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// Chapter 20: Green Isn't Your Color (S1:E20) 
// Story: My Little Pony: Nine Elements Book 1 
// by BlueBioWolf 
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My Little Pony: Nine Elements



Written by Brandon Nell and Blake Hawkins



Chapter 20: Green Isn’t Your Color


It had been one week and a day since Spike and Rarity’s encounter with the Diamond Dogs. In that time, May had started and Rainbow had her 18th birthday. At the Ponyville Spa, Fluttershy was sitting in the waiting room reading a magazine. It was about animals.

“Ah,” Fluttershy said to herself. “It’s good to know that Critter Whisperers were available to help keep the animals comfortable.” She then heard the bell at the door ring.

As Fluttershy was reading, Rarity entered the spa. She was wearing a beautifully lavish sunhat. Fluttershy set the magazine down and politely greeted her friend. “Terribly sorry for being late, Fluttershy,” she said.

“That’s alright,” Fluttershy said understandingly. “There’s still plenty of time for us to get our usuals.” When Rarity and Fluttershy grew closer as friends, the two discovered a shared love for getting spa treatments. So, they recently decided to go together on a certain day of the week.

“You wouldn’t believe what happened on the way here,” Rarity said.

“You’ll have to tell me about it during our treatment, please,” Fluttershy said, already engaged with what Rarity had endured.

Rarity explained to the best of her ability as the two ponies enjoyed the spa, though, Aloe seemed to not remember Fluttershy wasn't a unicorn until she offered to trim Fluttershy's horn and discovered she didn't have one. Fluttershy gave a smile as if to say, “It’s okay, an honest mistake.”

“I’m certain you’re familiar with that earth mare from Maremany* named Photo Finish,” Rarity said.

“Somewhat,” Fluttershy said. “I have read about her work before.”

“I ran into her on the way here,” Rarity said.

“Oh, that must have been exciting,” Fluttershy smiled.

“Indeed,” Rarity said. “She took notice of my giant hat and before long she decided she wanted to do a photo shoot at Carousel Boutique later."

“Oh, that’s wonderful,” Fluttershy said excitedly. “That should give other ponies a chance to see your work.”

"Indeed," Rarity replied. "The only problem I have now is that I'll need someone to model for me. Rainbow Dash is out of the question, I doubt I can convince Applejack, Twilight said she was busy, and Pinkie Pie is well Pinkie Pie. So, as much as it pains me to say, I want you to be the model."

“Me?” Fluttershy asked. “Well, knowing about the other mares in our friend group and what they’re up to, I suppose I can help you with this for this one time.”

“Thank you, Fluttershy,” Rarity said. “I promise to make it as quick as possible.”

Fluttershy nodded at the remark. She still wasn’t certain about this, but, she knew she had to do this because she was helping her friend.





After their treatments, Rarity and Fluttershy headed to Carousel Boutique, running into Twilight, Spike, and Pinkie along the way.

“Hey, girls,” Twilight said. “How was your weekly spa session?”

“Oh, it went well,” Rarity said. “I’m just bringing Fluttershy to model for Photo Finish.”

“I take it you’ll be making a new outfit for Fluttershy to model in, Rarity?” Spike asked.

“Indeed,” Rarity said.

“Can I help out?” Spike offered.

“Only if it’s okay with Twilight,” Rarity said. “She did tell me she’s going to be busy for a bit.”

“To tell the truth,” Twilight said. “I’ll be busy watching Spike learn to be a kid. I felt Pinkie should help teach him today.”

“Alright,” Rarity said.

“I guess he can take a break to help you out,” Twilight said. “Just as long as Pinkie and I come along.”

“That’s alright with me,” Rarity said. “You can keep Spike company if he needs a breather and I’m still busy.”

Though wouldn't that mean Twilight is available to model now? Fluttershy thought to herself. But, she decided to carry on so she wouldn't go back on her word.





A bit later, Rarity was fitting Fluttershy in a new design.

“Hmm,” Rarity said softly. “Looks good so far, but, I’ll need just a few more adjustments. Spike, would you be so kind as to grab some pins off of my workdesk?”

“Sure,” Spike said as he went into another room. While he was away, Rarity used her Mystic Eyes to inspect the dress.

“Ooh~” Pinkie squeaked. “Even if it’s just a work in progress, it’s so pretty!”





Meanwhile, Spike was looking for the pincushion. He was looking under the workdesk when his tail bumped one of the legs, disturbing the table and causing the pins to roll off and stick themselves into his back. While he didn’t feel the pins on his back, he did notice them when he walked by a mirror.

“I better—” Spike began before Rarity interrupted him.

“Spike~” Rarity called. “Can you possibly step more lively please? I need the pincushion.”

Not enough time to correct this, Spike thought. I’ll have to go as is. So, Spike hustled over to Rarity, posing as an impromptu pincushion.**





The ponies present saw the pins in his back and Twilight glared at Rarity.

