Chapter 2: The Apocolspe Is Coming
Authour's Note: Yay so many replies! I know my grammer is very bad. :'(
Answers to questions: I am A GIRL. period. I wrote this story when I had a Huge Migrane so most of the paragraphs are horrible and im a beginner. Thanks for being honest CyneWulf and Cellybean. PS: LightPony, Baconhazard, and Flashdrive thanks for motivating me to write another chapter. I almost gave up until you guys showed up. Look at me posting random stuff.
BTW: How would Steve react to this Fanfiction?
Steve's POV
" Oh great. I'm in one of those damn crazy dreams again…", I sighed to myself as I saw Herobrine dancing like a ballerina with Notch. Wanting to see more of this interesting place, I look around. "Nope, its the usual.", chuckling to myself looking at flying pigs, friendly creepers, and me only in my underwear in the middle nowhere. The only thing that I noticed that was different in my fantastic dream was a small computer.
Wondering the secrets the plain computer had I opened it up. A story was about me and poines popped up immediately. The story was alright, except for all the bad grammar errors and formatting space it was pretty good. Then there were the some comments. The one who fixed up the grammer mistakes was pretty cool. There were some who liked the story, but wanted someone to edit it which I found reasonable. The people who rated the book made me conflicted?
10 LIKES AND 10 DISLIKES?! Are you crazy? This is about me we're writing about you know. I'm too awesome to be disliked, and these dislikes should be about the grammar/formatting problem beacuse YOU may have demotivated this poor writer STOP writing. THAT IS SAD, or thats what I think about it. HEY, I just broke the Fourth WALL. YOU made me do this man, even if this is a sucky dream good riddance to you. YOU INSULTED ME IN A STORY?!
YOU HAVE NOW CRUSHED A LITTLE STEVE'S DREAM OF BECOMING A GREAT AUTHOR. YAY YOU.
JK. TEE-HEE :D .
Meanwhile at the Mane Six-
" This is so gonna be 20% cooler than last's month camping trip! ", Rainbow dash shouted as she reached the spot where all of them were going to stay for the night.
" Rainbow dash slow down! Some random scary animal might hear you and hurt us.", Twilight said in an irritated voice.
" Tell me why did we plan set camp in the most dangerous forest in all of Equestria again. " Applejack said in a exhausted voice.
" Well for your information Applejack I thought it would be a great idea to go camping here for some of my research on these native plants. Also it'll help us get over our fear of the Everfree Forest.", said the intelligent purple pony quiet fast. All of the others agreed to this statement.
Once all of them reached the designated area, they started setting up camp. Tents were prepared, food was being cooked , and some-pony was checking them off out of her hundreds of checklists. By the end of the day everything was done. Everyone sat quietly munching on the feast Pinkie Pie and Applejack made since they're the best. Before anyone had a chance to do anything else Pinkie Pie asked (or rather yelled ) at to them tell terrifying stories, daring other ponies to something in the wild as well.
Most of the stories told by all the mares were not very interesting. Twilight considered that talking about poison-joke was indeed a horrifying story. Fluttershy couldn't think of a story. Rarity thought storytelling was too immature. Rainbow dash just talked about how the Wonderbolts were scary enough, for them. Applejack had mumbled that giant apple monsters eating all the apples in the world was a pretty frightning tale. None of the stories were good enough to take a dare. All until Pinkie Pie started.
Pinkie's POV
Okay guys I have a super duper sugary SCARY story. Once upon a time there was a guy from a different dimension who was very lazy. He had made everything he wanted and wanted to do something cupcaketasticly exciting! One day he was on a walk to find some crazy adventure, and suddenly he fainted. Waking up he realized that he became a pony! He was good and mad. Like the time I forgot to open the oven which made my pastries burnt and Mr.Cake got angry. He got soooo angry that he started flinging my burnt cupcakes at me, but I knew he'd forgive me sooner or later. Wait where was I? Oh yeah angry pony, so he was mad and started getting corupt. The angerier he got, the crazier he had became. Next thing you know, he chops off every creature's head asking them where he is and how he got here. He now lives in a random cave in the Everfree forest. Thats my okie dokie awesome lokie story!
Now it was every pony's time to gawk at her. The story didn't even make sense. Everyone just laughed.
" Now that is the craziest fairy tale I ever heard! " all of Mane Six except Pinkie Pie said at the exact same time.
" No this story is a little bit true! my Pinkie Sense told me! ", spoke Pinkie nervously.
All ponies know that Pinkie's weird sense was always correct no matter what. Everyone froze. Deciding that this was a good scary and story Rainbow dash spoke up. "Okay ponies, I'm gonna prove that Pinkie is wrong by going into cave and looking for this deadly pony." she gulped. No one dared speak a word. Sighing Rainbowdash took off to find the nearest cave.
Finally finding the last cave in the creepy forest the blue brave pegasus went inside. Just like the other twenty or so caves there was nothing. "Ha. Pinkie Pie was wrong wait until my frie-", Rainbow dash almost said as she tripped on a rock. "Stupid rocks always in my way. This rock will pa-... OMG OMG OMG OMG. WAHHHHHH!!!", flying faster than her sonic rainboom Rainbow dash flew to her friends.
Author's Note: Cliff -hanger :) I hope you enjoyed this. I'm gonna make a LONGG chapter after this, so it will be a while before I update this again. (I need to study more literature before I start)