The Grand Return of Mare Do Well

by Count_Pony001


Chapter 1: The return

Thank You, God for helping me make this

It was a dark and stormy afternoon, Mare Do Well was looking out of the window in her cottage in Manehatten.

She sees ponies walking, filly's playing and many other things that brought joy to Mare Do Well's heart.

Mare Do Well sighed and said, "I should go on vacation or relax, I been fighting crime for so long and I forgotten to relax and take care of myself!"

She went over to the basement and grabbed her luggage and packed sunglasses, sunscreen, a few clothes, and pepper spray."

She said, "I absolutely should bring pepper spray, I don't want fillies to unmask me and reveal my identity, it will be chaos, it almost happened once when i fought Dr. Weather, when that villain kept the mayor of my fair town hostage."

she shivered in fear and grabbed her luggage and head out. She bought a ticket for 5 bits and entered the train.

she sat down next to a pink coat and a dark pink mane.

She turned around and said, "Oh Hi! My name is Pinkie Pie, I am from Ponyville, I am a baker and know and am friends with everypony." Mare Do well shook her head, "I and my friends saved Equestria several times! I love cupcakes tooo!!!!!"

Mare Do Well said, "Well... Hey... U- Um... I am Mare Do Well, I am from Manehatten, I am coming to Ponyville for a vacation..."

Pinkie Pie gasp and asked, "You are from Manehatten, that is such a wonderful city! My friend Rarity has been there several times!"

Mare Do Well said, " Well, it was nice to meet you, Pinkie Pie!"

Pinkie Pie waved and said, "It was nice to meet you, Mare Do Well, want to be friends?"

Mare Do Well nodded her head and said, "Sure!"

The train stop and Mare Do Well exit the train with her luggage. She looked around and saw a peaceful and magical town of Ponyville.

She took a few steps forward and saw a blue Pegasus clearing the cloud. She is impressed how quickly she cleaned the sky from the cloud, she guessed it took her to clear the sky.

Mare Do Well said, "Good Job.

The blue Pegasus turned around and said, " Well, Thank You, I AM the fastest Pegasus in Equestria."

Mare Do Well said, "Okay..."

She then heard a loud cry for help, she turned around and said, "That must be coming from the bank!"

she ran the quickest she ever did in her life.

She saw a purple stallion who was an earth pony with a red mane with a gun, a mask, and a bag.

She saw ponies around the armed criminal shaking in fear, one mare is holding on to her little filly who was crying up a storm.
The bank teller was scared, she was sweating a little, the bankteller was a cyan unicorn with a green and red mane, she also had a dollar sign as her cutiemark.

The stallion shouted in a deep voice, "Give me money or someone will not see the sun again." he narrowed his eyes and was pointing a gun at the little filly. The filly, terrified was crying and hugging her mom very tightly, under her was a puddle of tears. Mare Do Well was angry, she couldn't believe what she saw she took a deep breath,

Mare Do Well yelled so loud that the people outside could hear her, "I WILL GIVE YOU A CHANCE TO LEAVE OR YOU WILL VERY REGRET TASSELING WITH ME!"

The Stallion was scared and dropped his gun and bag and was making a run for it.


Mare Do Well was blessed to have wings like a Pegasus, a magical horn like a unicorn. she used the magic to grab the pony and draw the pony over to her, she asked, "Why are you doing this?"

The pony replied, "I.. I- need... money, my dead-end job is so low...paying and I c- c... can't pay rent and... my landlord threaten t..to kick me out if I don't pay my... rent a- ag- again."

Mare Do Well asked in an angry tone, "So you decided to rob a bank and threaten to shoot a bucking filly if the bankteller doesn't give you money!?"

she then slams the pony down and used magic to grab the gun and saw that the gun was unloaded...

She said, "Get out and consider yourself lucky that the gun wasn't loaded... Get out... NOW!"
the dumb criminal ran out of the bank only to be escorted away from the ponyville citizens by 3 castle guards.

She then mumbled, "I thought the villains at Manehatten were crazy but that dumb pony proved me wrong."

The ponies and banktellers were cheering.

The bankteller said, "Good Job, by the way, what is your name?"

Mare Do well replied with, "I am Mare Do Well!"

The crowd was chanting "Mare Do Well!"

Mare Do Well exited out of the bank.

She said, "That was kinda fun!"

Her tummy was barking like a dog, she said, "Ooh I should get some lunch, I am very hungry, and I forgot to eat breakfast!"