//------------------------------// // Chapter 1 // Story: The Cutie Re-Mark: The Ultimate Enemy // by LoganRyder //------------------------------// (Theme) (The first shot shows two royal guards of Celestia along with an unknown pony cloaked) (The second then shows two split pictures of Spike and an older looking teenage version of himself, with red eyes and sharp spikes on his head. Spike is on the blue right side, while his evil older self is on the red left side, the two pictures slowly begin to go up to each other) (The third then shows Spike facing his evil self, who only smirks in arrogance at him) (The fourth shot shows same second shot appears and begins to reveal both's faces) (The fifth shows Spike fighting his evil self, who only held out his arms in a taunting manner) (The sixth shot shows the picture from the second shot now fully put together and shows Spike, who then roars out a large wail of green fire at the screen, which goes white) In the sky, there were two ponies in battle against each other. The first was Twilight Sparkle, who was flying in the air and blasting magic blasts at her adversary. This was Starlight Glimmer, an pony who wanted to make her village live in "equality" but was stopped by Twilight and her friends. As they battled each other, there were both young and adult pegasi watching the duel. "You really gotta work on your aim." Starlight taunted the alicorn "Luckily for you, I'm not done yet!" Twilight replied They clashed again, attacking with different magic spells, until Starlight fired an big blast from her horn at the flying alicorn with an smirk "Try this!" Twilight gasped at the attack and dodged, which landed on the ground a large blue hole, but unfortunately, since Spike was on her back at the same time. "Spike!" Twilight shouted Spike screamed until he fell into the magic portal. Which closed the moment he fell into it "TWILIGHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTT!!!" Spike cries out as he fell inside. The baby dragon was falling through the sky and landed on a tree. looked around and saw he was in a forest "Where am I?" Spike asks himself in confusion He looked around to find an exit to dark forest and saw a light. He ran to it and saw the sign for Ponyville "There's Ponyville! I gotta warn the others about Twilight!" Spike said in relief upon seeing the town However, he saw Sweet Apple Acres and the farm was destroyed, while the trees were dying and had no apples. "What the hay? What happened to Applejack's house? " Spike said in shock. A loud boom was heard in the city and caused Spike to jump in fright. He saw the explosion was in Ponyville. "What was that?!" Spike thought in fear and surprise. Carrying all the confidence in him, he went to the town and ran to see the source of the large explosion. However, the moment he arrived, he was shocked at the state of the entire area. All the buildings in the town such as Sugarcube corner, Carousel Boutique and many other homes were devastated from destruction and despair. "What happened here?" Spike said in his thoughts An female scream was heard and said "RUN!, it's the dragon again!" Spike was surprised, were they referring to him? Just as he was about to react, a large blast almost hit him. "What the?!" Spike said as he hid in a nearby alleyway. He looked and saw to his horror, an teenage dragon with red eyes, purples scales and green sharpened spikes on his head was floating in the sky surprisingly with wings that were dark as the night and was blasting dark green fire blasts out of his arms at the running ponies, who fled in terror at the flying dragon that attacked them all. "Who the heck is that?" Spike whispered The dragon then saw an whole army of royal guards suddenly face the teenage dragon. The lead guard said "Spike the dragon, you are under arrest and we have all of Ponyville surrounded, surrender now and you will not be harmed." The teen dragon only laughed in response to this demand and said "Surrender, after the things you and the girls did to me for the past few years? Not even close!" He threw back his hands and fired a large green blast of magic at the royal guards. Blowing them away and knocking them into a building. Dark Spike then flew away after he dealt with the guard ponies. After he dealt with them, Spike was shocked, that dragon was him, but how did he grow up so fast? How did he get so much power? Spike only ran out of the alleyway and said "Wait? That was me?" As he ran, two ponies noticed him and Spike recognized them instantly The first pony was a pegasus who had a pink curly mane, yellow coat and 3 pink butterflies as her cutie mark, but had a few notable differences, she had a metal left wing and her left eye had a bandage on it. The second was his crush Rarity, but she looked noticeably different. Her mane was more short and had a metal like vibe to it and her tail was shorter. "Wait..are those two...?" Spike said upon recognizing who the two ponies actually were. They looked at him and gave glares of disgust and anger. "Hey it's the dragon!" The pegasus said in shock "Get him!" Rarity hissed in fury They charged at him as Spike ran saying "Rarity! Fluttershy! What're you two doing?!" "Stopping YOU!" Fluttershy responded "And this time...PERSONALLY!" Rarity angrily added The baby dragon ram everywhere he could to avoid his angry friends. But they followed him where ever he hid. As he was about to hide in Rarity's destroyed boutique, Fluttershy caught him in a net. "Gotcha!" The shy mare said Rarity approached the trapped baby dragon and said "This time it all ends. Here and now!" She began to lit her horn up for a blast from her magic as Spike gave a frightened look and said in fear. "Rarity why are you doing this?! I'm your friend!" "I thought so too. But I guess I wasn't after all this." She said with a tone of both hate and regret. Just as she could fire, a green blast knocked her into the boutique, Fluttershy saw her friend get attacked and said "Who did that?!" "That would be me." She turned and saw the other Spike from her timeline give a smirk before he knocked her into the boutique with a savage punch "And eventually him." Dark Spike said looking at his trapped young self