MLP - New Game Plus Postmortem

by Reizthefakebrony


Clockwork Lesson

Rotatory abilities:
DNA Twister
Plasma Cannon
Ryu Hayabusa's Abilities

By the way, I had forgot it.

3)Face Palmer: A dark-azure gauntlet which functions consist into shooting face palms like wave of energy, striking its target with unexpected power, great impact in the most undignified way possible.

Fixed now.


I am Allen Nitrol, former student, former Iron Ghost and an actual resident in Equestria. For days I had hidden my identity and my feud with the Granite Daggers, or at least the alternative ones. I didn't had said a word about it and I had even corrupted Iron Lilly in every considerable way, for the good cause.

And now I was found out and sent into a dungeon... Because of Discord.

Two days passed since then and I was behind the bars, with Celestia and Luna on the other side. I had explained my situation and the identity of my enemies to them. Needless to say, the Royal Guards had installed multiple magical crystals that, according to them, should contain my powers. I don't know if that works, but I am sure as hell that they retrieved my bag with all of my stuff.

And that's bad, because I cannot explain anything about videogame logic or even how I had obtained the Freezing Gauntlets.

"You are really full of secrets for somepony called Violet Tower... Allen," Celestia said coldly. "I don't even know how to feel about your past actions."

"Killing Twilight by mistake and resurrecting her as a seemingly normal like undead creature," Luna said. "That is indeed very chilling."

"Until we had decided what to do with you," Celestia said. "You will stay in this cell. Also, seriously, you are the one who had attracted those cultists, corrupted our lieutenant and others, killed and resurrected other two ponies by mistake, accidentally founded a cult of Diamond Dogs, almost destroyed Equestria during the encounter with Discord and caused what other incident. Do you have anything to say?"

"I won't complain about being tossed into jail," I said. "But I don't think you will have much chance with my enemies."

"In fact I have something in mind for you," Celestia turned around. "Until then, you will remain here for an undetermined time until I decided your fate. Sleep well, Allen."

"You had practically asked for it," Luna remarked.

After that, they leaved me alone in my cell, with only two guards at their post. This new life couldn't get any worse than that. At least I could sleep without any worries, except that Equestria was now defenseless.

"Well... Fuck." I murmured. "At least I wasn't killed by Jared Leto's Joker."

At least I have my ninja abilities, something that they weren't able to confiscate. I would be a utter bastard, but just because I was bored, I would had turned invisible.

But then, the sound of an explosion coming from somewhere in the dungeon happens.

"What happened!?" One of the guards exclaimed.

"Let's find out!" The other guard said.

Without even thinking, they leaved the post to investigate. I exploited this moment to transform into a bird, turned invisible and followed them. I traversed the entire castle with them until I had arrived into a hall devastated by black flames.

It was high alert time. I continued to fly around the halls to find some hints about the culprit but without results. I guessed that he would had escaped into Ponyville, so, as much as I hate commit jailbreak, I leaved the castle, returned visible and turned into a pegasus.

It took me a Friendship Express and one day, but I managed to reach Ponyville. I was wandering in the outskirts, but not before returning back to normal. I was pondering about where the culprit, possibly another Granite Dagger's member, could be when I saw a crazy Twilight trying to give a ragged doll to the Cutey Mark Crusaders.

"Gr-eat. Just great." Twilight said crazily. "You three look like you're doing great too! Looks like three good friends who obviously don't need the help of another good friend. This is Smarty Pants. She was mine when I was your age, and now I want to give her to you!"

I turned myself invisible, knowing the effects of the doll. Twilight doesn't know what to do when it was about trying to find another friendship problem that she can solve before the end of the week. I feel sorry for her, especially for her own conditions.

But in that moment, I idly know what to do, so I approached her and, just for troll factor, I kicked her leg, making her stumble and fall on her legs, much to the shock of the Cutey Mark Crusaders.

But it was too late as Twilight had already cast the spell that makes the doll irresistible. The ragged doll fell to the ground as well. Twilight took three seconds to acknowledge my presence.

"Allen!?" Twilight exclaimed. "How did you escaped the jail?"