“Rarity~” Twilight said coldly.

“She didn’t put me up to this, Twilight!” Spike said in Rarity’s defense. “My tail bumped into one of the table legs and the pins rolled off and fell onto my back.”

“Why didn’t you use the pincushion?” Rarity asked.

“I was about to grab one,” Spike said. “But, you called me and I didn’t want to keep you waiting.”

Rarity sighed and pulled some pins out. “Next time, explain beforehoof,” Rarity said.

“I will,” Spike said. He then went to Twilight and Pinkie.

“Doesn’t that hurt, Spike?” Pinkie asked.

“I have thick scales on my back,” Spike explained. “I can’t feel anything there. The only way it would hurt is if I had the pins on my underbelly.”

“Like, your privates?” Pinkie asked.

“Well, partially,” Spike said. “Probably don’t say that again, please.”

“Besides, that’s not what underbelly means anyway,” Twilight said. She then gestured to the green on Spike’s stomach. “It means this general area.”

“Oh~” Pinkie said. “Then, isn’t that your tummy?”

“Well,” Spike said. “The terms are synonymous.”

“Oh~” Pinkie said. “That makes sense.” She then poked his stomach. To her surprise, it was rather soft.

Spike held his mouth to save himself from bursting out into fits of laughter so he wouldn’t disturb Rarity. His underbelly was not only sensitive to pain, but, it was also very ticklish.

“Huh,” Pinkie said. “You’d think with all the gems he eats, his tummy would be harder than that.”

“Does your stomach change textures with the food that you eat?” Twilight asked.

“Not really,” Pinkie admitted. “Of course, I don’t eat gems like lover drake here.”

“True, but, still,” Twilight said.

Spike registered the “lover” part of Pinkie’s comment. “Is it that obvious?” he asked.

“Hey,” Pinkie said. “If it’s obvious to me with my shifting attention span, of course it’s obvious to most ponies.”

“Well,” Spike said softly. “Can you promise not to tell Rarity about this? I want to tell her myself in my own time when I’m ready.”

“I’m pretty sure she pieced it together by now,” Twilight said.

“Just look at the shirt you’re wearing,” Pinkie said.

“I’m not wearing a—” Spike began, before looking down to see that he’s wearing a t-shirt with a design depicting a red heart with Rarity’s head in it. A shirt he wasn’t wearing earlier. “Where’d this come from?!”

“My distraction technique strikes again!” Pinkie declared.

“Well,” Spike said, hastily removing the t-shirt. “Just in case she doesn’t, please promise me you won’t tell her.”

“Don’t worry,” Pinkie said. “I Pinkie Pie Promise not to tell Rarity. Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!”

“Uh,” Spike said in confusion. “Don’t you mean ‘hope to die?’”

“That’s what makes it a Pinkie Pie Promise,” Pinkie smiled. “I didn’t want to mention death because I feel that’s going too far.”

“But, you’re an earth pony,” Twilight pointed out. “You can’t fly.”

“Exactly,” Pinkie giggled.

“Have you considered the idea of a flying creature making that kind of promise?” Twilight asked.

Pinkie was about to respond, but, the boutique door opened and an Earth mare walked in with her entourage. She had a light blue coat and silverish white mane and tail. She wore a pair of black framed sunglasses with opaque looking purple lenses, and a black dress with hot pink and white accents.

“I, Photo Finish, have arrived~!” announced the mare in a thick accent.

Rarity heard Photo Finish’s voice and turned her attention towards her. “Ah, welcome,” she said excitedly. “I think you’re going to like my newest creation modeled by a dear friend of mine.” She gestured to Fluttershy.

Fluttershy saw Rarity’s motioning and she tried to make a fabulous pose in the ensemble. This was difficult for her to do intentionally. Though, this didn’t sit well with Photo Finish’s unique tastes.

“No!” Photo Finish said.

“Pardon?” Rarity asked.

“Your friend’s posing is unlike her,” Photo Finish said.

“How would you know?” Rarity asked. “You haven’t met her before today.”

“My Mystic Eyes of Personality,” Photo Finish explained. “Zey show me who someone is inside.***”

“And what do the glasses do?” Rarity asked.

“Zey create a filter for my eyes so zat I don’t suffer sensory overload from reading so many ponies at vonce,” Photo Finish explained.****

Fluttershy, hearing this, made more of a pose and expression that she was more naturally suited to do. Photo Finish smiled at this.

“Yes~” she said. “Zat is more like it!” And she took Fluttershy’s snapshot. “Zis pony has—” She then posed dramatically. “Da Magicks!”

“Da magicks?” Spike questioned, which caught Photo Finish’s attention.

“Da magicks,” Photo Finish explained. “Is zeh ‘it factor’ zat zeh ponies I have vorking for me must have.” She then used her Mystic Eyes on Spike. She smiled and extended her hoof to him so he could shake it.

