" Diamond didn't want her friend doing this, she felt wrong about it.

"Well, if one of them is already there then we won't do anything. And if Sweetie Belle is comes first I'll wait in the bush until she leaves, easy as that. I don't see why you think this is such a bad idea."

"Well... there are too many things that could go wrong." Diamond was lying, she didn't want to say anything against her friend.

"Whatever, we're here." The two fillies came over a hill to he the vast apple orchard. "Can you believe that they have to buck every last apple just to make a living?" Silver said, mocking them with her rich arrogance. "Now, where is the entrance?" They looked around the fence until they say the gap. "There it is," Silver Spoon said pointing her hoof at the entrance.

"Are you sure that you want to go through with this?" Diamond said, trying to talk her out of it.

"Diamond, I swear on Celestia and Luna's name if you ask me that one more time, I will kill you!" Silver was asked that a countless number of times on the way there. "Now go to that tree over there, I'll be in the bush closest to entrance, the one by all the flowers."

"Got it," Diamond said with a sigh. It's not that she didn't want her to do this to Dim, just that she didn't want what she was planning on doing to Dim.
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"There it is," Dim said, walking down the dirt road to Sweet Apple Acres. He proceed down the path to the apple orchard. The scent of fresh apples entered his nose and it smelled divine to him. I'm going to have to try one of those, he thought to himself. He got to the entrance and slouched his back against the fence next to a bush. By the time he got there it was already nine forty seven. She should be here soon, he thought to himself. I wonder what hectic ideas those three fillies are going to try today. Well, I hardly know them so I can't think of anything they'd do so I can't judge them yet. For the next few minutes Dim just stood there and thought about how today would go. Suddenly, Dim's eyes began to water uncontrollably, "What the hell?" Dim said, "Why are my allergies acting-" Dim looked where he was standing. "You've got to be kidding me! How did I not notice I was standing in a flower patch?!" Dim yelled getting away from the flowers. He was now standing in front of a bush.

Perfect... Silver Spoon thought herself with a smile.
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This is taking forever. Diamond thought to herself, Diamond was really impatient and she already didn't want this to happen. She was considering just leaving her friend, even though she was her best friend, she'd get over it. That left her mind immediately when she saw Sweetie Belle walking down the path with a smile. She sighed then presided with part of the plan. She was considering not doing it for a second, that her friend's plan was just wrong. Then she remembered what he had done to Silver Spoon, the disrespect and the milkshake. At that moment she hit the tree three times with the branch.
"What in Equestria was that?" Sweetie Belle said looking around. "It's probably nothing, just the wind." She proceeded down the dirt path that lead to Sweet Apple Acres.
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Oh, this is going to be fun. Silver Spoon thought to herself waiting to see a shadow begin to peer around the corner of the hill. Any second now... Silver Spoon waited a few seconds, she then heard the galloping of hooves instead of a shadow. Okay, now or never Silver.

Dim was still trying to blink the water in his out before Sweetie Belle came. "This is so annoying why now-" Somepony had just tackled Dim to the ground using one of their hooves to block his vision. Then the pony began... kissing him... very passionately.
Sweetie Belle, this is a little much we just met, he thought, this was obviously Sweetie Belle who else would tackle, pin, and kiss him. It's exactly what she did yesterday. Although this time she felt a little heavier, and stronger. "Odd," he thought. The kiss had be going on for about ten seconds now. Then, Dim heard a very familiar voice.

"WHAT?!" yelled Sweetie Belle. She couldn't believe what was before her eyes. Silver Spoon kissing Dim Shadow. Why was this happening to her? After yesterday, why was he kissing one of her worst enemies?
Dim heard the voice of Sweetie Belle. Dim immediately threw off the pony kissing him, he saw that it was Silver Spoon. He then turned to see Sweetie Belle crying her eyes out and running away from the orchard. Dim stood up and looked to Silver Spoon who was smiling devilishly "You're gonna wake up under water." Dim said then began to chance after Sweetie Belle, who already had a big head start.