It was supposed to be a brief troll to convince her to not do that, but then something weird happened. As I returned visible, the doll suddenly comes to life, developed fingers on it's hands... And FLIPPED THEM ON ME!

Pissed, I leaped toward to the doll with all my fury. What followed it's even weirder, like the doll returned to be fingerless and lifeless, and I ended up falling on it as one blue maned green pony suddenly appeared, which was another shock for the other four ponies.

"Long time no see, Allen." The green pony said.

Wait... I recognize this voice and ability to possess the objects.

"Noirax." I said coldly.

"That's right. And now that I-" Noirax was then interrupted by the Cutey Mark Crusaders standing in his way. "Hey, what the?"

"I want you!" Applebloom said.

"I need you!" Sweetie Bell said

"Let me cares your mane!" Scootaloo said.

"S-stop it! I'm not a fricking doll, you idiots!" Noirax bellow as he raised his hoof and tried something, but nothing happened.

In that moment I remembered his weakness, which marked his mistake: He can use the black flames of death only eleven times for day and he consumed them all. Noirax was probably the most reckless and pathetic member of the cult. And to make things worst for him, all the inhabitants of Ponyville, except the Mane Six who had just gathered one second ago, were fighting over him. Some of them were even keeping him as a poor hostage.

And I had realized to have forgot to take back the bag with all my stuff.

"Dammit!" I exclaimed.

"Y'all hear that? What in the name of all things oats 'n apples is goin' on here?!" Applejack then looked at me. "And why is Allen here!?"

"Don't look at it!" Twilight said.

"Don't look at what?" Rarity asked confused.

"My Smarty Pants doll! I enchanted her in the same time Allen made me fall!" Twilight said. "But then something strange happened. That green pony over there suddenly appeared and was about to fight him until everypony arrived and started to fight over him! But why!?"

"The effect of the spell were probably transferred on him," I explained. "It sucks to be him in this moment."

"LET ME GOOO!!" Noirax roared.

"Why would you enchant your doll?" Fluttershy asked.

"Oh, I had to do something! I had nothing to report to Princess Celestia! I thought if I couldn't find a problem, I'd make a problem! The day is almost over!" Twilight said.

"Almost!" Applejack said and glared at me.

"I am resistant to being brainwashed, so it has no effect on me," I informed.

"But why that pony doesn't react," Rainbow Dash asked.

"Because-" I was interrupted.

"TWILIGHT SPARKLE! ALLEN!" Celestia's voice said from somewhere.

"Oh, shit," I murmured.

As predicted, Celestia appeared and nullifies the effects of the spell from Noirax, who was laying dizzied on the grass. I took my time to unleash multiple pillars of energy to finish him off, reducing him into black embers. Once again, I saved the day.

But that doesn't mean that I, and Twilight, weren't in trouble. And yeah, Big Machintosh can get the fucking doll as a reward for having resisted the spell.

"Meet me in the library," Celestia said. "Both of you."

In the following evening, Twilight explained her reasons behind her deeds and Celestia forgave her in exchange to let her friends to share their own friendship lessons.

As for me.

"Allen, I don't even know if send you in the Tartarus or thank you," Celestia said.

"I know." I said.

"However, I had reflected about you and took a decision," Celestia said. "In condition to become my agent, you will take your own belongings and being forgiven for your past actions."

"What?" I was confused.

"WHAT!?" Twilight exclaimed. "But he was the one who killed me and turned me into a zombie in the first place!"

"I know, but we have also to keep this individual in check," Celestia informed while facehoofing. "He's full of surprises."

"I only wish that he had never reached Equestria," Twilight said scornfully.

"I cannot do nothing about your conditions." Celestia said apologetically.

"In other words, I am still the villain." I said. "In one manner of speech."

I wonder how much this situation can continue in this way. And to be correct, that one with Noirax was a cheap fight. But the rest will not.


Next Level Up:-2

1)Planeswalker Spark: The owner becomes a Planeswalker with conditioned method of power.

2)Stand: A embodiment of the owner's spiritual energy.

3)Shadow Mantle: Allow the owner to manipulates the shadows, make it's own disappear and even hide inside that of the others.