“You’re not going to judge me for being a dragon?” Spike asked.

“Nein,” Photo Finish said. “Regardless of species, my Mystic Eyes see you as a companion.”

Spike shook Photo Finish’s hoof. When they finished properly greeting each other, Photo Finish went back to work taking snapshots of Fluttershy. Soon, the photographer mare was finished.

“Zank you for allowing me to host zis photoshoot, Rarity,” Photo Finish said. “Ve must do zis again another time. For now, I go.” She and her entourage packed up the equipment.

“I’ve only heard about Photo Finish’s efforts,” Twilight said to herself. “But, I don’t think I’ve ever met a pony as eccentric as her.”

“Ahem!” Pinkie said.

“Um,” Twilight said. “Not counting you, Pinkie.”

“Thank you,” Pinkie said.

“Um,” Fluttershy said. “Would you say that went well, Rarity?”

“Yes,” Rarity said. “I would.” She then became so excited that she jumped up and landed on something that wasn’t there earlier.

“Ow!” Spike said. Rarity stopped jumping immediately and noticed she landed on the spade tip of his tail.

“Oh, dear!” Rarity gasped. “I’m terribly sorry, Spike! I was so elated that I didn’t think where I was jumping.”

“Wait,” Pinkie said. “Wouldn’t his scales protect him from feeling pain?”

“Not if external pressure is applied,” Twilight said. “Think of it like wearing armor. It might stop arrows or magic blasts from hurting, but, having it crushed while you’re wearing it will still hurt.”*****

“Plus,” Rarity said, still feeling bad. “My hooves are much bigger and stronger than the pins Spike had in his back. Oh, Spike, I do hope you can forgive me.”

“Hey,” Spike said. “You didn’t do it on purpose. Besides, you’re not the only pony to step on my tail. Intentionally or otherwise.”

Spike then gave Rarity a comforting hug. As he did, Fluttershy inspected his tail.

“A little bit bruised and swollen,” Fluttershy noted. “It’ll need to be elevated for a few days so that the swelling can go down.”

“That’ll be a bit of a problem for me,” Spike said. “I have trouble keeping my tail up.”

“I do have elastic bandages to dress your wound in,” Fluttershy said. “I can’t apply an ice compress because you’re cold-blooded.” She turned to Twilight. “Can I help him out?”

“Of course, Fluttershy,” Twilight smiled.

Before Fluttershy could leave to do so, she noticed a note taped to the door.

“Hmm?” Fluttershy said quietly. “A note?” She saw that it was addressed to Rarity. “It’s for you, Rarity.”

“Oh?” Rarity asked as she took the note, levitating it closer to her with her magic. “I wonder who it’s from.” She read it carefully. “It’s from Photo Finish. She’s asking for another photo shoot in the park in two hours.”

“Oh!” Fluttershy exclaimed. “She did say that she’d want to do this again. I didn’t think it would be this soon.”

“Twilight can take your place,” Spike said.

“I’m afraid not,” Rarity said. “The note insists on Fluttershy being the model.”

“Well, if she insists,” Fluttershy said. “This probably shouldn’t take too long if this photoshoot was anything to go by.” But, she felt very nervous inside. Her friends noticed this and they offered her comfort and support.





Two hours later, Rarity and Fluttershy were at the park. Rarity had brought supplies that were needed for the photo shoot, even managing to bring a privacy screen.

“Uh, Rarity?” Fluttershy asked.

“Yes, Fluttershy?” Rarity responded.

“I don’t mean to criticize you, but, with us being outside with no walls,” Fluttershy said. “Wouldn’t that defeat the purpose of a privacy screen?”******

“This is a special one,” Rarity said. “It can be arranged in a circle around the one using it.”*******

“Oh,” Fluttershy said. “That makes sense.”

The two soon reached Photo Finish.

“Ah, right on time,” Photo Finish smiled. “You know ze drill.”

“So, um,” Fluttershy asked. “What do you have in mind for this photoshoot?”

“Just do your best und I’ll decide if it’s good enough,” Photo Finish said.

“Yes, Miss Finish,” Fluttershy said politely.

“Please,” Photo Finish insisted. “Do call me Photo Finish.”

Fluttershy got into position.

“Yes, well,” Rarity smiled. “I’ll get her suited up.” She levitated the privacy screen and had it circle around Fluttershy. Rarity was sorting out an outfit for Fluttershy to wear, tossing aside designs that didn't suit her. “No, no, no… That’s it!” She then magicked it onto the demure pegasus. It was a white frilly jumpsuit studded with sapphires. “Bluu’s been a big help in gem hunts,” Rarity said. “I doubt I would’ve found these sapphires otherwise.”

“So I see,” Fluttershy commented, looking over her ensemble.

“Photo Finish is sure to love it,” Rarity said.

Rarity moves the privacy screen out of the way so that Photo Finish can get a look at Fluttershy in her ensemble. Photo Finish lookedd over the design.

