The Mare in The Serpent's Coils

by CombatProductions


Who I Really Am

It had been five months since Choccy and Combat met in his cave. Over the course of those five months Choccy had visited him many times out in the Everfree. She would come by on the weekend when she had nothing planned. She began bringing snacks, board games and blankets.

They would always have fun and joke about, tell stories about funny moments in their life and overall be close to each other. It shocked her that he knew how to play the majority of the games she brought, including chess which he destroyed her at.

But every night she would let him coil around her, letting herself become putty in his coils. Every time she entered his embrace it got better every time. She let his voice run through her ears and let him hold her anyway they both liked. They would both fall asleep like that snuggled against each other, as if nothing else mattered.

When they would wake up they would continue to snuggle each other or they would play a game, Choccy would try and escape his coils and see how long it takes her or if she fails entirely. He had to let her win sometimes, knowing fine well that if he really did fully try she would never get out.

When it was time for her to go home, she was hesitant, wanting nothing more than to stay close to him. They had made a path so she could easily follow it to get home and to his cave easily.


Choccy sat at home after a long day at work, she splayed herself across her bed, she almost expected Combat to coil her. But unfortunately he was not there. It was only Thursday and she yearned to be back at the cave, wanting to see him and feel him around her. She got under the covers of the bed and wrapped them around herself. She did this alot, trying to imitate the way she felt in his coils. But it was never the same as actually being there.

Just thinking about him and his touch made her face burn hot with a blush. He was so gentle with her but if he wanted to he could very easily overpower her and turn her in to a meal. But he never did, he was kind and generous, never once did he harm her. Her face burned hotter at these thoughts, she wanted him to be with her at all times.

She let out a soft sigh and buried her face in to a pillow. She had a massive smile on her face from the thought of seeing him again.

"Just one more day and I can see him again." She said softly.


Combat sat alone in his cave, he had made himself cozy by snuggling in to the blankets that Choccy had given him. They were nice and warm. But not as warm as her in his coils. He couldn't wait for her to come back again, he was always disappointed when she left. He had been tempted to force her to stay.

Before he met her he was truly alone. He had lost everything, more than anyone will ever experience in their whole life. She gave him happiness back, gave him a reason to not give up. She was what he needed.

He wanted her to stay in his coils and to never leave them. The thought was nice but she had a job and a life outside of his. What she wanted was most important. He flexed his tail wishing she was in it.

He contemplated telling her what he truly was. Because he was more than just a large snake. She deserved to know what he was and where he came from.


Friday afternoon was so slow. Choccy was waiting for her shift to end so she could go home. She couldn't wait that long, she was to excited to see Combat again. What seemed like hours passed, in what was actually twenty five minutes. A small bell rang signaling the end of Choccy's shift. She practically sprinted out the doors and back home.

She burst through her door and began packing the stuff she would need, board games and food. There was already blankets there so she didn't need to worry about that. On her way home she had noticed how cold it was. It was just the beginning of winter and her winter fur had not grown yet. She walked to her room and opened her wardrobe looking for her usual outfit.

"Ah, here they are." She said. She pulled out a very cozy looking grey hoodie and a pair of leather pants. This was her go to always, no matter the weather.

She put on her signature clothing and left her house to go to Combat's cave. She wanders through the trees following the path they made. She looked about admiring the forest. When the cave came in to view she picked up her pace, moving quickly so she could get in to his soft embrace sooner.

When she entered she saw him snuggled up in all the blankets. This put a smile on her face and she put her bag on the ground. He turned and saw her, his eyes lighting up.

She rushed over to him joining him in the blankets. His tail coiled around her as he pulled her close. She let of a small moan and whimper at the feeling.

"You look good." He said.

"Thanks, this is my go to clothes." She thanked him.

"Choccy can I tell you... something?"

"Sure. What is it?"

His eyes filled with sadness as he looked at her.

"I need to tell you who I truly am," His voice was sad but still soft. "I am not native to Equestria. I am not native to anywhere. I was born when my people died out at the beginning of time."

Choccy looked confused and concerned.

"I... I am the last of my kind, I lost everything. I posses powers no living thing should but I do," He looked down in what looked like shame. "I came here looking for a life without worry and peace, but I didn't get it cause I was lonely. You gave me that happiness I wanted."

Choccy eyes were full of tears. She grabbed him and hugged him tightly.

"I'm sorry, I wish I was here sooner." She said with a whimper.

He held her close. His coils wrapping up her body. Her whimpers slowly turns in to sighs. Her soft hoodie helped with the feeling of comfort. He pulled her forelegs off of him and wrapped them up. She was up to her neck in coils and he gave her a comforting squeeze.

She let out a long sigh as the coil around her neck squeezed her. She made some cute noises and slowly began drifting off to sleep.

"I-I love..." She couldn't finish her sentence as sleep fully took hold.

Combat wasn't sure what she was going to say. He layed his head down on top of hers as he also fell asleep.

"Sleep well my mare, my Choccy... my love."