A bat in pony fur

by Germanbrony2001


The fastest bat on earth

Rainbow Dash flew through the endlessly seeming corridors of the old castle. After a half hour of search, she begun to feel annoyed. Where in this Celestia forsaken Place were this Pegasus. She continued searching until she found a chamber its ceiling covered with bats. Mysteriously this chamber was lit even if the rest of the castle was abandoned 1000 years ago. Rainbow Das walked into the chamber because there might be Fluttershy in. Her entrance hadn’t gone unnoticed. Out of nowhere she couldn’t move. She could fell the Stare. This made her confuses. Only Fluttershy could do the Stare. But why would Fluttershy, the kindest pony in Equestria, do the Stare on Rainbow? “You may wonder why you can’t move.” Said a familiar but deeper voice.

“Fluttershy?”Asked Rainbow puzzeld.

“Yes and no, Dashie. I am your friend but better. And I want to shear this gift with all of our friends.” Stated Flutterbat as she stepped into the light. Rainbow realized with fear Fluttershy was looking again like a week ago during the Vampire-Fruit-Bat incident. Except she had now an evil grin on her. Rainbow tried to look away from the beautiful eyes of the Vampire the key word “tried”. The were to beautiful to her. Shortly after this she felt pain at her neck but she didn’t care. The only thing important to her was those beautiful eyes. She could hear a choir of angles. „Open your mouth.” Rainbow open her mouth. She had followed a command from her mistress! She could feel a smooth fur at her lips and a liquid. “Drink!” She gorged every drop of the copper tasting Liquid. It tasted wonderful. She felt tired. „Sleep!“ Rainbow Dash complied this command with joy, It was her last „free“ thought. She sank to the ground and fell asleep ASAP.

Flutterbat was pleased. She had expected more resistance from Rainbow. She wouldn’t complie of course. She looked at her first servant. She slept peacefully. So she was improved, too. It was hard to stop her inner desire. She had to do better next time. She had nearly killed her. She want to improve her friend not kill them. But she would rest before she would improve  the next of her friends, Fluuterbat hung herself with her tail on the ceiling and considered who of her friends she should improve next.

Outside had Lunas ‘night begun. The 4 remaining ponies were still waiting for the old castle. “Okay. Two of our friend are in an old, dark and abandoned castle. Most likely is there a monster, who has captured them. We should split up and search for them.” Said Pinkie Pie. The other nodded in approval and split up.

But after a long time of searching they didn't found Fluttershy nor Rainbow Dash. "Ah think we won't find them, Twi. Ah think we should call it a day." Appeljack said even if she wanted not. They had to go to Ponyville before the big predators came out.

"I know but I don't want to abandon them. It was my fault after all." Twilight whined.

"It wasn't your fault, darling. You couldn't see this was coming." Rarity tried to calm Twilight down.

"Tomorow is another day. Then we will find them." Pinkie Pie said. They could hear a howl. They tried their best to come as fast as their hooves could carring them to Ponyville.