Untitled BigDerp Story

by CreativeChaosStudios


Chapter 5

The day had improved infinitely since that afternoon nightmare; Dinky had enjoyed the zoo with the girls, and Ditzy had enjoyed the company of Big Mac. They talked about their jobs and families, and their hobbies, and about themselves. Ditzy learned his age, twenty-nine, and heard stories of his family, mostly the trouble a younger AJ got into. Big Mac had learned about Ditzy, her family life and the years with Dinky and her job, and both shared a small milkshake as the group ventured through the zoo. Even with their date planned for later this evening, both felt like this was the first date they would take together. As the sun began to sink against the sky of Ponyville, Big Mac clapped his hands to get the girls' attention. "Alright, girls, let's get headin' home."

"Awww..." The four girls groaned in unison before marching off towards the parking lot, Big Mac and Ditzy following behind. The blonde woman was surprised to see how Dinky interacted with Big Mac, and she found that she felt better about getting close to him. Dinky already liked him, so that was a plus in Ditzy's book, and he knew how to handle kids. 'He's the perfect man.' Ditzy thought to herself as she kissed Dinky's head. "Well, I have my car, so we'll meet you at Sweet Apple Acres?"

"Eeyup" was his reply as he loaded up Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle. "See ya there, Ditzy."

Smiling warmly to him, she took Dinky by the hand and walked her to the car. Dinky skipped the entire way, humming a song, and looked to her mother. "Do you and Mister Apple like each other?"

It was an innocent enough question, and Ditzy was happy to reply. "I think we do, Muffin."

She buckled Dinky into the backseat and kissed her head again. "In fact, you're going to stay with Applebloom a little longer while Mister Apple and I go on a date."

Dinky's eyes lit up and she giggled happily for her mother. Ditzy closed the door and walked around to the driver side, taking her seat behind the wheel. "So, behave yourself tonight. Understand, Muffin?"

"I understand, Momma." Dinky replied with a bright smile. With that, and smiles on both of their faces, they began towards Sweet Apple Acres behind Big Macintosh's truck. The drive took them through the familiar countryside of Ponyville, the fields and trees in the distance giving Ditzy thoughts of a simpler life. The city wasn't terrible, but things out here were a lot more relaxed. No crime, no drama, just open fields and sunshine, and the ones who mattered. On the horizon, the sun was setting, and Ditzy was growing more anxious about her dinner with Big Macintosh.

When they arrived at the farm, Big Macintosh escorted the group inside and informed Applejack of his plans this evening. AJ couldn't help but shoot a glance to Ditzy, one that made the woman believe she didn't approve, and looked skeptically at Big Mac. Unsure of what AJ's reaction meant, she began to think horrible things. Did AJ believe she was only trying to get Big Mac to stay and help with Dinky? She was a single mother after all, and money was tight. Did she think she was a loose woman because she wasn't married and had a daughter? Or was it simply, underneath the smiles and words of praise for Dinky, did AJ just not like her...? It all made Ditzy feel horrible, but Big Mac could be heard defending himself...and her.

"Now, AJ, don't be like that." Mac requested as he crossed his arms.

"Ah'm sorry, Big Mac, but this doesn't seem like something y’all would do. Y’all have always been one to keep away from relationships. Y’all just met too. Frankly, Ah'm just skeptical about the whole thing." AJ replied, putting her hands up in front of her. "But Ah won't stop ya. Ya gotta live with your choices, Mac."

"That's what Pa taught me to do, AJ." Big Mac replied, turning his attention back to Ditzy before walking out of the house with her. "Ah would like to apologize about AJ, but she's right to be worried."

"Why is that?" Ditzy asked, stopping on the porch and crossing her arms over her stomach, trying to focus both eyes on Big Mac.

"Because Ah haven't been one for relationships or datin'." Big Mac replied, leaning against the pillar of the porch. "But, Ah won't lie, Ditzy; ya have my interest. Ya seem real down-to-earth, with a good head on ya shoulders, so Ah want to take the time and get to know ya a little more."

