Equestrian Fanfiction

by Lise


Sudden Change

Well that was fast… A day after the plushie thread and already a 20k story on the subject. And it's good too! @Quarters, I have no idea how you manage it, but you are *yay* good! Just own small comment: the story is great, but you didn't use an editor and it shows in part. It passes, of course, but having read your previous stuff, I know how much better you could get. I'd help, but I think I'll be a bit busy in the months to come.

@Twist, @Feather: Could any of you help out?

RRBB

I read it this morning! It's sooo cuuute! I cried so hard when Danny plushie jumped to protect his owner and got torn in half.

There must be a sequel! There just must be!

I even wrote a song about it. I'll try to record and post it later today (if my fat sister gives me any privacy :/).

SweetStuff

Hmm? Which story is that? I've been a bit out of things largely and sounds likeI missed this one. Are we talking about Danny being transformed into a plushie? Or a plushie of Danny coming to life?

LyraHands

@LyraHands: For shame! Do you even read your site anymore? And you call yourself a Nightling? :P

The story is called Human Within and the nature of the plushie is never actually revealed. All we know is that it's a gift to the OC from her mother (again no name mentioned) and things just go on from there. It's a very good story, a sort of adventure comedy that keeps you reading on and on. The only faults are that it could have used an editing pass, as RRBB mentioned.

@Quarters: I can talk to Jade to have a look if you're okay. Let me know.

MixaMax

I'm sure that the mother is Caprice! Her name and cutie mark are never mentioned, but she's a Pegasus that had the same coat and mane as Caprice. It has to be her!

I'm more curious is the dragons are working for a corporation or someone else entirely. They reacted upon seeing the plushie for the first time. Also, one of Twinkle’s friends in school also made a strange comment. I'm convinced that this is a future gen and we’ll have the the children of the grand9 appear :)

PrinceEric

@PrinceEric: hate to break it to you, but the story is marked complete.

RRBB

Did you know that two new writes have accepted offers to replace MC veterans? That brings the total number of the new wave of authors to 5.

Also, there's a rather large interest in plushies on Earth. At present bunnies are the most favored, but by this time next month ponies might have overtaken them.

Speculator7

@MixaMax: Jade has already read the story and given feedback to the author. Jade is also annoyed that you have been staying late again this week. :/

Jade

Oooh! Somepony will be sleeping in the barn tonight :P (And don't even think of using your sister to crash at my place! You messed up, you'll suffer the consequences!)

RRBB

Wow, this was good! And I think that the plushie might be the Everprince. Although it has Danny’s appearance, the mannerisms are very different. Knowing Quarters’ eye for detail I doubt that's an accident, editor or not.

@Speculator7: Lol! Pony plushies in a world of humans. Not impossible, but it sounds hilarious. Though, I wouldn't mind Cassandra having a plushie of me O:)

LyraHands

@SweetStuff: did you ask you fat sis about making plushies?

RRBB

@RRBB: I did… and for a moment it was good… until she started asking me and ForceFeedback what I thought about this model and that model and… argh! Can I please move to Canterlot already?!

SweetStuff

Thank you all. This was just a short to reduce built up school tension. Initially I didn't want to post it, but a few friends told me I should. I am aware that it hasn't been edited. I myself only went through it twice and in rapid succession.

I'm surprised at the amount of ponies who liked it. If I'd known i’d probably make it longer, but with project Butterfly resuming soon, I think I'll leave it for later.

A huge thanks to all. (You too, Miss Cheerilee :))

Quarters

@SweetStuff: ForceFeedback and I. :P Can you get her to make me a Danny? Oh and a Daring Do?

YouKnowWho

@Jade: No, bby, it’s not my fault! We're still dealing with the Windigo situation and you wouldn't believe the amount of bureaucracy involved. I'll be back on time today, honest! … please make some of that mushroom stew I love? O:)

@RRBB: Ha! Good one. I've not fallen so low as to ask you for a place to stay! And I won't be sleeping in the barn!

MixaMax

@Quarters: nice fic. Not your best, but the idea has a certain char, to it. I'm sure when you get to the sequel it will be great. And if no one has agreed to help you out with editing I will :)

Just for the record I had a pony plushie when I was a filly. There's nothing odd in that.

LightSparkle

@RRBB: She's right. We don't have a barn.

Short&Hoofy

There is no barn! The barn is a lie!

MightyDragon

Hmm I wonder. Technically, I think I could animate a plushy. It won't be anywhere as complex as the real thing, but quite more advanced that the usual dolls on sale. :D

The more I think about it the more fun it sounds. @RRBB: have you considered doing puppet shows? Or should I say “plushie shows”? No idea if there's any appeal, but the idea sound cute :)

LyraHands

Dear all,

I will be inactive for the near future. I'm sorry I can't share my reasons, but i can assure you this isn't a mood swing or fancy. It is yet unknown if I will return.

Be safe, and thank you.

DarkSparkle