True love 2

by GRYFFINDOR123456


Phantom of the opera pt 2(the play)

I peeped out from behind the doors. I walked around so I was facing the stage. I walked through the audience until I was at the back of the stalls.

“AHHHH!” screamed Juniper. “It’s the ghost!”
“Nonsense,” said Flash. “The ghost does not exist.”
“My dad,” said Rarity. “Said that the Phantom of the Opera lives here.”
Flash smiled. “Really?” he asked. “Or is this one of your lies?”
“My dad told me he could train a dancer to become a singer,”
“Well, you’re not very good at singing, are you?” asked Juniper.

I walked away, back through the audience.
“Maybe try again next year,” said Juniper.

Rarity gasped. She turned and ran.


As everyone else walked off the stage, the stage rotated to reveal a room. There was a cracked mirror, an organ and a bed. I walked onto the stage. I pulled off the mask, chucking it onto the bed.
My hand brushed against the mirror. I screamed, frustrated about the whole being deformed thing.
I sighed, placing the mask back onto my face.


Rarity came on stage. I turned. She looked around nervously. I played the organ, to the Phantom of the opera theme. Then she began to sing.

I looked at the clock. When will this end?

After what seemed like hours, we came to the finale. I adapted the ending into a more age-appropriate more adult end.
Rarity freed Flash from the entrance. Flash kissed Rarity passionately and smiled, his blue eyes full of love. I snarled fiercely. “Erik,” said Rarity softly. “I love you as much as Raoul. But I just want to stay friends.”
Flash had different ideas. “He took you away!” he protested. “Shouldn’t I have the right to kill her?”
Rarity sighed. “Yes,” she replied. Flash looked into my eyes, a look of apology flitted across his face.
He raised the gun. A bang was heard. I let out a small cry of pain, as I fell to my knees. Rarity hurried to my side, as my head fell, into her lily-white hands. Then the curtain dropped.

Flash and Rarity dragged me off. He smiled, as he reached for the rack and passed me the mask. I stood up, placing the white mask on my face. The curtain rose, and it was time for credits.