Her heart fluttered at his words, and she couldn't help but smile some. "So, I guess that means...I'm the first girl you've have asked to dinner?"

"Eeyup. The first one Ah've actually been personally fond of, too." He replied, smiling before reaching out to her. He was offering her his hand as assistance down the steps, and looked to her with those lazy green eyes. Ditzy took it with a bright smile and walked with him to the truck.

Getting into the truck, Ditzy's heart pounded furiously within her chest. She was nervous, excited, scared, and eager at the same time; Big Macintosh, a kind and sweet man, actually liked her, and for Ditzy, being liked was a first. Her eyes got her daughter teased, and most people tended to keep their distance from little ol' Derpy, out of the simple assumption she was slow, disabled. Ditzy was as normal as could be, with the exception of her wall-eyed appearance, and she tried to get people to see that, but nothing worked. But here was Mac, taking her to dinner, and enjoying her for who she was; it was refreshing.

When Big Macintosh joined her in the truck, he started the engine and looked over to his date, giving her a small, welcoming smile. Ditzy didn't know what came over her, but she found herself moving closer to him, and kissed his lips gently. A hand rested on his cheek as she held it for a moment, and when she found herself pulling away, she caressed his cheek gently, her eyes closing with a smile. Big Macintosh was blushing, but he found himself returning her smile. He leaned in and kissed her on his own accord, and she returned it with eagerness. After a moment, they parted their lips and Ditzy bit her lip. "I...I don't want to be forward...but would you like to come by after dinner...? I...I would like, um...to keep doing...that."

"Ah'll let AJ know Dinky is staying over this evening..." Big Macintosh replied softly, his lips brushing hers before he gave her another gentle kiss.

Big Macintosh ended their little moment as he focused on being behind the wheel. He drove them out of Sweet Apple Acres and headed back into Ponyville to treat his guest to a nice, romantic dinner. The drive was silent, as no words were really needed brighten the mood, and Big Mac could see Ditzy shooting him a little glance and smile every so often. When they finally arrived at Seymour's Cafe, Ditzy noticed some familiar faces at the tables outside the restaurant They were the women who tormented her at work and on her route everyday, and the woman's heart sank when she saw them. It was a noticeable change and Big Mac looked off in the general direction of Ditzy's stares. "Ya know those women?"

"Sadly, yes." Ditzy replied, sighing heavily as she looked at her date. "They are some of the...less friendly...people I meet on my route. Always giving me trouble about my looks and eyes..."

"Well, Ditzy, Ah think we should give them a little surprise then." Big Mac commented, his words having an edge of humor behind them. Looking to the woman beside him, Big Mac pulled into a parking spot across the street from Seymour's Cafe and pointed to one of the woman, a tall woman with hair of pink with lighter streaks. "See that one there? She's been tryin' to get me in her bed for as long as Ah could remember. All of them, actually, but Ah'm not that kind of man. Ah'm also not one for bein' rude, but how about we show them who Ditzy Doo can attract with her looks?"

The plan was hilarious, and Ditzy couldn't help but laugh before kissing him gently. "Alright, Mister Apple. Shall we?"

"Allow me to your door for ya, Miss Doo." Big Macintosh replied after the kiss, turning off the engine and stepping out of the driver's seat to open her door for her. Holding it open, he noticed the gazes and the seductive smiles of the women across the street. When Ditzy stepped out of the car, Big Mac offered her his arm politely, much to the shock and dismay of the viewers.

"Is that Ditzy?" One of them asked in disbelief. "With Macintosh Apple?!"

It was simply an outrage to the pink-haired woman, who stood with arms crossed. "Maybe he's dating her out of pity. It's hard to not feel sorry for Derpy over there. With her eyes and all."

As the couple crossed the street, Big Macintosh took the lead and opened the door for Ditzy. "'Cuse me, ladies."

