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// So... 
// Story: What a wonderful world 
// by a touch of sparkles 
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So I’ve come to a conclusion that I don't want to continue this, I will be re writing this story from the beginning and I have a few reasons.

the first is that I’ve come up with so many ideas in the process of writing this, that I’ve realised there are things that may not make sense, or I completely forgot things and only realised later on and I felt like I needed to just put them in to not leave something mentioned with no purpose. there is also one major plot hole that I realised recently, and that is there is absolutely no way that all the umbrum got captured, in as much of a realistic scenario this can be, there would be some left, and at this point I could only really make it work by rewriting. I also feel like I haven't really written Sombra that well. In this case I feel he should have a lot more trauma problems, and I have no life experience with that so even still it won’t be written perfectly. however I do have first-hand experience with grief so I got those feeling down, I just feel the need to include it more, especially as the new re-write will focus a lot more on Sombra's tribe and the closer bonds and the weaker bonds, I want it to hit him, and the twins (ha ha spoilers) much harder, or try to at least.

there is also the matter of age in this, as Sombra was so young I had like thirty chapters of just him ageing, and I feel sort of guilty for not starting the plot sooner, as it is something I get annoyed about when reading when it takes authors forever to get to the plot, and it's the main reason, me, myself, cannot actually read what I’ve written. so think of this like a first draft, and certain ideas will be carried over to the next. I will be re-writing, so the story will come back soon.

in terms of that, I’m actually going to plan large chunks at a time, in which I’m going to separate the story into chunks which will hopefully make it easier for me to compute in my chaotic mess of a brain, and hopefully it might be written better. because of this, I wont upload this story for some time, but in the meantime it gives me chance to post smaller stories, some still focusing on the AU and one I have planned is for an OC I’ve finally made and actually really liked.

So I’m sorry if you liked this story, but I don’t want to continue something I’m not enjoying writing anymore, as at this point it’s a chore. So just hold tight k.