G5 Movie Redux (rewrite part 2)

by Norwegian boy


Welcome to Maretime Bay?

Deep in the Everfee forest, deeper than even Zecora would travel is a place where corruption hasn’t touched, where the flowers still blossomed, and the water is pure. In this placed lies a cabin and, in this cabin, lived a blue unicorn with dark blue hair/tail with some yellow streaks in it, he was wearing a cape with a hood and this unicorn had no cutie mark, and his name was Streak.

Streak was currently sitting by his desk and in front of him was a bottle of green liquid that was hanging in the air by the help of some metal and under the bottle was a small fire heating the green liquid.

“I don’t understand why some noble prick want a teleport potion.” Streak said to himself as he watch the liquid heat up. “But, at long as they are paying, I’m not complain.” He then saw that the potion was done so he turned off the fire. “There, all I need now is it to let it cool down and the potion should work.” He then walk over to another bench. “Time to make some more healing potion.” Streak was about to work when he heard the teleport potion started to make some noise, he look at desk and saw that he potion started to bubble. “That can’t be good.” It didn’t stop, it got worse. “That’s not good.” Streak ran over to the potion to try and stop it but before he could, the bottle explode right in his face and he black out.

Streak didn’t know how long he was out when he regain consciousness. “That’s the last time I make a potion for a noble prick.” He said when he could speak again. When Streak could feel again, he was lying on his stomach, and he could feel grass? “What the…?” Streak open his eyes and the only thing he could see was grass, he sat up. “What…? Where am I? Did that potion teleport me somewhere in Equestria?” That was the only thing he could think off.

Streak then saw that his bag with potion was lying not far from him, he tried to use magic to pick it up, nothing happened. “What? I can’t use magic?” He tried again but he couldn’t do it. “Oh come on, why can’t I use my magic?” He asked no one in particular. Streak then got up and walk over to the bag to see if his potion survived, he open the bag and stuck his head into it. “Well, at least the dimension spell I used on the bag is still working.” He pull his head out when confirmed that his potion was okay. “At least that something.” He used his hoof to placed his bag on his back. “I better find a town and asked somepony where I am.” He started to walk.

It didn’t take long before Streak found a signed and there it stood Maretime Bay, Streak had never heard that name before. But what really got his attention was what was written under Maretime Bay.

“No unicorn or pegasis are allowed. Huh, that a little harsh.” He look at the town which was by the ocean. “I’m guessing this town is populated by earth ponies and they don’t like the other pony races.” He was silence for a moment. “Where the heck am I?” Streak has visit every town in Equestria and he had never heard about a town that is only populated by earth ponies and the other races was banned from. “I guess I’m going in with a disguise.” He pulled the hood over his head and saw that the magic sill could cover up his horn. “My bag and hood still have magic, but I can’t use it.” He let out a sighed as he walk towards Maretime Bay. “I hate this placed.”

When Streak walk through the town, he could help but notice how advance it was, it didn’t look like they were using magic at all, he could even see some sort of train rolling through the town and it didn’t go on steam. Streak started to wonder where he was, he deiced to explore some more.

As Streak counited to walk many ponies gave him a wary look, they thought that he was a unicorn or a pegasis that was covering himself up, Streak didn’t care what they thought about him, he was used to it.

Then Streak saw a orange female pony and a brown male pony and it looks like they were arguing about something, Streak decide to find out what so he hide behind the stall the female was closing up.

“Do you have any idea how many bylaws you broke in there?” The stallion asked the mare.

“I’m sure you’re about to tell me.” Said the mare as she walk to the front of the stand.

“Actually, for once I can’t, because there’s so many!” The stallion said with some frustration in his voice. “I tried to warn you. I can’t keep associating with some pony who breaks every rule and causes chaos wherever she goes.” Breaking rules? Streak was intrigued, he liked ponies that broke the rulers. “I’m the sheriff.” Said the stallion while pointing at himself. The sheriff? Streak don’t like law ponies.

“Exactly. Other ponies look up to you. You can help.” Said the mare. Help with what? Streak wonder.

The stallion let out a sighed. “The law is the law, Sunny,” Sunny? So that’s her name. “and I’m here to uphold it and keep everypony safe.”