“A beautiful outfit,” Photo Finish said. “However, it is too complex und does not suit ze zeme of floral nature zat ze model evokes.”

“It would’ve helped to have an idea beforehoof,” Rarity said.

“That is why I asked what she had in mind,” Fluttershy noted.

“Would it be possible to change her outfit?” Rarity asked.

“Ja,” Photo Finish responded. “Do you have anyzing more vernal?”

“I’m sorry,” Rarity said. “‘Vernal?’”

“It means relating to spring,” Fluttershy said.

“Oh,” Rarity said. “It seems my vocabulary could use some work.”

“Oh, that’s alright,” Fluttershy smiled sweetly.





Rarity looked through her designs and found a simpler, spring-themed dress. Photo Finish looked it over and she smiled.

“Perfect!” she exclaimed. “Time to make—” She posed dramatically again. “DA MAGICKS!”

I’m going to have to get used to hearing that, Rarity thought to herself.

Photo Finish took various pictures. Fluttershy felt uncomfortable inside from having so many pictures taken of her, but, she endured it for the sake of making sure the photoshoot was good.

“Ve are done!” Photo Finish announced. Fluttershy breathed a sigh of relief to herself.

Glad that’s over, Fluttershy thought to herself.

"Well?" Rarity asked Photo Finish.

“Your model is beautiful und graceful,” Photo Finish said. “She is ze type zat could model ze couture from any fashion pony. I have been looking for such a model.”

“Um, Photo Finish?” Fluttershy hastened to say. “I’m not a professional model, so-”

Rarity began speaking on her friend’s behalf.

“What she’s trying to say,” Rarity said. “Is that she was doing this as a favor to help my career take off.”

“I understand,” Photo Finish said. “Unfortunately I have searched high und low for a new model, but, all ze best vones seem to be taken. Your friend, Fluttershy, seems to have quite the potential und, viz my help, I can make her shine across all of Equestria."

“I feel sympathy for your lack of success finding models,” Rarity said. “But, not responsibility. As Fluttershy’s friend, the answer is no.”

Fluttershy had rather mixed feelings on the matter before her. On one hoof, she was relieved that Rarity was preventing her from accepting a job she wasn’t comfortable with. On the other, she felt rather insulted that another pony was making her choice for her.********

“Photo Finish,” Fluttershy said, somewhat boldly after taking a deep breath. “I’ll model for you.”

Rarity gasped upon hearing this. "Fluttershy, are you out of your mind? You can't possibly expect me to believe you actually like being a model."

“Not fully,” Fluttershy said. “But, I’m doing this to help Photo Finish. With what happened earlier today, I now have some experience. Besides, this should be my decision.”

"Fluttershy, you don't have to do this," Rarity said. "We're already going to get what we want out of this photo shoot. I'm going to get some publicity and you won't have to model again."

“But, I’m the Element of Kindness,” Fluttershy said.

“Vhat is zis about Element of Kindness?” Photo Finish asked.

“That’s a story I can’t be bothered to go into detail about right now,” Rarity said before turning her attention back to Fluttershy. “And it’s irrelevant because it doesn’t give you a moral obligation to do something you clearly aren't going to like. If Photo Finish can make you as popular as she claims she can, then you'll never know a moment's rest. Thousands of ponies will be swarming over you, watching your every move."

“Knowing that I’m to help someone as important as Photo Finish,” Fluttershy said. “It will be worth the risk.”

“Fluttershy,” Rarity said. “I’m begging you to reconsider. I know you don’t care about being the center of attention.”

“I know you’re looking out for me,” Fluttershy said. “But, I’ve barely made any decisions on my own my whole life. I’m 17 years old now. I need to be able to make decisions for myself.”

Rarity took in Fluttershy’s words. She at last sighed and said, “Very well then. If that’s your decision, then, I won't stop you. I'll try my best to find a suitable replacement for you. Just promise me you won't let all that fame come between us.”

“Of course not,” Fluttershy said.

“So,” Photo Finish said. “You are going to help me, ja?”

“Yes,” Fluttershy said.

“Wunderbar!” Photo Finish exclaimed happily. "Now come viz me, Fluttershy, und together, ve shall spread–” she posed dramatically again. “DA MAGICKS across Equestria."

So, Photo Finish led Fluttershy away. Fluttershy could only look back and see the dismayed look on Rarity’s face.





Later, Rarity returned to Carousel Boutique, where Twilight, Pinkie, and Spike were waiting as she trusted them to look after her shop in her absence.

“How’d it go, Rarity?” Pinkie asked happily.

“It didn’t,” Rarity said.

“Oh dear,” Twilight gasped. “Do you want to tell us what happened?”

Rarity sighed and began explaining. Afterwards, the three friends had sympathetic looks on their faces.

“So sorry that happened, Rarity,” Spike said.

“Is there anything we can do to help you?” Twilight asked.