Ditzy walked inside with a bright smile, Big Macintosh following her without a word to the women, and met with the hostess for a table. Following the hostess moments later, Big Mac and Ditzy took a seat in a small booth, sitting across from one another, and smiled proudly to each other at their actions. Ditzy was the first to speak, combing some of her blonde hair before her ear. "That was awfully confident of you, Mac. Giving those girls a show like that."

"Aw shoot, Ah don't mind much what people think about me, but Ah do care what people think about others they don't rightfully know. They can only see the physical side of things, but Ah see that big ol' heart you have." Mac replied, brushing off his shirt idly. "'Cuse me for a moment, Miss Doo."

"Sure." Ditzy replied, resting her head on her hand, elbow propped up on the table, watching as he stood up from the booth and made his way to the restroom. Eagerly, like some lovestruck teenager, Ditzy pulled out her phone and texted Carrot Top and Sparkler: I'm on a date with Big Mac! :D

Not even twenty seconds later, Sparkler replied: Wut?! Details!

Followed by Carrot Top: OMG! /)*3*(\

Ditzy texted both of them responses and bit her lip, smiling like a idiot to herself out of giddiness. But the feeling soon passed as the woman from outside sat down across from her with her friend. "Hello, Derpy."

"Ditzy." She replied in some annoyance, but with a smile. Nothing was going to ruin her mood this evening. "What is it, Roseluck?"

"So, how's it been this evening? Fuck the stallion yet?" Rose questioned with some forward curiosity, looking off to the bathroom. "Should warn you though, he won't find you as attractive after my friend Lily over there is finished with him."

These women were heartless, ruthless, towards Ditzy for no reason. Trying her hardest to focus her eyes on the woman across from her, Ditzy could only smirk in confidence. "Good luck with that..."

Her words weren't said out of anger, but more out of confidence once she saw Big Mac excuse himself from the woman's presence, his tall frame returning to the booth. "How are y’all this evenin', ladies?"

Roseluck and her friend, Daisy, looked to Big Mac and smiled sweetly to him. "We're doing just wonderful, Stud."

"Ah'm glad to hear that, but if ya wouldn't mind, Ah would like to spend some time with Miss Doo here." Big Macintosh commented. Ditzy knew he was politely telling them to 'Get Lost', earning Big Mac another giddy smile from her. The women nodded and winked to Big Mac. "Sure thing, Handsome. See ya around..."

They left the booth, trying their best to hide their frustration, and Big Mac sat back down with a wide smile, his eyes still half-lidded. "Sorry Ah took so long. Hopefully they didn't give ya much of a hard time..."

"Actually, Mac, they didn't get to me one bit." Ditzy replied, reaching over to Big Macintosh's hand. Mac was able to give the woman's hand a small kiss before their waiter came by for their orders. The rest of the night went swimmingly as they ate dinner. From family to their dreams and hobbies, Ditzy and Big Mac continued their earlier conversation over their meal. It wasn't until after dinner that they decided to learn some other things...

Some time after arriving at Ditzy's apartment, she found Big Mac and herself in bed. Big Mac was shirtless in all his muscular glory, while Ditzy sat straddling his hips. Her hands ran along his chest and shoulders as the farmer kissed along her neck. Giving him something new to work with, Ditzy leaned back and removed her shirt for him, followed by her bra. Cupping her breasts in her hands, hiding herself from him, they looked at one another and kissed for what felt like an eternity before she gave him permission to do as he wished. Despite everything in her past, Ditzy wanted this. Underneath the fear and insecurities, however, laid hope for new memories and feelings replacing the pain. Wrapping her arms around his neck, pressing herself to him, she bit her lip and muffled a small sound as Mac gave her peak a little lick and suckle. It washed away those doubts from her mind, and she wanted everything he could offer her...

