Total Chaos Island

by Starlight Fan


Wake Up Already

“Last time on Total Chaos Island, I introduced our campers and had them compete in  the first challenge. Spike, Derpy, and Grubber were all targets for them costing the challenge, but in the end Derpy’s klutziness got her eliminated. Will Grubber continue to survive being eliminated, Will Rainbow Dash let the competition get to her, and what is Suri up to, find out on Total Chaos Island.” Discord introduces.

(After theme song)

The Daring Dragons were at their cabins.

Starlight was snoring making Rainbow Dash angry.

“Ugh, does that pony ever stop snoring?” Rainbow Dash asked enraged.

“Oh why yes Trixie will have the peanut butter crackers.” Trixie said in her sleep.

“And does she ever stop talking in her sleep?” Rainbow Dash complained.

“Alright that’s enough, Starlight and Trixie clearly can’t help it, so leave them alone.” Applejack lectures.

“Fine.” Rainbow Dash crosses her hooves annoyed.

Meanwhile with the Powerful Parasprites they were in their cabins as an alarm clock then went off alerting everyone making them wake up.

The alarm clock was then stopped by Tempest.

“Rise and shine everyone we have to be up early if we don’t wanna be sluggish for today’s challenge.” Tempest explained as she got ready for the day.

“So, Tempest huh.” Scootaloo said sheepishly.

Confessional:

Rarity: I can’t believe Tempest woke me up from my beauty sleep, I was having the most wonderful dream about finding the perfect stallion.

Confessional Ends

The campers are then seen getting their food at the Mess Hall.

Everyone began snickering at Starlight as she entered the room, for she had a mustache drawn on her.

“Okay what?” Starlight asked incredulously.

“Someone messed with your face Starlight.” Trixie said with a mustache also drawn on her holding up a spoon to use as her reflection.

Starlight looked into the spoon Trixie had and rolled her eyes “Ha ha very funny Dash and Pinkie.”

“How’d you know it was us.” Pinkie Pie giggled.

“Because you two are widely known for pulling pranks." Starlight explained.

“Alright campers it’s time for the challenge.” Discord announced.

“So what is the next challenge?” Fluttershy asked.

“Well in today’s challenge you will be competing in the awake-a thon.” Discord said.

“The what a thon?” Rainbow Dash asked.

“In the Awake-a thon you will be trying to stay awake for as long as possible, the first team to fall asleep loses and will send someone home.” Discord explained “Now head to the campfire so you can start competing.”

Soon the campers were at the campfire where they began trying to stay awake.

“So how long do you think this will be?” Starlight asked Trixie.

“Relax Starlight, how long could this possibly take?” Trixie smirked.

24 hours later

“It has been twenty-four hours and all twenty-three campers are still awake.” Discord softly announced.

“Woo, stay awake for twenty-four hours, no big deal, woo-hoo.” Scootaloo cheered before she fell asleep.

“There goes our numbers advantage.” Lightning Dust dully replied.

Soon she saw Grubber and Sweetie Belle asleep on the ground and smirked.

“Or maybe not.” Lightning Dust said.

Applebloom and Applejack were trying their hardest to stay awake.

“I’m so tired.” Applebloom said.

“You and me both, but we can pull through.” Applejack said trying to motivate her little sister.

Meanwhile Suri was watching Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy as they were talking.

Confessional:

Suri: So my plan is to get enough allies to vote with me and I think I know just who to put in my alliance.

Confessional Ends

Suri looked over and saw Snips and Snails together.

“Perfect.” Suri muttered to herself.

“Hey Snips, Snails can I talk to you for a moment.” Suri whispered walking up to the two colts.

“Sure Suri.” Snips whispered back.

Suri, Snips, and Snails were now at the back of the campfire.

“So I was thinking we form an alliance to make the final three, how do you feel about that?” Suri explained.

“That sounds awesome.” Snails said happily.

“Count us in.” Snips replies.

“Great, now let’s just try to stay awake, okay.” Suri said.

“Got it.” Both unicorns spoke.

Confessional:

Snips: Perfect I just got my ticket to the final three, I’m so gonna win this.