“I would like be left alone for a while,” Rarity said. “That means you, Spike.”

“We understand, Rarity,” Spike said.

“Come on, guys,” Twilight said. “We’ll give her the privacy she needs. Rarity, if you need to come to one of our homes for any reason whatsoever, you’re welcome to do so.”

“Thank you for the offer,” Rarity said.

So, the three friends left Rarity to her own devices.





Meanwhile, at Photo Finish’s studio, Fluttershy was being dolled up for a fashion show. She was wearing a dress with layers of transparent green fabric with opaque green shoes. Her hair was done up in an intricate hairstyle. On top of that, ponies were putting makeup and jewelry on her. A pale yellow earth mare with a classy dark blue mane and tail was applying blush to Fluttershy’s cheeks, much to the pegasus’ chagrin.

Photo Finish carefully oversaw everything. “Hmm, too much blush.” She noted. The blush was removed. “Not enough,” she noted again. More was applied. “Perfect.”

Some of the blush powder tickled Fluttershy’s nose.

“Ah… Ahhh~!” Fluttershy wheezed. A sneeze was coming, but it ended up being a soft quiet one. “Choo.”

Photo Finish smiled. “Oh, yes,” she smiled. “Even her sneezes are graceful!” She then turned her attention to her assistant mares and had them move aside. She redirected her attention to Fluttershy. “How do you feel? Excited? Overjoyed? Zrilled beyond your vildest dreams?”

“Nervous,” Fluttershy said.

“Ah,” Photo Finish said. “I have seen zese first-time jitters before. You must remember to take ze deep cleansing breath. Inhale for four seconds, hold for eight seconds, exhale for seven seconds.”

Fluttershy tried it.

“Actually,” Fluttershy said. “That did help a little bit. Thank you.”

The two suddenly heard music playing.

“Zat is your cue,” Photo Finish smiled. “Now go!” 

Fluttershy stepped out from the curtain. Come on, she mentally pushed herself. You were in a fashion show before. This is no different. Well, slightly since I’m not in a dress Rarity made, but, I can do this.

The audience ponies looked at Fluttershy and her ensemble. They seemed amazed with her. Never before had they seen such grace. Fluttershy was trying her best not to look nervous. She carefully walked on the runway, making sure she didn't accidentally trip or hurt herself. She looked at the audience occasionally. They smiled at her, captivated by her natural beauty, not counting her makeup. She took that as a good sign.

“She’s so graceful,” a lilac colored Earth pony with a blond mane and tail said.

“You got that right, Lyrica,” said another.

“I remember seeing her among a group of mares modeling two variations of dresses by an up and coming fashion designer,” Hoity Toity said. “Now that I’m getting a look at her in another fashion designer’s dress, she’ll be perfect for showing my couture.”

Fluttershy winced a bit. She knew he was talking about the two variations of gala dresses that Rarity made. I hope Rarity’s okay, she thought to herself.





Various pictures of Fluttershy were taken. She was also modeling different dresses and her mane was done up in various updos. She was even branded on Apple Family products. Applejack had to admit that even if Fluttershy is a valued friend of hers, even she had to keep up with the trend in advertising to help get the funds her family needed. Though, her feelings on the matter were mixed to say the least. Rarity herself tried to fight her feelings of jealousy, but, it was hard for her to manage. Seeing Rainbow tow a Fluttershy banner did not help matters. She decided to go back to Carousel Boutique, where she at least couldn’t see Fluttershy’s face on any form of advertisement.





A week later, Fluttershy was trying to walk through Ponyville without being seen. She wore a tacky hat, scarf, and a pair of sunglasses. She even wore a skirt to hide her Cutie Mark. To her relief, it seemed to work.

“Phew,” Fluttershy softly said. She then made it to Carousel Boutique. She saw that her shop was open, so, she went inside. “Rarity?”

The fashionista was using her sewing machine.

“It’s been a while since I last saw you, and I missed hanging out,” Fluttershy continued. “I was wondering if you wanted to catch up over our usual spa session.”

Rarity took a deep breath. “Yes, Fluttershy,” Rarity smiled. “I would love that.”

Suddenly, Photo Finish entered.

“Ah, zere you are, Fluttershy!” Photo Finish smiled. “I haff been looking for you everyvere! We have zat sing at zat place to get to!”

“See you then, Rarity,” Fluttershy said.

“See you too, Fluttershy,” Rarity called. “Enjoy that… thing at that place.”

Fluttershy was escorted out of the boutique by Photo Finish. Once the two mares were out of sight, Rarity’s expression dropped to one of bitter resentment. “I’m the one who loves attention.”





Later, Photo Finish and Fluttershy were being interviewed by paparazzi ponies. Photo Finish did most of the talking.

“I, Photo Finish, am zrilled to have found her,” Photo Finish said. Cameras flashed. “She is a natural in front of ze camera. I simply need to point, click, und I capture-” She posed dramatically yet again. “DA MAGICKS!”

