Change: A New Dawn

by FlutterTwi


4 - Discord's Visit

I could hear voices mumbling around the room, but Dawn was unable to open her eyeslids no matter bow hard she tried even if she wanted too.

"Doctor Whooves, why is she not waking up!?" Vladimir said darting his nervous gaze towards he's girlfriend.

Dawn recognized that voice, her faithful Guard and current boyfriend Vladdy.

Doctor Whooves's facial expression had changed with concern in he's light cobalt blue eyes before returned his gaze towards the Guard.

"I may be out of line to say this Captain, but it was luck she fitted when she did as it saved her life."

"I've done a brain scan and it did show a bleed inside Dawn's brain. Which we ha have stopped but they maybe be the likehood of Dawn going blind in both eyes." The Doctor finished before pit down his chart.

Vladimir had to close his eyes and count to ten when he heard the Doctor says that Dawn's sudden fit had been perfect time as he resisted the urge to punch the earth pony Doctor in the face.

"Is that's you gave Dawn a powerful sleeping drug to help her with the pain she going throught." Vladimir asked The Doctor full calm now.

"She's... not is she!?" Queen Twilight ran into the room looking towards Dawn and then Vladimir as the Changeling Queen could only say these two words.

"No, Queen Twilight her body just needs time to recover is all but her spirit is another matter ." The Doctor said to her

"I'll go get Princess Luna and my brother they would wanted to see her."

"I'll stay with her Twi." Vladmir bowed his head in respectable towards Twilight.

"Vladmir have you rested yet?" Twilight asked her friend.

"I'm a bat-pony where creatures of the night, besides I can't sleep whilst Dawn's fighting for her life." Dawn said turning his gaze back towards the sleeping mare in the hospital bed.

"You do really love her, that much don't you." Queen Twilight stated to Vladimir with a small smile.

"Huh,I'm that see through?" Vladmir asked the Queen of Friendship who made quick nodded with her head confirming.

"Vlad, wearing your heart on your wing isn't a weakness, it shows great strength." Queen Twilight said before leaving the couple and given Vladimir some much needed quite time with Dawn who was still unconscious from the sleeping drug that Doctor.Whooves had given her.

"Please wake-up Dee-dee, sorry I wasn't with their for you much sooner, but I will from now on!" Vladimir said holding her hooves in his own firmly as he nuzzled her cheek softly. "Dawꪀa, why is thee here?" Princess Luna said her voice coming from across the room so softley that she almost missed her Auntie speaking.

"Dawꪀa‎'s thy is dreaming right now, this is thee first's time seening thy dream, as you only have power-naps during thy sister's day." Princess Luna said as she wing-hugged her supposed daughter who was really her niece.

"Auntie Muna, I wished I could wake up as Vladdy must be worried sick about right now!?." as Dawn felt herself awake from the drug she was under. "What happened to me and why can't I see any-pony?" Dawn says trying to remove her bandages from her eyes.

"Careful, Princess!" Vladmir stop her movement with his wing before she could hurt herself. Princess Luna came into the hoiptal room and nuzzled Dawn with her muzzle.

"Lulu, is that you I can't see?" Dawn said in a panic tone of voice. "

Moonlight, Moonlight" "Fireflies awake!" "Make A Wish" "And Do A Little Shake." They both sang there song after giggling togther in laughter.

"The rest of us our coming in now!" Pinkie Pie said looking very excited with herself as the Mane 6 followed her inside.


"Pinkie Pie, Dawn needs peace and quiet as she to rest for now." Vladdy said lowering his voice softly as to not wake Dawn up.

"I'm glad I have an audience actually, I have some big news I want to discuss with you all and it concerns Dawn."

"Is she dying?!" Fluttshy said with tears in her eyes.

"Don't be silly Fluttershy, Dawn is as strong as a diamond." Rainbow Dash said proudly.

"Sugarcube, you can tell us, whatever happens in this room stays in this room!" AJ promised, as the other ponies in the room agreed to keep it a secret.

"Twilight, could I ask for your sister's hoof in marriage, I don't attain to marry her now but sometime in the near future?" Captain Vladimir said firmly.

"Captain, you have my blessing to marry my B.L.S.F.F." Twilight said prancing up and down the hospital room with such joy.

A loud voice cut through the joyful celebration by saying "Bro, I love mares not stallions, so I can't marry you!"

Rarity squealed and then fainted on the floor in shock.




