//------------------------------// // The Merchant chapter 1 rewrite // Story: A Goku Displaced // by Light Star //------------------------------// No.” “Yes.” No.” “Yes.” “No I'm serious just take it back, You aren’t fooling me, I am not going to equestria.” I just wanted to go to comic con as it was always so far away, without a car, I never got a chance. My first job I was able to get enough money to get one and be able to buy a car and go, I was wearing the gii Gt Goku wore in dragonball Gt, with a fake tail attached. The merchant who I passed while walking to my Car after the event asked, I told him no and find someone else to go to equestria, as I recognized the merchant from the thousands of stories I read, but unfortunately it that only made it worse for me. “But you’ve lived such a lonely life, a guy with no friends, walking alone, don’t you want to move to a place where it is easy to make friends?” I scoffed, “and leave my mother who loves me dearly behind, as much grand as that is, it is selfish of me to leave her alone, and how did you know that?” “I didn’t but I do now.” He smirked, “so how about it?” “I told you my answer and my reasons.” I replied, “no.” “Oh come on.” The merchant exclaimed, “she lived her life already.” I gave him a blank look, before I turned to walk away. “Wait..” “For the final time my answer is no!” I shouted, “As awesome as it will be to meet the main six, I have family here that love me for me, I can’t abandon them!” “But-“ “Why do you want me so badly anyway?” I asked with a raised eyebrow, “according to the news and the stories on fimfiction, there are tons of people who have displaced I’m just like them aren’t I?’ He chuckled, “ now what would be the fun in explaining that? I have my reasons,” he shook his head, “now not much time is left for me now, do you not want to stay, yes? “Yes!” “Excellent!” his grin turned maniac as my eyes widened in shock as I realized, that I have been tricked, before cursing myself silently for being so stupid, “just needed the confirmed yes, as yes or anything related to that word to do the trick.” “You!” He snapped his fingers as I tried to run away, I blacked out a second later.