The paparazzi ponies clamored excitedly to take Fluttershy’s picture. Fluttershy tried to look brave.

Maybe Rarity was right to refuse for me at first, Fluttershy thought to herself. But, I can’t give up now. She then looked at a clock and gasped.

“Photo Finish,” Fluttershy said. “I’m running late!”

The photographer gasped.

“Gut heavens, you are right!” Photo Finish gasped. Fluttershy smiled a bit at this. “How could I possibly forget the ballet opening tonight? Everypony who is anypony vill be zere!” Fluttershy’s expression dropped at this.

“I meant that I was supposed to meet my friend at-” Fluttershy started to say before Photo Finish tugged her in a different direction. “Whoa~!”





At the spa, Rarity was soaking in the hot tub. One would think she would be feeling relaxed, but, it was clear that other thoughts were in her head that weren’t washed away with the spa’s serenity. Spike walked up to Rarity in a robe.

“You’ve been in there for like an hour,” Spike said.

“I’ve been waiting for Fluttershy,” Rarity said. “The thing at that place she’s at must have been drawn on longer than I expected.”

“That’s not very specific,” Spike said.

“Believe me, I know,” Rarity sighed. “Photo Finish was quite vague when she described it.”

“You don’t sound very happy for Fluttershy,” Spike observed.

Rarity took a deep breath and heavily sighed. “It’s because I’m jealous of the attention that she’s been getting out of all of this. I’m sorry if that’s a petty reason, Spike, but, that’s how I feel.”

“Maybe if you tell Fluttershy how you feel,” Spike suggested. “Things won’t be so bad.”

“I could try,” Rarity said. “But, her being a model is her decision and I don’t want it to seem like I’m stopping her because I’m being selfish.”

“I still don’t see why Fluttershy volunteered,” Spike said. “We both know she’s not a fan of attention.”

“She does have a point of making her own decisions though,” Rarity said. She then stepped out of the water. “So, until she and I can meet up again, can you please promise not to tell her about my feelings of jealousy?”

“Sure,” Spike said. “I can keep a secret. I have a box of secrets I keep.”

“Thank you, Spike,” Rarity smiled. “I’d best be going now. The heat from the hot tub has made me feel light-headed. But, I’ll see you later, alright?”

“Sure,” Spike said. “I need to take a dip anyway.”

“I would recommend caution, Spike,” Rarity said. “Hot water has been running out quite frequently lately in Ponyville.”

Spike blushed at this, knowing that he was the reason behind that.

“Uh,” Spike said. “I’ll keep that in mind, Rarity. Thank you.”

Rarity left and Spike removed his robe before easing into the tub. As he began his soak, Fluttershy entered the room.

“Rarity,” Fluttershy called. “I’m so sorry I’m late. I was just-” She stopped herself when she saw that Rarity wasn’t present. “Oh, no. She’s already gone, isn’t she?”

“Sorry,” Spike said apologetically.

“Oh, I can’t believe this,” Fluttershy said in an annoyed tone. “I am so frustrated, I could just scream!” She takes a deep inhale, but, instead of screaming, she let out a quiet squeak.

“Feeling better?” Spike asked.

Fluttershy sighed. “No,” she said. “Spike, can I be honest with you about something?”

“Sure,” he said.

Fluttershy cleared her throat and she told Spike the truth. “I know I said it was my decision to model for Photo Finish,” she said. “But, I don’t like it at all. Really, the only reason I’m doing so is to help somepony in need of help, but, all of the attention is just too much!” She sighed. “Rarity was right. I haven’t known a moment’s peace since I started modeling.”

“When you get the chance,” Spike suggested. “You can talk to Rarity about it. Things will be a lot better if you do.”

“I will,” Fluttershy said. “But, until I decide for myself when I do, can you not tell Rarity?”

“I promise,” Spike smiled.

“Pinkie Pie Promise?” Fluttershy asked.

“Cross my heart and hope to fly,” Spike said. “Stick a cupcake in my eye.” Spike was careful to close his eye before putting his clawed hand over it.

“Thank you, Spike,” Fluttershy said as she nuzzled his head.

“Happy to help,” Spike smiled. Suddenly, Pinkie jumped out of the basket of sponges. Fluttershy and Spike yelped at the sudden appearance of Pinkie. “How long have you been there?”

“Long enough,” Pinkie said. “Sometimes I like a nice sponge soak.”

“I’ve just given up questioning you at this point,” Spike said.

“You’re welcome,” Pinkie giggled. Fluttershy left and Pinkie directly addressed Spike. “I know about your promises to Rarity and Fluttershy.”

“I’m going to keep them,” Spike said.

“And I’m going to keep an eye on you to make sure you do,” Pinkie said.

