//------------------------------// // A Kiss That Could Brake A Comatose // Story: Your Little Adventure // by My Only Weakness //------------------------------// Chapter 12 You open your eyes slowly and see nothing, but a white void. You sit up with out any problems. You feel your wings "My wings are fine" you say out loud. You feel the bottom of your mouth "And my mouth is no longer bleeding, Where am I?" "You're in purgatory" says a female voice You look up to see a pegasus mare with a coat and a halo descending towards you "Purgatory? so I'm dead?" you ask the mare "Not quiet" she looks at you with a smile "Luckily, you've have been given a second chance" "Second chance? but i haven't done anything to deserve one" you say to her "Really?" see pulls out a list "Well according to my list, you've done lots of things that deserve one" "Like what?" you ask her "You made friends with a colt who had no friends when you were 6, You helped your brother get out of trouble with the police, You help your mum and dad with their work, when they didn't ask for it, You helped an old lady get here purse back, You helped Rainbow Dash when she had a sprained wing, and You comforted dash when she couldn't sleep" she puts her list away. "If all that doesn't deserve a second chance, i don't want what does" she says smiling at you you smile back BEEP "What was that?" you ask "That must be your cue to leave" you get up on to your hooves "Before i go, Who are you?" you ask her "I'm your guardian angel" she says with pride "I have a guardian angel?" "You sure do" BEEP "Thank you" you say "Keep yourself safe" she says to you You are then hit by a big flash of light you start to hear voices but you can't tell who they belong to "Doc it's been 6 days" "I know" "Is there anything you can do to wake him up?" "unfortunately not were just going have to wait and see" You open your eyes slowly you are blinded by the light but you're eye quickly adjust "Just tell us doc is he ever going to wake up?" You sit up slowly and you see Twilight, Fluttershy, AppleJack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie standing at the door and facing the opposite way, You see your doctor smiling at you "Yes he is" he says happily The six of them all turn to you and their faces all light up with smiles "Star! you're awake" shouts Rainbow Dash as she flies to the side of your bed and pulls you in for a hug her arm squeezes around you and she adds pressure on to your wings, causing the most pain you have ever had "OWW" you scream out "Oh sorry" she lets go of you "I'm just so happy that your awake" "As are we" says the doctor walking over to you "Now StarGazer, your wings are broken and the bones in your hooves are badly damaged. So you may not be able to walk as well as you normally would be able to, but don't worry your hooves will heal and you'll be back to your normal self. You are one lucky young man. You'll be out of here in about a week and a half, But when you do get out of here, no flying for 6 weeks" "6 weeks?!?!" you yell out, You grab your pillow and bury your face in it, while mumbling curse words "Aw come on now sugar cube, it could of been a lot worse, you could of been killed" Apple jack says patting you on the back you lift your head from the pillow "yeah, i guess you're right" "I'm also going to put you on some drugs to help you recover faster" your doctor says walking towards the door "I'll leave you all to your love fest" he says smirking "Thanks doc" He nods and walks out the door You lay back down onto your bed "How long was i comatosed for?" you ask you look around to see dumb founded faces on five of the ponies around your bed except Twilight "Unconscious" you explain "Ohhhh" they all say in unison "About 6 days" says Twilight "6 days?!?" you say sitting up like a bolt. Massive amounts of pain, rush though your body, forcing you back down "Yep" AppleJack says "Rainbow Dash has been sitting next to your bed thought out those six days, just waiting for you to wake up" you turn your head and look at dash "Really?" you say happily "Yeah, i wanted to give you something" she says blushing "Then why didn't you just leave it on the little table, I could've just opened it later" "it isn't something you open" "Then what-" Dash cuts you off by grabbing your face and pulling you in for a kiss. Her lip locking with yours, you tense up at first but then you slowly regain your composure and you close your eyes. You feel dash's tongue dance around your lips, you open your mouth slowly but her tongue enters your mouth and starts to dance with your tongue. She slowly brakes away and looks into your eye "What, What was that for?" "Because I love you. Ever since we were talking, when I was showing you where you house was, I know i felt something for you" you smile at her "I love you too" She then locks her lips with yours again "Alright love birds, that's enough" you hear AppleJack say but the two of you ignore her and continue kissing "StarGazer" you hear Pinkie say, but her voice is very quiet and has a upset tone You break away from the kiss and look towards Pinkie Her hair was straight and her mane and coat were a very dull pink "I'm sorry" she says "What are you sorry for?" you ask her "If it wasn't for me throwing the party, this wouldn't of happened" "No Pinkie, it wasn't the party, ThunderLane threatened me to stay away from Cloudchaser, but Cloudchaser came by my house and just walked in, ThunderLane was looking in though my window and he got some guys to beat me" you pause "Pinkie, it wasn't your fault" "So you're not mad at me?" she says looking at you "No, of course not" you say and then pull her into a hug She hugs you back. Her bright pink soon comes back, Her mane soon returns back to it curliness, and a bubble personalty returns You turn back to Dash who has a smile on her face "Well it's nice to see you're awake" says a big stallion voice You all look over to the door to see a red stallion walking in "How you holdin' up partner?" "Better then i was at the beat down" "Well that's good to hear" "I don't even know your name, but thank you for scaring off those goons" you say to the stallion "The name's Big Mac and think nothing of it, besides i think those thugs won't be doing anything for awhile" he says to you "wait, are you saying you got revenge for me?" "Eeyup" "What did you do Big Mac?" ask AppleJack "I just showed them what happens when you mess with one my sister's friends" he says with a smile "If there is anything i can do to repay you, just say it" you say to him "You can get better, that's what you can do" he says back to you "No, that's not good for enough, you work with AppleJack at the farm right?" "Eeyup" "Well maybe i could help out at the farm a bit" "Well i guess you could, but only when you're one hundred percent" he says to you you nod "Well we better be getting back now AJ" Big Mac says "Okay, Get well soon Star" she say walking towards the door "I'll try" you say "ohh and Big Mac" you say catching his attention he turns his head to you "Thank you again" he nods his head and walks out the door Time - 6:00 You spend the last couple of hours talking with your new marefriend and the other four elements of harmony "Visiting time is over" says the nurse poking her head thought the door way Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie all walk out the door while dash stays by your bed "Miss Rainbow Dash I presume your staying here again" "Yes I am nurse" she says "No, Dash your going home" you say to her "But-" "No buts Dash, You've been here for 6 days; you deserve to go home, take a shower, have something to eat, and get a good night sleep" you say cutting her off "But you-" "I'll be here in the morning, In fact I'll be here all week" you say cutting her off again Instead of saying anything, she locks her lips with yours again She breaks away leaving you hungry for more She stops in front of the door way and turns to you, she blows you a kiss and then walks out the door You smile and lay your head down on the pillow Today was a good day, Kinda You close your eyes and drift off to sleep