After the foreplay, Ditzy stood up and bit her lip, looking at Big Macintosh hungrily. Removing the last of her clothing, Ditzy now stood nude before Macintosh Apple. She crawled over her lover and kissed him heatedly as she guided his hand between her thighs. While sweet and gentlemanly was nice in public, Ditzy wanted him to stop being so polite...And to be passionate. Kissing him more heatedly, Big Mac caught her hints and began to massage her lower lips before slipping two fingers into her wetness. Ditzy gasped lightly, her nails inadvertently digging into Mac's chest. She heard him make a small sound at her action and looked down at him with pleasured eyes. His fingers worked her over until she came gently, the first of many for the night, and she took a movement to adjust her position on the bed.

"Lose the pants, you stallion..." She teased seductively, kissing his chest and stomach. Looking up at him, she ran her hand down to his belt and tugged playfully.

He sat up and worked on undoing his belt bucket. When it was undone, Ditzy unzipped his jeans and reached into his pants and boxers, blushing hard once she felt his length. She couldn't lie, it was large. Giving him a look, her eyes glistening with arousal, she gave it a long lick from base to tip and slowly began to work it over with a hand and mouth, much to Mac's satisfaction. "Oh, Ditzy..."

Closing her eyes, she took him in her mouth and worked her way to the base, but found herself gagging about three-fourths of the way down. She came up for air and coughed some before biting her lip, stroking him with her hand, and tried once more. Big Mac moaned loudly, her throat tightening around whatever she managed to get. He held her head in place for a motion and arched his back with a surprised gasp once she took the entire length, her lips pressed against his lower stomach. Her eyes were wide and she managed a small smile before coming up, letting her tongue drag along the base before she moved away. He was solid now and there was no more time for games. Scooting back on her bed, Big Mac got comfortable as Ditzy crawled over him, straddling his hips once more as she slid down his length. Her back arched and a pleasured moan was heard as she took every inch of him into her body. "Oooh~...M-Mac..."

Big Mac held her by her hips and returned her opinion, his body shivering from her tightness. "Ya feel incredible yourself..."

She could tell he loved the feeling her body gave him. Slowly, she began to work her hips in circular motions, her hands resting on his chest. This went on for a few minutes before Big Mac felt her climax over his length. Her body shuddered and she bit her lip. He leaned up and wrapped an arm around her waist before rolling her onto her back. Taking over for the woman, Mac began to roll his hips slowly in and out of her womanhood, earning himself a few pleasured moans from her. She gripped the sheets and Mac began to work his hips faster, and occasionally harder, to see what reaction he got. Ditzy moaned even more loudly and wrapped her legs around his hips as he worked her over, and she found herself cumming once again, her mind getting cloudy with sensations. "Aaaa~..."

Big Macintosh worked her for as long as he could, and was impressed by his own stamina after an hour or so, but he was close to climaxing. Unsure of what to do, he looked to the incredibly pleasured and aroused Ditzy, who pulled him down to her for a heated kiss, her legs wrapping around him firmer. He took that as the sign and worked his hips a little faster before pushing into her. There was a grunt from him as he came, filling her womanhood with a sudden rush of warmth. Ditzy moaned loudly, holding her lover close, and whimpered as she came again. Holding him against her, keeping him within her walls, Ditzy kissed him more lovingly now and looked to him. "Mmm...That..."

"Ah know..." Mac replied, knowing what she wanted to say. Ditzy could only smile and bit her lip as Mac pulled himself from her body, her sensitivity causing a small cry of pleasure to escape her. Both individuals felt incredibly relaxed now, and even more comfortable as they laid on her bed. Slowly, Ditzy moved herself over Mac's chest, holding onto him as she rested her head near his shoulder. "Don't go tonight..."

"Ah don't think Ah could, even if Ah wanted to..." He replied with a small smile, moving an arm around her protectively. He held the blonde against him as both of them drifted to sleep. With the day off tomorrow, Ditzy had a feeling she would be waking up rather happily...