Confessional Ends

24 hours later

It was night time, as we see that Rarity, Fluttershy, Snips, Snails, and Diamond Tiara asleep for the Powerful Parasprites while Applebloom and Lyra were asleep for the Daring Dragons.

"Weaklings." Lightning Dust muttered to herself, angry that half her team was asleep.

Twilight began talking to Tempest while they were at the campfire "So Tempest how have things been since the Storm King's defeat?"

"They have been good, I have been traveling the world with Grubber and I came back to show how I've redeemed myself." Tempest explained.

"That's great I'm glad to see you again." Twilight said happily.

"Me too Princess." Tempest said.

Meanwhile Trixie began talking to Starlight.

"Hey Starlight I was thinking we should form an alliance, are you in?" Trixie whispered.

“Sure Trix I’d love to be in an alliance with you.” Starlight whispered happily.

“Excellent.” Trixie whispered gleefully.

Confessional:

Trixie: Trixie plans on winning this game. To do that I’ll need a few allies, Starlight is a given since we’re best friends, but who else should I bring into the alliance?

Confessional Ends

“So Starlight who do you think we should add to our alliance?” Trixie asked.

“How about Spike?” Starlight suggested.

“You mean the dragon?” Trixie raised an eyebrow.

“Yeah he’s pretty nice and I am close with him so it’d probably work out.” Starlight explained.

“Fine but you have to ask him.” Trixie said.

“Deal.” Starlight beamed before going off to ask Spike about the alliance.

Spike was busy trying to keep himself awake while also staring at Rarity.

“Ah.” Spike sighed happily at the sight of his crush.

He then felt a tap on his back and was surprised to see Starlight.

“Oh hey Starlight, how’s it going?” Spike asked with a smile on his face.

“Hey Spike I just wanted to ask if you wanted to be in an alliance with me.” Starlight said.

“Sure Starlight, I’d love to.” Spike said happily.

“Awesome by the way, Trixie is also in our alliance.” Starlight said “Are you okay with that?”

“Sure.” Spike shrugged.

Confessional:

Spike: After last elimination, I need to make sure I’m safe so getting as many allies as I can is perfect for me.

Confessional Ends

A while later Bon Bon and Sunburst had fallen asleep for the Powerful Parasprites and Spike and Trixie had fallen asleep for the Daring Dragons.

“Well the dragon definitely did do better than last time.” Gilda shrugged.

Meanwhile Suri was beginning to talk to Lightning Dust.

"Hi there Lightning Dust." Suri waved happily.

"Don't pretend to be friendly, it's so fake, what do you want?" Lightning Dust replied bitterly.

"Ugh fine I came to offer you an alliance deal." Suri said getting right to the point.

"And why should I align with you?" Lightning Dust asked raising an eyebrow.

"Because you and I are the most unpopular teammates and you need all the allies you can get." Suri explained.

Lightning Dust thought about it for a moment and she realized it was true, Rainbow Dash and her friends would be out to get her and she did need allies.

"Fine I'll align with you." Lightning Dust grumbled.

"Great, now I was thinking about eliminating one of Twilight's friends if we lose." Suri smirked.

Lightning Dust beamed at this idea maybe this wouldn't be so bad after all.

"I like the way you think." Lightning Dust grinned. "But how do we eliminate one of them, they're too popular."

"Leave that to me." Suri answered before walking away.

Discord began walking over to the nine awake contestants and began clapping “Bravo my little ponies, so you’ve made it this far into the awake a thon, impressive but now it’s time to make things harder.”

“What is he going to do now?” Twilight asked angrily.

“Time for the history of Equestria, chapter one.” Discord began reading.

Confessional:

Applejack: Oh come on, you know what, bring it on.

Confessional Ends

As Discord was reading Suri and Lightning Dust fell asleep for the Powerful Parasprites while Rainbow Dash, Starlight and Gilda fell asleep for the Daring Dragons.



“And the Earth Ponies, Pegasi, and Unicorns were all against each other but then a huge storm happened causing them to hate each other more than ever.” Discord read.

Twilight noticed Tempest about to fall asleep, “Tempest.”

Tempest then fell on the ground asleep.

“No, Tempest.” Twilight said tiredly.

