A History of Long Nights and Blood

by Balancer


Things

Dear loyal followers and those of you still interested in this story.

I have come to a realisation, this story is terrible. Not terrabad but not great. For many reasons most glaring is that the story pacing and story itself were poorly conceived and even more poorly executed.

But why do I think this? You may ask.

Well the reason I think this is because of my new story Long Live the Queen, that story is much better in term of conception and delivery. And I owe it all to this story, without it I would have never have learnt about good story crafting or good narrative. Not that I'm great, I'm not, but I now know what constitutes good rather than bad. My grammar may not be the best but I have gotten dramatically better (just ask my editor) and my story delivery has improved all because I was able to have a trial run on this story first.

Alas it is because I feel I have improved that I can no longer continue this story, every time I sit down to write it I can not bring myself to continue a story line that honestly I have no idea what I was thinking when I started it.

And that is why I am going to melt the story down and reforge it into a shining jewel ten times brighter than the lump of coal it currently is. I honestly like many of the ideas I tacked onto the story and some of the original ideas so I'm going to salvage them and organise it into something more interesting. So what I will do is complete my other story which I feel is the by far superior at this point in time and when I have gained the experience from it I will tear down this shack and from its remains build a house.

This of course will be very far into the future given the speeds I write at so I will leave this story up in the mean time but I want you to know that I will not be continuing it, instead I will be restarting it instead. With a new name, mostly new plot (Twilight and Vinyl will still be vamps and badass) and all that.

So in the mean come over to my other story if you want to continue to read my works, even if your hesitant look at the prologue if that doesn't get you hooked then oh well.