Equestrian Fanfiction

by Lise


Workshop Planning

Jade, when are you exams over?

LightSparkle

Last one is in three weeks. Why?

Jade

Why do you think? We have to start working on our project. Trust me, it takes a lot longer fleshing something out in than you might think. There will be lots of rewrites, so the faster we get started the better.

Will you be going on a honeymoon right after?

LightSparkle

Definitely not. Max has a lot of work in the next few months. Looks like we’ll be going the wearing here then I’ll move to Ponyville, at least for the immediate future. We’re still discussing where to settle down.

I thought you and Simile were working on ideas for the last month. Did something go wrong?

Jade

Other than my aunt and mother popping up, as well as some additional complications? Well, you can say that. Simile really can't keep her liquor. We managed to do literally nothing as far as Blazen is concerned. :/

LightSparkle

Hey, we talked a lot, okay! I bet we had lots of great ideas! I just need to remember them. It will happen, you can count on that.

Seriously, Jade, you should come visit Light next time. It's unimaginably cool! I know you're soon to be married, but that doesn't mean you can have some fun, am I right? If worst comes to worst you can always let her tag along.

Simile

Such professionalism :/

Jade, we didn't do *yay*. So, want to set a date to do this? Doesn't have to be face to face. Maybe something like a PM discussion every few weeks? After your exams are over (and only if you aren't distracted).

LightSparkle

Is everything alright, LightSparkle? You seem a bit different.

Jade

Yeah, it's like that time you saw WaterBottle at your door. You know, I can easily tell when you're freaked out and right now you seem really freaked out.

Something happen with your boyfriend? Did you have an argument with your friends?

Simile

Thanks for the vote of confidence, guys :/ And no, nothing happened. I’m fine, my friends are as crazy as ever (poking me for good MC fics every now and again) and my *yay* life is peachy. There is something, though…

I read the whole Chosen of Poseidon…and boy are we behind. :/ I mean, our idea is good (even the other 4 said so) but theirs is great. To make it worse they just built up and up from something…banal I would say. There's absolutely nothing flashy in the entire Chosen, yet each next chapter drags you in more and more adding a bit her a bit there until the final reveal when you go “huh?! I need to reread this!”.

We came up with one of the greatest ideas I've read (and I'm a curator) but we lack pretty much everything else. Jade you're great at writing, expression emotion, making any story stand on its own, but you've never done anything big. Simile is great at adventure and descriptions, but the characters could use some work even now. As for me…well, I'm pretty much a mess at everything, but have broad knowledge.

LightSparkle

Your mom saw your notes, didn't she? She saw them and made some nasty comments, right?


Simile

No, she didn't! And you you hadn't been freaking out all the time you were here you'd have noticed that I don't care what she thinks!

I just want us to be better and comparing things objectively we aren't. It's all fun and good that we're stream of consciousness writers, but detailed planning goes a long way. And I really want to start working on this.

LightSparkle

Well, I can start focusing on this after the exams. The wedding will be traditional, so it won't take more than a week. My parents have been doing ever since the Empire reemerged into Equestria. And unless she's looking for snugly Max is disastrously unromantic.

Jade

Well, it's never too late to change. AwesomePony still carries a flame for you and she also secretly writes poetry in her spare time. Completely terrible poetry, but full of emotion.

Simile

Can you please not mention that topic. Each time she sends me a PM I feel sad and guilty. I honestly hope she finds a significant other. I'm just not that one… And Max is the perfect one for me.

Going back to work schedules, I'll try to type something up. Are we still going with the old idea or are there some changes?

Jade

Old idea. Just let's get something done. Then we can tear it to shreds and change it. >:D

Sorry if I sound a bit off, just having WaterBottle run away from home and crash here stirred some memories. I'll get over it.

LightSparkle

Aww, poor wittle LightSparkle. Want a kiss? :P You know we're here for you.

By the way, is it true that another writer is thinking of retiring? Luna let it slip once so I think it might be true.

Simile

Are we supposed to agree or argue with you? :/

Jade

Agree, of course. So, do you think they ask Quarters to join? She’s quite good. And I'm not only talking about her published stuff. She send em a draft of something a while back, and even without the professional edits it was class A material. Almost as good as mine.

Simile

I doubt it. She's too young. Maybe in three four years if she hasn't moved on to other things. But yeah, it's a joy to have her on the site. I just hope she stays.

LightSparkle

Oh? So you know who she is in real life?

Jade

I do, and let's just say that she has reasons to want to be off the site. She shared them with me when we talked about her writing. I really can't go into any further detail, but please be nice to her. There are a lot of Nightlings with issues, and she's among those who could use a lot of hugs.

LightSparkle

Not to sound like the jerk, but I really need to get back to studying. Is there anything more for us to discuss?

Jade

I’m good. It's time for me to start getting ready for work anyway. Take care, girls!

Simile

Yeah, thanks for your time, and good luck with exams and work. I'll get back to curating stories…

LightSparkle