Rose's Broken Soul

by MorningRose


Dangerous Ability

After what seemed like an eternity but was really only twenty minutes Twilight started to awaken. As Twilight opened her eyes the first thing she noticed was Immortalia watching her with a smile on her face. Twilight looked directly into Immortalia's eyes and asks " Immortalia, what happened? I failed didn't i?"

Immortalia let out a giggle as she says " Twilight, you and rose have passed the final trial with the highest of honors. For you see the Trial of Sacrifice is a trick trial to see if both the trial taker and the trial watcher would be willing to sacrifice themselves for the other. I have also already made Rose Immortal and healed both her and your wounds. Finally there may be a side effect of Rose becoming immortal but i leave that to you, so go and live a happy life with your true love."

Twilight noticed that as soon as Immortalia was finished she felt incredibly at peace with herself and the world. She closed her eyes for a minute so she could enjoy the feeling. When Twilight next opened her eyes she found herself back in the empty meadow.

Once she realized where she was she looked at her hoof and noticed that the spot where the metal from the train had pierced her was healed. As Twilight stared in amazement at her former wound she remembered what happened. As soon as she remembered she spread her wings and flew to the hospital at a speed that would make even Rainbow Dash envious.

Five minutes later Twilight was in front of the hospital. Twilight walked into the hospital and went straight to the room Rose was in. Once she reached the door she knocked three times. After a second she received a come in from Rose. Twilight took a deep breathe to calm herself then walked into the room.
Rose upon seeing Twilight says " My TwiTwi. I was so worried about you. Also please don't ever risk yourself for me again. By the way I remember everything that happened in that place. Including the part where we told each other our true feelings. But since that wasn't this realm I think we should admit it to each other in this realm to make it official, so I'll go first. I love you with all my heart Twilight Sparkle. Will you be my marefriend?"

Twilight stunned that Rose remembered the other realm says "Rose i love you too with all my heart. Yes i will be your marefriend if you will be mine?"

Rose excitedly answers "I guess we are marefriends. Also you can come out Pinkie. I know your there."

Pinkie walks in to the room with her normally poofy hair deflated and says " Aww how did you know i was there Rose. I wanted to surprise you. By the way the doctor says you can leave now."

Rose giggled then turns serious and says " I know this is going to sound weird. However weird it is going to sound I'm going to tell you. For some reason ever since i woke up i have been able to sense everyponies personal inner magic. Whether they are Earth, Unicorns, Pegasi or Alicorns. I don't know why but it only works with in a fifteen hooves radius. Just don't tell anypony. Because i have a feeling if everypony finds out somepony will try to make me disappear."

Twilight upon hearing what Rose had just said says in a scared tone of voice " Rose i need you to close your eyes and focus on your own magical presence. After you do that i want you to tell me what you see. I once read a book that was restricted and locked so that only Celestia could open it. Well one day about a year before i was sent to find the elements Celestia unlocked it and let me read it. The book was just a story about a unicorn who on top of being skilled in magic had two abilities. The first was she could sense anypony's inner magic. The second one was she could if she focused on a pony's magic she could see their future. However if she used her second ability her life would be shortened unless it was her own future. I always thought it was just a story but because of you i now know it wasn't."

Rose after hearing what Twilight said had a feeling that she was hiding something from her. Rose then closed her eyes and focused on her inner magic. As she got a very focused on it she started to see something. At first she saw Ponyville. Blurry at first but as she focused she saw it clearly along with a pony. As the pony got clearer she saw that it was a Pegasus colt of about 16 with a snow white coat and green wings and a black mane and tail. His cutie mark was that of a needle and thread. Rose heard the Pegasus ask " Are you Rose?" She then heard herself say " Yes i am. What can i do for you."

The Pegasus then answers with big hopeful eyes " My name is Six Strings and i heard a rumor in Canterlot that sixteen days ago you got your cutie mark and changed from a colt to a filly is this true?"

Rose heard herself say to the hopeful pony " Yes it is. Is there something i can help you with. You look like you are afraid to say something to me while at the same time you have this hopeful look in your eyes. Just know that no matter what you say i won't be mean or hurt you. I swear it as Celestia raises the sun."

Six Strings relaxes a little and says " The truth is i have always wanted to be a mare. However two weeks ago when i told my parent's and sister the truth my parent's threw me out calling me a freak and monster. My sister Crystal Gem chased after me and said that i should go to Canterlot and ask about Morning Rose. At first no one knew anything but a day later i was walking past the castle when i bumped into somepony. I apologized for not paying attention and we walked together for a while. When he asked my name i told him my name is Six Strings and i was looking for Morning Rose. He was surprised that i was looking for you. He said that Morning Rose was his sister and that his name was Slant Rhyme. He also told me where i could find you. He also told me what happened to you after i told him about me being thrown out for wanting to be a mare. By the way my true name is Threaded needle. What i needed to know was do you have a spell that can make my body match my soul?"

Rose heard herself say " No i don't. A spell like that currently doesn't exist. However after hearing your story i will create one. Meet me in front of the castle in a month's time. I should have it ready by then."

"Really? I mean no disrespect but can you really create such a spell so quickly. Even Star Swirl the Bearded took a year to create a new spell,"says Threaded Needle looking at Rose with a hopeful look in her eyes.

"Of course i can. However for it to work the Princesses will need to focus their magic and channel it into me so i can cast the spell without dying from magical exhaustion. I gotta go. I'll see you in a month's time," Rose heard herself say.

All of a sudden she stopped focusing on her inner magic and the vision stopped. As Rose regains her bearings she sees Twilight talking to her. Rose after shaking her head says " What was that TwiTwi? What did you say?"

Twilight looking concerned says " I asked if you were alright. You kind of zoned out for about Fifteen minutes."

I'm fine but you wont believe what i saw. It was amazing,"says Rose excitedly.