Dawnie, think with all you're past as it seems it's not done with you." "Discord, what brings you here?" "Well, Fluttershy forgot our weekly tea party and I thought that was a bit strange, so I asked her what was wrong?" "But she wouldn't give me any answers, so I had to use drastic measures."

"I tickled her underneath the wings, until she told me that you where in here!" Discord said pointing to the hospital bed. "I have enough chaotic power to restore your eyesight but you will be deeply scarred across your eyelids."

"Why would you do this for me, Discord?" "We can't have our main character in this My Little Pony story, blind now can we?" Discord said with a knowing smile "Excuse me?" "FlutterTwi's followers will think this story will end on a dark note." Discord said with a chuckle to himself.

"She created this whole universe, it took her awhile mind due, and I'm here to deliver a special chest for you and to bring back from foal-sitting did you forget?" Discord magically pulling out a chest and a young unicorn filly out of thine air.

"My fourth wall break is almost up!" said Discord with a snap of his claws he restored Dawn's eyesight and disappeared into a cloud of smoke.


"Oh Buck, why didn't she ask Princess Luna to make Vladdy to take a holiday, he could really do with one as he hasn't left her bediside for Oh My Luna how long?!" Dawn thought to herself heaving a fustrated sigh before Vladdy got up to get her something to eat.

There was another knock at the door but this time it wasn't Vladdy coming back with food, but a nurse pony earth mare coming in to check on her vital signs.

"Oh I'm sorry, I can come back later if you wish?" Vladimir said entering the room with a plate full of food he looked a little embarrassed with himself for not checking that somepony else would be in the room.

Everypony in this hospital should be easily fooled with X-59 's deception but he was a little unsure about Captain Vladimir. He would definitely smell a rat and might come after him as X-59 could practically taste the love energy coming off the Thestral for the unicorn mare sitting up in a hospital bed.

"The patient will be fine, she just needs plenty of rest." said the nurse pony in the most sickly sweet voice Vladimir had heard from anypony else before.

"Now, I must leave immediately other patients need my assistance." The Nurse pony told Vladimir and Dawn get ready to leave the room.

"Wait, what's your name?" Asked Captain Vladimir approaching the nurse pony.

"Nurse Redbird, at your service!" she said with a small smile.

"Thank you, for taking very good care of Dawn, I appreciate it more than you know." Vladimir said before walking away from Nurse Redbird and towards Dawn's bedside to planted a kiss on her forehead.

"Fuck this is harder then I thought it was going to be said the Changeling assassin when he was out of earshot of everypony. He needed to come up with another plan to take Dawn with him.



The rest of the mane six had came back a little later as Vladimir had told them that the nurse said she need some more rest.

"I'm glad I have an audience actually, I have some big news I want to discuss with you all and it concerns Dawn."

"Is she dying?!" Fluttshy said with tears in her eyes.

"Don't be silly Fluttershy, Dawn is as strong as a diamond." Rainbow Dash said proudly.

"Sugarcube, you can tell us, whatever happens in this room stays in this room!" AJ promised, as the other ponies in the room agreed to keep it a secret.

"Twilight, could I ask for your sister's hoof in marriage, not now but sometime in the near future?"

"Captain, you have my blessing to marry my B.L.S.F.F." Twilight said prancing up and down the hospital room with such joy.

A loud voice cut through the joyful celebration by saying "Bro, I love mares not stallions, so I can't marry you!"

Rarity squealed and then fainted on the floor in shock.

Rarity had then just woken up and then fainted again, that Twilight had to get her a pillow for her head.

"WHERE IS SHE!!!" Vladimir said as he was barely holding in his temper with The Solar Guard Crystal Pegasus.

"I don't know, I went to check in her room but was knocked me out and was put on this bed!" The Sun Pony said looking a little bit terrified of Vladimir.

"Why would Dawn suddenly leave the hospital room without anybody noticing?" asked Pinkie Pie.

"I know, let's ask Discord I actually told him why I couldn't make our tea party today." Fluttershy said sheepishly.

"you told Discord!?" everypony shouted out in surprise.

"Now, now, don't be mad at Fluttershy, I did tickle torture her until she told me!" Discord said coming to Fluttershy's defence.

"What happened, when you visited Dawn a few hours ago, because she's not here now!" Fluttershy asked him politely then her other friends.

"Fluttershy, I only restored her eyesight and then I left."

"I'm not a monster despite what you ponies think of me!"

"You can do that?!" Queen Twilight was flabbergasted for once.

"I am The Lord Of Chaos, I can do anything!"