Sunny pointed at the stallion. “Aha, you just said everypony. That includes pegasi and unicorn.” Streak wonder what Sunny did.

That made the stallion to roll his eyes. “Come on, Sunny, what did you think was gonna happen? You give a little speech and what? Everypony just magically welcomes unicorns and pegasi into Maretime Bay?” That doesn’t sound bad at all, considering the signed Streak saw. “You keep saying there’s nothing to be afraid of. Well, then prove it.”

The sheriff let out a sighed. “All of that pony unity stuff was just a foal’s bedtime story made up by your dad. Like it or not, this is the way it is, and always will be. I’m the last real friend you got in this town. You really want to lose me to?” Those words made Sunny sad as the stallion walk away.

As Streak watch Sunny walk over to a bench and sat down, he couldn’t help but wonder what has happened to this place. It sounded like the three ponies races was divided, this doesn’t sound like the Equestria he’s from if he still is in Equestria.

Then two foals came running down a hill and they were laughing, they ran over to a poster which had a picture of a pegasis scaring an earth pony. Then one of the foals decided to ‘scare’ the other and then they ran past Sunny laughing.

Sunny then sat down on a bench with a sad look on her face. “I wish you were here, dad.”

Streak couldn’t help but feel bad for this Sunny, he was about to walk over to her when a male pony ran past them, and he look scared. “Uh…argh.” Said the stallion as he ran. Streak couldn’t help but look in the direction the stallion came from, he then saw more ponies running in his direction and he had no idea why.

Then another pony ran past Sunny screaming. “What the…?” Sunny asked as she look in the direction they ran from, and she saw some more ponies running towards her. She got up from the bench.

“What’s going on? What’s happening?” Sunny asked the ponies who was running but none of them answered her, then somepony knock her down on the ground.

Streak had no idea why they were running but then he saw why, it was a purple unicorn with blue hair. “Hi, new friend! My name’s is Izzy.” Said the unicorn with a smile while looking down on Sunny.

Sunny got up while looking up at Izzy’s horn. “U… u… unicorn.” She said with a smile on her face.

That there was unicorn in Maretime bay that was something the ponies there didn’t handle, they screamed and ran away, Streak just watch as they ran in different direction, and he couldn’t understand why. Izzy didn’t look that scary, she look happy.

Everypony was afraid but not Izzy, she thought that they were playing. “Ooh, is everypony playing hide and seek?” She then saw one hiding behind Sunny’s shop. “I see you!”

The pony was just afraid. “Argh! It’s a unicorn.” He then jump into the ocean which Streak thought was a little extreme.

Then Hitch and a red stallion step outside with another stallion. “Hey, what’s going on?” He asked the ponies who was running, he then saw Izzy. “Unicorn attack!” He screamed while hitting a button and then an alarm went off. The red earth pony tried to run back into the building he came out of, but he hit his face on the door. “This is not a drill! I repeat, this is not a drill!” He said while he started to run.

Hitch saw a colt who was sitting on the ground, afraid. He ran toward the colt, jump over some barrels, scoop up the colt and gave it to the nearest mare. “Your son is safe now, ma’am.” He then ran off.

“This isn’t my kid.” The mare shout after Hitch.

“You’re welcome.” He didn’t listen.

“Man the Splat-a-pult! Activate the unicorn trap!” Then trash landed on the ground. “Pick up that littler.” A pony did that.

Streak then saw that big X appeared in front of him. “What the heck?” He asked himself as he watch the whole thing.

Izzy on the other hoof was walking towards the ocean. “Wow. Is that the sea?” Then a trap appeared right in front of her, and she walk towards it. “I’ve never seen the sea.” Before she was trapped, Sunny managed to pushed her out of the way.

“’I’ve got to get you out of here!”

Streak watch as Sunny and Izzy disappeared between some buildings, he then decided it was time for him to leave so he started to run out of town. As Streak ran, he wonder if that unicorn knew why the magic has disappeared.

Once Streak was at a safe distance I wonder where they would go if they managed escaped, he then saw a lighthouse and he hope that was the home off one of them, he ran towards the lighthouse.