"Hello, mares and gentlecolts. It's Spike here giving you an important note giving to me by the author, since he can't type it up normally. If I may, I'll read it now............
"Dear fans, I need help with some of my writing. I have trouble with pacing and number of words
in the chapters. I need any criticism I could get, from fans and friends alike. In my opinion, writers
can't make a good story without the help from the many helping fans. After you comment, Spike will
tell me how I should improve based on your suggestions.
Sincerely, Firefan645."
"Well, you heard what he said, get to commenting! The faster you comment, the faster I can get to Rarity and woo her on the spot! Ohh....... How she glistens in the sunlight, so beautiful and stunning, it just feels like I'm in pony heaven. So, hurry hurry hurry!"
"Oh, hi Spike! Watcha doing?"
"Hi Pinkie, I'm just waiting for Firefan's fans to comment, and don't think I forgot the egg incident!"
"Oh, I know. I just came here to cheer you up with...... a........ PARTY!"
"Sweet! I'll be there after I'm done this!"
"Okie-dokie-lokie!"
______________________________
*Uhhh...... no Rarity, don't go. Don't go with that colt, it was supposed to be you and me.......... Rarity..........*
SPIKE! WAKE UP!
"Huh, what?"
You fell asleep, and by your squirming I can tell it was a nightmare, but right now I have to go, I was just checking up.
"Unh....... Okay, got it."
Good. See ya.
"Ugh, what was I doing again...... Oh yeah! The comment thing! Wait, there's also a party for me......... What to chose, what to chose.............."