This is an update to what I am doing with this story. I have decided to cancel work on it. It's not that I cannot take criticism, in fact I greatly appreciate it. I just don't have the writing skills to do this the way I want to. I don't have the talent to make this story become a reality. I have the premise and the basic ideas for what I want to be done and how I want it to play out but that just isn't enough.
It greatly pains me to do this because of all the favorites, likes, and comments it received but I just cannot continue. I'm sorry if I let any of you down.
Any author is allowed to take the idea and improve upon it, because I, like many others, want to see a story like this made and finished.
Again, I am sorry.