“So...boring....must.....stay.....up.” Applejack said trying her best to keep fighting but she then falls asleep.

“You can go to sleep now Pinkie, I have had some late night study sessions before so I am a pro at staying up.” Twilight bragged.

“Ooh cool, I’ve had my share of late night parties so I’m also good at staying up.” Pinkie Pie beamed.

24 hours later

It was now morning, everyone but Twilight and Pinkie Pie left the campfire and Twilight and Pinkie Pie were still up.

“Well it’s time for a ten minute bathroom break, any takers?” Discord smirked.

“You know what I can’t hold it anymore, I’ll go.” Twilight raised her hoof.

“Remember you’ve got got ten minutes.” Discoed reminded the purple alicorn.

“Fine but keep your cameras out of the stall.” Twilight glared making Discord nod in understanding.

After ten minutes Discord went to check on Twilight.

“Oh Twilight, time’s up.” Discord knocked on the stall door.

He then opened the stall closing his eyes but opened them once he heard snoring.

Twilight was seen asleep on the toilet.

Discord then picked Twilight up and teleported her and himself to the campfire.

“It appears Princess Twilight has fallen asleep on the can which means Pinkie wins for the Daring Dragons.” Discord announces.

“OMG I won, I won, yay!” Pinkie Pie cheered before falling on the ground unconscious.

“The Powerful Parasprites will be seeing me at the elimination ceremony tonight.” Discord said.

Suri, Snips, Snails, and Lightning Dust then had an alliance meeting.

“So who should we eliminate tonight? Twilight? Rarity? Or Fluttershy?” Lightning Dust asked.

“Easy, I know who we’re gonna eliminate it’s gonna be Fluttershy.” Suri smirked.

“That wimpy pegasus, why?” Lightning Dust asked.

“She’s too popular and she did bad in the challenge.” Suri remarked.

“What about Rarity, she’s also useless and her whining gets on my nerves.” Lightning Dust said.

“Rarity is less of a threat for now, Fluttershy is more popular and also did bad in the challenge we may not get another chance like this.” Suri pointed out.

“Snips, Snails, I need you to get your two classmates Scootaloo and Diamond Tiara to vote with us.” Suri said.

“What do you want us to say to them?” Snips asked.

“Well here’s what I want you to say.” Suri said before the screen cuts to black.

Meanwhile Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity are seen discussing who to eliminate.

“So who should we vote out, Suri or Lightning Dust?” Twilight asked her friends.

“I say we vote out Suri, Lightning Dust at least is good in challenges.” Rarity said.

“I’m okay with whichever we choose.” Fluttershy said meekly.

“Alright Suri it is.” Twilight said “I’ll try and get Scootaloo, Tempest, and Sunburst to vote with us.”

Twilight then left to talk to the three aformentioned.

Twilight saw Sunburst and walked over to him.

“Hey Sunburst.” Twilight waved.

“Oh hey Twilight, what’s up?” Sunburst asked.

“Hey Sunburst I just wanted to ask if you could vote out Suri, she’s very manipulative and could get to the end if we don’t vote her off right now.” Twilight explained.

“Hmm, I guess I can vote her out." Sunburst said.

"Thanks Sunburst." Twilight said happily.

Soon Twilight began talking with Tempest at the campfire.

“So you’re saying that you want me to vote out Suri, is that correct?” Tempest asked.

“Yeah, it would be a really big help, so are you in?” Twilight replied.

“Count me in Twilight.” Tempest nodded.

“Awesome, thank you Tempest.” Twilight beamed.

“You’re welcome Princess.” Tempest replied.

Meanwhile Snips and Snails were walking to the cabins to find Diamond Tiara and Scootaloo there.

“Hey guys.” Snips beamed.

“Oh hey Snips and Snails, what is it?” Diamond Tiara asked politely.

“Oh I just wanted to ask if you’d be willing to vote out Fluttershy with us, Suri, and Lightning Dust?” Snips asked.

“Work with Lightning Dust, nuh-uh, she’s a jerk.” Scootaloo huffed.

