Pinkamena's Awakening

by Kingsley


Author's Note

Author's Note




Hello everypony, Please bear in mind that this is my very first fic, its not going to be the best, some parts will probably unintendedly be left unexplained, and things might not be clear. I'm sorry to those of you who felt a lot of things were unclear to you, or not explained in more depth, but this is all I have at the moment I'll be thinking about writing another fic in the future, Pinkamena's Awakening was in all honesty a "rough draft" if I was any good at writing fics and based on most of the positive comments, I think I'll continue writing in the future and I'll try and learn from the mistakes I've made here.

But what do you guys think? To some/most of you, the ending was meh and ended to quickly I understand but was my story good in general? I'd like to hear your feedback to see if I did a decent job at the very least ^~^.

Also, a sequel is possible in the distant future and I'd like to ask all of you, how would you like me to approach it? Would you like me to turn Pinkamena evil again? Or find a way to completely separate her from Pinkie and try to be a nice person?...