"I don't know Brice,I mean your story seems okay but you made a lot of spelling and grammar errors." said Twilight.She had read the first draft of Brice's "murder" novel.
"Yeah, I know but I do it for fun, so what can I say?" he chuckled.
"You don't take writing seriously, do you?" she sai raising an eyebrow
"I do,it's just that I have a very odd sense of what is funny, scary, weird, sad, happy and what a Mary Sue is."
"A Mary Sue?" she said confused.
"Human thing." he said thinking it was best just to avoid the subject rather than make a huge deal out of something so small.
"Ah, so got any plans for today?" she asked as she grabbed a book from a shelf.
"Yheah, Blue Breeze, Zephyr and Rainbow Dash want to go a Wonderbolts show...whatever that is."
"Their a group of peagsus that do stunts Rainbow Dash has been trying to get into them for years."
"Wow, they must be good if they don't let somepony who can do a Sonic Rainboom in." he said looking a bit suprised.
"Yheah but really I think it's just to do with her age."
"Ah, so do you know where they preform?" he asked as he finished packing his bag.
"Cloudsdale."
"......I assume it's in the clouds?"
"Yheah."
"How the hay am I suppose to get up the.." he stopped mid sentence as the sweatband on his wrist began to glow.
"What just happened?" he said looking at the now blue sweatband.
"I enchancted it so that you could fly and walk on clouds."
"Sweet, what's the catch?" he said eyeing Twilight suspicouly.
"Well, it may be the first time I've casted the enchantment so something might go wrong." she said with a sheepish grin.
"Well might as well try it out." he said as he ran outside to find somewhere worth testing it leaving a stunned Twilight.
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Later outside the stadium
"WE'RE GONNA BE LATE!" shouted Rainbow Dash at Zephyr and Blue.
"Calm down I'm sure Twilight will cast a spell or something that'll let him walk on clouds." said Zephyr wipping his face from a few bits of slaiva.
"I.DON'T.WANT.TO.BE.LATE, SO GO FIND HIM!" screamed Rainbow Dash causing Zephyr to fall flat on his flank.
"Heh, good thing I didn't make you guys miss the show then." said Brice as he landed in front of them.
"See, I told you he'd be on time." said Blue Breeze.
"WHERE WERE YOU, WE COULD HAVE BEEN LATE!" shouted Rainbow Dash right in Brice's face forcing him to take a couple of steps backwards.
"Wow, Rainbow Dash calm down I'm here now let's just go in." he said using his hands to show her to calm down.
"Fine." she said walking away in a huff.
"Man, I'd be glad to come out of that alive." said Blue Breeze
"Y....yheah,anyways we gonna see this show?" he said pointing towards the entrance.
"Yheah, we should by the way how were you flying?" asked Zephyr as they began to run to catch up with Rainbow Dash.
"Well, Twilight enhanced my sweatband but from experience I reckon it'll have worn off by tommorow." he said dodging past a couple of pegasi.
"Huh, well at least you get to see the show." said Blue Breeze had taken the smart choice and was flying over everypony else. After a good couple of minutes the trio finally caught up to Rainbow Dash.
"You've*Pant* to *Pant* stop *pant running *pant* off." Said Brice as he put his hands on his knees and bent over to catch his breath, Zephyr and Blue were use to Rainbow Dash running off so they had gotten use to it.
"Amatuers c'mon." she said waving them in as they went on the epic quest TO FIND SOMEWHERE TO SIT!
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Ten minutes later
"Whew, finally we found some seats." thought Zephyr as all four of them sat down.
"Ugh, why don't you ponies just stand?" muttered Brice.
"SSSSSSHHHHHH!" said Rainbow Dash as the stadium lights dimmed.
"HELLO FILLIES AND GENTLE COLTS, ARE YOU READY!" the crowd roared their approval.
"THEN HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS THE WONDERBOLTS!" a flash of lightning filled the stadium then six pegasi came from behind the announcer with smoke trailing behind them.
"Heh, it's an airshow go figure." thought Brice as the crowd "oow" and "aad" at the stunts. Brice just chuckled the stunts looked really easy if you payed attention to them rather than the fliers. One of the tricks involved three of them making a tornado while the other three flew inside of it causing it to explode in a bunch of diffrent colors which seemed like magic. However if you looked you would the see that three of them had small wires connecting to each other creating a magnetic field which they then would disconnect canceling it out causing it to disrupt and explode.
"WOW, that was the best show yet, OH MY GOSH, their singing atuographs I'llberightbackbye." said Rainbow Dash as she zoomed off.
"......Anypony know what just happened?" said Zephyr as Blue and Brice just shook their heads and watched as Rainbow dashed off.
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Author's note:Yheah I think one makes a lot more sense. I really thought about it I mean come on what are the chances the words "Mary Sue" is going to cause that much to happen. Also tell me what you think guys I'm always open to criticism.....except for spelling....for I shall not forgive you Crown8...c'mon you know I'm kidding