“Uh, Pinkie?” Spike said uncomfortably. “You do realize that that would be stalking, right?”*********

After a pause, Pinkie said, “I didn’t until just now when you pointed it out.” She shifted back to her serious mood. “But, I take Pinkie Promises very seriously. Breaking a promise is a way to lose a friend’s trust, which could lead to losing that friend forever.”

“Following ponies and dragons around everywhere they go, jumping out of hidden places, and pressuring them to keep those promises isn’t exactly any better,” Spike said. “It makes it seem like you don’t trust your friends enough to keep their promises on their own.”**********

Pinkie listened to Spike’s words. “You know, I never thought of it that way,” Pinkie said. “Okay, then. My eye on you is closed.”

“I won’t have to look over my shoulder every other minute?” Spike asked.

“Not unless you want me to,” Pinkie said. “But, since you don’t want me to, you don't have to worry about that.”

“Why would I want that?” Spike asked.

“If you asked me to be your lookout pony,” Pinkie said.

“I’m pretty sure that’s not how being a lookout works,” Spike said.

“Either way,” Pinkie said. “I’m going to give you the benefit of the doubt and trust that you can keep their secrets.”

“I’ll hold you to that,” Spike said.

Pinkie then bounced out of the spa leaving Spike to enjoy his soak.





Soon, Twilight came to pick him up. “Hi, Spike,” Twilight smiled. “How was your time at the spa?”

“Very relaxing,” Spike said. “Though, there’s a bit of a problem between Rarity and Fluttershy.”

“Oh, dear,” Twilight gasped. “Are they not getting along with each other?”

“Well, actually,” Spike said. “Both are having difficulties with Fluttershy being a model.”

“I see,” Twilight said. “If only there was something we could do to help.”

“Not unless you can figure out a way to make Fluttershy stop modeling,” Spike said.

“Why doesn’t Fluttershy just quit?” Twilight asked.

“Well,” Spike said. “Fluttershy told me a few times during our tea parties that she’s getting a bit tired of others making decisions for her. She feels that once a decision is made, it has to be seen through.”

“I see,” Twilight said. “So, she feels just quitting would be going back on her decision?”

“Pretty much,” Spike said. “And we know how Fluttershy is. She poses cutely without even trying.”

“That’s true,” Twilight said. “That is the factor that drew Photo Finish to her. If Fluttershy wasn’t so cute, she wouldn’t want her to model anymore.”

“But, asking Fluttershy not to be cute is like asking a fish not to swim,” Spike said. “It’s against her nature.”

“That’s true,” Twilight said. Just then, an idea came to Twilight’s mind. “Spike, you’re a genius!”

“Uh, thanks, Twilight,” Spike said. “But, why am I a genius? What are you going to do?”





Later, Twilight explained her plan to Spike at the library.

“So, you see,” Twilight said. “Fluttershy may be too polite and demure to act ill-mannered and clumsy on her own, but, if I can use my magic on her, with her permission, to make it look like she’s unappealing, ponies will be so unnerved by her and Photo Finish won’t ask her to be a model anymore.”

“But, won’t ponies notice your magic aura?” Spike asked.

“With the bright spotlights,” Twilight explained. “It will be hard for them to see my aura. I would have to talk with Fluttershy to see if she’s okay with this. Until I do…”

“Let me guess,” Spike said. “You don’t want me to tell anypony else?”

“I know it’s a big responsibility,” Twilight said. “But, I know that you can do it.”

“Sure,” Spike said sarcastically. “I’m only keeping two other secrets and I might have to worry about Pinkie stalking me, but, whatever.”

After a pause, Twilight said, “I’ll have to have a talk with Pinkie about this.”





Later, at the fashion show, Twilight explained her plan to Fluttershy. Fluttershy didn’t say anything until Twilight was done.

“Oh,” Fluttershy said with a smile. “That’s a brilliant idea, Twilight. If it’s to help me, then I’ll allow you to use your magic on me.”

“Just leave it to me,” Twilight said.

“Thank you, Twilight,” Fluttershy smiled. She stepped out onto the catwalk.

Meanwhile, Rarity was entering the audience. She was wearing a pink cape and matching headdress with intricate purple feathers.

I may still be jealous of the attention she’s been getting, she thought to herself. But, she is still my friend. I must support her. Regardless of personal feelings.

When Fluttershy was on the catwalk, Twilight worked her magic. Fluttershy felt the magic take hold of her and she uncontrollably landed face first on the runway ground. This stunned the crowd. Photo Finish was especially shocked. Fluttershy continued to move via Twilight’s magic, stretching, leaping, and fumbling about. At one point, Twilight made Fluttershy pick her nose. The crowd jeered in disgust. Rarity, watching from afar, watched the mayhem going on. At first, she seemed happy that Fluttershy was acting against her normal self, but, as she heard the crowd boo her, she had a change of heart and became sympathetic. Using her Mystic Eyes, she suddenly noticed a familiar magical aura around her.

Twilight? she thought to herself. Why is she doing this? Well, I can’t let this happen to Fluttershy. I can’t let my jealousy get in the way of our friendship.

