Equestrian Fanfiction

by Lise


Jade’s New Story

@Jade: I hate you! How dare you make my Squishy cry?!

RRBB

Huh?

PaintDrop

Who did what? What happened?

MightyDragon

@Short&Hoofy, @RRBB: What’s going on? Are you girls alright?

YouKnowWho

Everypony, I’m fine. RRBB decided to be overdramatic and caused a chaotic mess as usual :/

Jade posted a new story which is really good and I happen to comment to RRBB how far ahead in skill he was. I didn’t expect her to go all crazy and complain on the forum! :I

@Jade, don’t listen to her. I love you and your latest story is incredible. How on earth did you come up with something of the sort? You’ve always been an exceptional writer, but this time your idea is remarkable as well.

Short&Hoofy

@RRBB: You scared me to Tartarus, you *yay*! I thought something serious had happened and was on my way to dash over there!

Stars on a stick, don’t do that! I almost did something drastic and stupid!

Now I must read the story, though.

YouKnowWho

@Short&Hoofy: Simile helped me with the idea. Max went to spend some time with LyraHands, so I went to visit LightSparkle with Simile. Ideas were discussed and I ended up writing this. It needs a few more edit passes, but I’m happy how it turned out.

@RRBB: I’m too tired to go on a rant right now, so use your imagination to think of one!

Jade

@Jade: Your fic is horrible. Horrible! You okay for me to dream it at some point? :)

RRBB

@RRBB: Don’t make me give you a preemptive ban.

Be thankful that Short&Hoofy dealt quickly with the situation and didn’t let it escalate. (I’d also like to thank Jade, for being surprisingly level headed as well.) I am aware this is the aethernet, but needless drama is needless.

That said, I think the story is magnificent and will gladly use it to test the text to scroll functionality. I must admit that it’s very different from Jade’s usual style, which makes it a welcome surprise. If you manage to capture the spirit of MC like this in your other stories, and execute it in your usual fashion, you’re that much closer to getting published somewhere.

Well done!

The TechNightling

I agree with Short&Hoofy’s sentiments. I was starting to like my writing, and now I feel like the first day I posted... *sniffle*

Will you write more in that universe?

Candle

@Jade: umm... yeah... well. Please mentor me! Like, I know DarkSparkle has been complaining and never has the time, but I really can do better. Like, we see each other every day anyway, so why not help me get better? (I’m starting to feel Twist’s pain editing me, even if yeh story is awesome.)

AwesomePony

Can someone say what the story is about? I mean it’s cool and all, but I’m not in a mood for reading right now, but don’t want to feel left out.

Someone spill!

Feather

It’s the story of a character (Unknown if pony or human) that changes form each time he hiccups. On the bright side, he only starts hiccuping when nervous or after eating radishes. Oh, and by changing form I mean transforms from human to pony (his clothes remain as is).

What’s more he’s in Molly’s music band (as a drummer) so he also gets involved in her adventures fighting Felina Corp. what I like the most is the love triangle between him, Molly, and Caprice... and since we don’t know what his original form is we can’t tell which is the OTP!

It’s really good (apart from 7 typos) Go read it!

RRBB

I approved this past curation. It’s magnificent.

@YouKnowWho: that’s the story I told you about this morning (before you got all huffy :))

Plust

@AwesomePony: I could, but I don’t want to destroy your ego. Remember our long mails about DDDA? If I become your mentor you can expect more of that... on a good day.

I’d really like for you to improve, because you have firsthoof experiences I could only dream of, but I don’t want to destroy you in the process. Are you sure you’re up for it?

Jade

Hey! My middle name is Ready!

AwesomePony

@AwesomePony: go you! :)))

YouKnowWho

@AwesomePony: that’s the fifth middle name I’ve heard you use. But I think it suits you just like the rest.

Everypony, I’d like to apologize to you all. This is difficult, and I don’t want to hijack the thread, but I feel if I don’t say it now I’ll find another excuse not to talk about it at all.

I’ve had a death in the family. I know that’s no excuse for the way I behaved, but it’s been difficult for me, mostly to come to grips with what I’m feeling right now. Thank you for being so patient with me and making me feel at home here.

Please don’t send me PMs or comment on this. I just wanted to let you know. I expect to be fine in a while.

@WaterBottle: thank you for keeping my secret. You’re the best friend I could hope for.

@AwesomePony: you were right :)

Twist

...I did not see that coming.

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: Banned!

RRBB

@MightyDragon: Banned!

AwesomePony

@MightyDragon: Fired!

SaltyHuman

@MightyDragon: Banned!

Bob

@MightyDragon: Divorced!

CodeFilly

@MightyDragon: Banned with prejudice!

LightSparkle

@MightyDragon: :) Thanks. That made me smile.

Twist

See, everyone? Now we have a new twist! Eh? Eh? :D

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: I pride myself with being understanding and a protector of the unjustly trampled, but even I find it difficult not to agree with them. It pains me to say that your puns are as poor as your writing.

The TechNightling

I... just... I’m going to bed. Or maybe I’ll write something. @MightyDragon, you’re on your own!

@AwesomePony, @Twist: let’s meet up around four? Would be nice to talk a bit literature and prepare you for what’s coming.

Everyone else, thanks for your comments. And yes, there will be a sequel.

Jade

I like sequels about boys...

Brush