Tip of the Scales

by TDR


Last Chapter

[ Finally ]

“So this is it?”Starfall asked.

“So help me if he named this place AGGGGH or Anthrax I will scream.” Bleu growled.

“While I do not pretend to understand that joke Bleu, the castle is simply named, Discord's Castle.” Luna stated

“Wait, that's it?”Rhede stammered.

“That is what he named it.” Luna admited.

“All this nonsense getting here and the castle is just Discord's Castle? Where is the creativity?” Bleu ranted.

“To be fair all the stories i've heard about the mad king didn't paint him as nameing much of anything he did.” Platinum offered.


“Honestly Bleu that is quite creative. Every one expects some strange or complex name and then, BAM , he makes it so simple it seems crazy. Truly a master of the mind screw.” Rhede noded sagely.

“While I am so glad you have developed an appreciation of him Rhede lets just go in and get the book and go home.” Jer'rahd muttered in annoyance.

“I second that “Starfall grumbleed.

Velkorn nods her agreement as well.


That bit was all I had written on this in over a year. If you read it you'll see it was pretty much a retelling of the main story with just some of Bleu's lines swapped fo Platinums.

The following are the entirety of compiled notes I had for this series.


Platinum survives, becomes element of laughter.

Scarlet incident never happens though rhede finds out they plan to take out platinum as a warning for Jer'rahd to stop making waves. Jer'rahd forces Rhede to inform him of where they are, brings the rest of the group including Luna and trashes the place. Survivors arrested as rhede hoofs over the full list of names.

Scarlet vanishes to parts unknown.

Plat Marries jer'rahd, then the wall gets destroyed as the Dragons start to move in.

Plat trains more in combat magic as head of Celestia's school, gets the other students to do the same, because of this they all survive the griffon attack

Story stays mostly the same from that pointwith Bleu acting as tank to Platinum's support, only Platinum goes along with Jer'rahd and Luna to the ritual.

Beast manafests but Platinum can control it too.

Platinum starts to go mad but Luna and Jer'rahd talk her down with the help of Bleu.

Platinum gains powers akin to discord though more focused on song as she becomes something of a proto siren gaining a few scales and other features matching Jer'rahd's changes with some what prettier ones.

Cindervale is never fully destroyed though the dragon population is severly decimated. Silver claw survives as well after a fight with Bleu leaves him far more hurt than he expected. He is turned to stone as well, though he is later freed and reasoned with after Cindervale is falls. He's turned over to Cindervale and the flame party is snuffed out.

NLR happens after aqua is destroyed, something Platinum enjoys far more than she should. Platinum and her powers work damage control and the waves and storms that destroyed most of the coast don't happen.

Equestrian civil war almost happens but Luna has been tempered by her experiences with platinums decent into madness so she stops herself from going to far. Many of those in the garden are exacuted by the LR that Celestia couldn't bring herself to kill.

The sisters reconcil , but they don't co rule any more and Equestria is split between the two kingdoms despite being one nation still. Despite this the LR still keeps both sides safe viewing Celestia's equestria as what things should be like in a perfect world.

After Cindervale, the griffon gods and neighlantis fall , no nation wants to go up against Equestria. If negotiations fail with Celestia's side the LR is more than willing and quite capable of taking care of any one starting shit as the yaks and harpies soon find out..

Rhede and Velkorn do marry and Starfall reunites with her daughter favorably.

Celestia and Baelit also hook up and have Zecora/sunshine


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one thousand years later Celestia is teaching Twilight when Luna shows up with a pair of foals

Fluttershy and RBD both orphans, one that can talk to animals and the other that did the rain boom.

Luna claims to have found a similar filly in ponyville who had been declared missing and was found being pulled along by her horn to a massive crystal formation

Jer'rahd and Platinum are looking into where the other two might be and what danger might be coming that the elements are gathering.

Mild disuscusion about the pair and their foals before luna mentions finding two other books of Orbsah and securing them in the darklands.

Discord pops up is trounced, talked to, trounced again, and he finally relents when his plans to get harmony blasted are no longer needed.

Discord takes platinum as a student much to every ones annoyance, though Jer'rahd is slightly less annoyed when Plat is put in a neighponise school girl outfit.

Main threat is revealed as Aviana, is curb stomped in about 30 seconds by Luna, Discord Adult bleu Jer and Platinum mid speech.gets blasted with elements of harmony and vaporized ala Sombra.

Sombra is negotiated with and he and Chrysaliss are allowed to be free but both are kept under close watch.

Tirek never gets the drop on Jer'rahd because plat is watching his back and she's gotten a lot less weak after all these years.

Celestia teases Luna about making the three of them a herd. Jer is confused but plat is all for it much to lunas annoyance and celes delight so she can be the fun aunt.

End with Dawn[ luna] and Coral[ plat] being born and Jer having a freak out.