“Yeah but think about it, Fluttershy did bad in the challenge plus she is super popular and has five besties on her side, if she doesn’t get voted out soon she might win.” Snails argued.

Diamond Tiara raises an eyebrow at this, Snails had a point about Fluttershy.

“Hopefully you at least consider it.” Snips said before he and Snails left.

“Can you believe them, I can’t believe they think we’d work with Lightning Dust.” Scootaloo scoffed.

“Well...maybe we could just This once vote with them, and vote for Lightning Dust next time.” Diamond Tiara said hesitant.

“What? But why? Fluttershy’s one of our friends.” Scootaloo asked incredulously.

“I know Scootaloo but if we want to make it far in this game we have to make some sacrifices and you heard Snails, if she goes too far it’ll be impossible to vote her out.” Diamond Tiara argued politely “Look I won’t hold it against you if you don’t vote her out. I understand if you don’t want to.”

Diamond Tiara then left Scootaloo alone to think.

Soon Scootaloo was seen walking to the campfire ceremony with Twilight catching up to her.

"Hey Scootaloo, everything okay?" Twilight asked concerned.

"Oh I'm fine Twilight, don't worry I'm just upset we lost." Scootaloo lied.

"Oh, okay well just to let you know, me, Rarity, Fluttershy, Tempest and maybe Sunburst are planning on voting out Suri tonight, and I was wondering if you wanted to vote with us." Twilight said.

"I think I might vote for Suri." Scootaloo said.

“Yes, thanks Scootaloo.” Twilight hugged the filly before letting her go and heading to the campfire.

Scootaloo could do math, there were going to be five votes for both Suri and Fluttershy, while her gut told her to vote out Suri, she knew Fluttershy was a big threat, and who knows who Bon Bon will vote for, she had no idea what to do.

We then cut to the campfire ceremony where all twelve teammates were sitting on stumps.

“Powerful Parasprites, I have eleven marshmallows on this plate but twelve of you, whoever does not get a marshmallow is eliminated from the game. Now go cast your votes in the confessional.” Discord said holding up a plate full of marshmallows.

Confessional:

Twilight: So long Suri.

Rarity: Take this clothes copier.

Suri: Sorry Fluttershy but you gotta go.

Bon Bon: I think we’re all voting for Scootaloo, she fell asleep first for crying out loud.

Scootaloo looks conflicted until she finally writes a name down.

Confessional Ends

“You have all casted your votes and made your decision, when I call your name you get a marshmallow.” Discord said.

“Bon Bon.”

“Sunburst.”

“Diamond Tiara.”

“Snips.”

“Snails.”

“Rarity.”

“Tempest.”

“Twilight.”

“And...Lightning Dust.”

Scootaloo, Fluttershy, and Suri all looked worried.

“Campers I have only two marshmallows left, the three of you all got votes tonight, the next one safe is...” Discord announced.

“Scootaloo.” Discord said.

Scootaloo sighed with relief before getting her marshmallow.

“The final marshmallow goes to...” Discord dragged on.

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“Suri.” Discord said solemnly obviously upset that Fluttershy had been eliminated.

“What?!” Twilight and Rarity said in shock.

“What? Why me?” Fluttershy asked.

“This doesn’t make sense, there were meant to be six votes for Suri unless...(gasp) one of you lied to me.” Twilight gasped.

“It wasn’t me, I voted for Suri.” Sunburst said defensively.

“Princess I swear I voted for Suri.” Tempest promised.

Scootaloo looked down in shame “They’re telling the truth it was me, I voted for Fluttershy.”

Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy gasped.

“But Scootaloo why?” Twilight asked feeling betrayed.

“Snips and Snails made great points that Fluttershy would win this if she got any further since she has you girls on her side I’m sorry.” Scootaloo said guilty.

“Well now that we’re done with that, Fluttershy the dock of shame awaits.” Discord said.

“I understand, bye everypony, I’ll see you all later.” Fluttershy said before getting on the boat.

Discord was then seen on the dock

“Well wasn’t this the blindside of the century, will Twilight forgive Scootaloo, will the alliance of Starlight, Trixie, and Spike work out, and will Suri and Lightning Dust dodge another elimination, find out on Total Chaos Island.” Discord announced.