“Get her off the stage!” Golden Harvest jeered.

“I have made ze terrible mistake!” Photo Finish said aloud.

Suddenly, there came a sound nopony expected, not even Twilight or Fluttershy. It was the sound of praise coming from a friend.

“Bravo!” called the familiar voice of Rarity with her hooves clopping with applause. “I say, Bravo!” The audience looked around.

“Bravo?” asked Lyrica Lilac. “Who in their right mind would applaud this ghastly display?”

Royal Ribbon located the source. It was Rarity, stomping her hooves happily.

“Such bravery, such charisma!” Rarity cheered. “She’s invented a whole new take on modeling! Bravo!” The audience looked at her.

“It’s her!” Royal Ribbon called. “That mare in the gorgeous cape and headdress! There is a pony who understands fashion.”

“Well,” conceded Lyrica. “If that fabulous pony likes it, I do, too.”

So, everyone applauded for Fluttershy. Photo Finish smiled at this excitedly. Twilight stopped using her magic on Fluttershy. Because of Rarity’s impulsive applauding, the plan backfired.





Backstage, Fluttershy was less than thrilled.

“I can’t believe it!” Fluttershy huffed. “I’ve somehow become even more popular! I’m so frustrated I could just kick something!”

She prepared to kick a vase that was behind her. But, she was so delicate that it only wobbled slightly. She sighed in despair.

“I appreciate you trying to help me all the same, Twilight,” Fluttershy continued. “But, it looks like I’m going to be a model longer than I thought.”

At that moment, Rarity entered.

“Oh, Fluttershy!” Rarity panted. “Are you doing alright?”

Twilight gently urged Fluttershy to come clean. Fluttershy sighed at last.

“Honestly, Rarity,” Fluttershy responded. “I’m not alright.”

“Elaborate,” Rarity said.

“You were right to refuse for me before,” Fluttershy said. “I know that it was my decision to be a model, but, I absolutely hate being a model! If I just quit, it would prove I can’t make decisions on my own and stick to them.”

“You mean,” Rarity said. “You only continued because you felt obligated?”

“Yes,” Fluttershy said at last. “So, if you were to say ‘I told you so,’ right now, I wouldn’t blame you.”

Rarity felt a twinge of guilt.

“I’m not going to say that,” Rarity said. “Because I have a confession to make myself.”

“You do?” Fluttershy asked.

“Yes,” Rarity said. “I was jealous of all of the attention you were getting while you were a model. I was so worried that if I told you that, you would think I was selfish and a terrible friend.”

“Honestly,” Fluttershy said. “I don’t. I don’t like too much attention. You thrive on it.”

“Oh… wow,” Rarity said. “If we had just told each other how we really felt, we wouldn’t have been in this situation.”

“We wouldn’t be in this situation if I listened to you in the first place,” Fluttershy said.

“And we wouldn’t be in this situation if I hadn’t asked you to model for me the first time for Photo Finish,” Rarity said. “Well, I can safely say that I promise never to hide my true feelings from you again.”

“So do I,” agreed Fluttershy.

The two mares happily hugged it out. Just then, Photo Finish came in.

“Fluttershy, you vere amazing!” Photo Finish exclaimed. “I have six photoshoots lined up for tomorrow alone!”

“I’m sorry,” Fluttershy said. “I won’t be able to make any of them.”

“Vhat?” Photo Finish gasped.

“Being a model just isn’t for me,” Fluttershy said. “I hope I haven’t disappointed you, but, it’s so overwhelming for me and I no longer wish to continue. To make a long story short, I quit.”

Photo Finish carefully studied Fluttershy. She understood Fluttershy’s feelings. “I understand,” she said. “It von’t be easy finding anozer model who is just as graceful und polite as you are, but, sank you for helping me vhen you could. Now go.”

With that, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Twilight left.

“Twilight,” Rarity said. “Would you and Spike like to join us for a session at the spa? It has been a minute since the two of us have had some quality time there together.”

“Sounds good to me,” Twilight said. “Spike is due for a session of relaxation, so that should help him considerably.”





So, the three mares and one drake were at the spa. At separate times, Rarity and Fluttershy confided in Spike that he no longer had to keep their secrets since they already worked out their problems.

“That’s good to know,” Spike said each time. “Now, I don’t have to worry about Pinkie stalking me.”

The four friends enjoyed their time at the spa. After Twilight and Spike got home, Spike penned a letter that Twilight had thought of.

“Dear Princess Celestia,
Being a good friend means being able to keep a secret. However, you should never be afraid to express your true feelings with a good friend.
Your faithful student,
Twilight Sparkle.”

Spike rolled up the scroll and sent it away.

“Thank you, Spike,” Twilight smiled.

“No problem, Twilight,” Spike said. “What else needs doing?”

“We’re good for the day,” Twilight said.

End of chapter.